Ishra SS: Alaipayuthey..Pg 65 - KC spl completed - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly...sorry for late comment..!! just read ur whole ss in one go..!! truly it's such a beautiful and romantic ss..1!! From the starting how Raman answered back Subbu...and their first kiss..awww...all the teasing sessions were funny...then their first night...Raman's naughty brain./...everything was perfect..!! loved it..!! It was such a lovely ss/..!! plz do continue soon..!! and plz pm me whenever u update next..!! take care..!! thanx for pm./..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it. Could u pls PM me when u write the next chapter. Thanks
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Part 3

He parted a bit when she shifted a little in his hold,"kya hua?"

She smiled voicing, "I can hear our stomachs grumble Raman...aapne bhi teek se nahi khaaya, huh?"

"Matlab tum bhi..." her blush was evident while he teased her naughtily with his eyes as she nodded and replied, "tab bhook hi nahi laga...par ab..."

Raman grinned and reluctantly let go of her, "Even romance takes a second place before hunger, huh?"

Ishita nodded with a smile,"ab agar janaab ko harr waqt romance hi sooje toh khaana kab khaayenge...haan?"

He chuckled remembering their eye locking sessions while she went on to add, "but now, we eat, I mean really eat...sabse chupaake laayi hoom"

She said pointing to the plates on the table. He put his hand on her shoulder and lightly pushed her towards the food, "Iss dinner ko bhi romantic banaa saktha hoom...chalo"

She rolled her eyes at him and shook his head trying to understand his naughty intentions. They sat on the couch pulling the table closer. His intentions were more evident when he kept his plate away and gestured that he wants to eat from her plate. She moved closer to him but he winked naughtily and asked her to sit on his lap. She rolled her eyes and preferred to sit on the side. She voiced, "Agar wahaan beiti toh aaj yeh saara khaana waste ho jaayega..."

He pouted playfully and replied, "yeh toh naa insaafi hai Jhansi ki rani...maine socha tha ke starters se shuru karenge"

She forcefully fed him a piece of roti literally shutting his mouth and replied with a grin,"ab koyi starters nahi bas main course hai...khao aap..."

He took in the food and then replied, "chalo teek hai...dessert double le loonga"

She looked down into the plate blushing while he took a piece of roti from the plate and took it to her mouth looking at her intently. His teasing gaze made her blush more and his finger naughtily lingered on her wet lips, tracing an outline of it. She realized what he was doing and caught his hand in hers voicing, "aap rehne dho...main khud khaa loongi..."

She grinned as she fed him again and after that she didn't give him a chance for feeding her. Without a choice, he just had to restrict his romantic gestures. His eyes grazed her as she fed him while his hand roamed on her smooth contours at times. But she kept shrugging him off as she was losing focus when he did that. Her blush and resistance made him naughtier.

But as she was finishing off the plate, he glided his fingers over her creamy cheeks and said, "I am sorry Ishita"

She looked confused while he went on to explain how he had promised to himself that he would never bring Shagun between them, not even in his thoughts. But today it went out of his controls. He stopped explaining when he saw that her expressions weren't changing as he expected. With the same smile, she stood up and quickly cleared the plates off.

He was a little annoyed for sure because of her unexpected behaviour. What was she thinking? Didn't it affect her? Or was she angry?

Thinking all that, Raman washed his hands and walked into the balcony. He closed his eyes as anger soared inside him. He was angry on himself. It was such a beautiful romantic night but probably his thoughts about his past bitterness had poured a bucketful of ice cold water on all that. Why did he have to bring up his past at this moment?

Right then, he felt her hands moving around him and she hugged him from behind,"gussa ho?"

He replied, "nahi"

His tone clearly showed that he was damn furious and disturbed about it. She had to cool him down. She tried to joke with a grin, "baap re baap...itna gussa, huh???"

She knew that he wouldn't speak up so easily. So she added, "itna gussa aur woh bhi aapke Jhansi ki rani se??"

Instantly he replied, "tumse gussa nahi hoom...uss Sh..."

He stopped realizing his slip and then added, "khud se gussa hoom...I shouldn't have..."

He couldn't complete his words as she kept her fingers on his lips, "shhh...its ok"

Raman let a deep breath trying to compose himself, "kya tumhe bhoora nahi laga?"

She smiled, "haan bhi naa bhi..."

She went on to answer his confused look, "Shagun ke naam se bhoora nahi laga kyun ki mujhe patha hai ke zubaan main kisi ke bhi naam ho par iss dil mein sirf main hoom..."

She smiled blushing as she finished that. After a brief pause, she continued, "but yes, bhoora lagtha hai ke aap aise chote baaton pe itna gussa hote ho...its not good for you Raman"

Yes she was right in whatever she said as always. He should learn to forget everything related to Shagun and also control his temper but it wasn't easy.

Raman looked away replying, "Sometimes it goes beyond me Ishita...gusse ko control nahi kar paatha!"

She smiled as she replied, "jab bhi gussa aaye toh ek lambi saans lo and then 1 to 10 count karo...apne aap shaant ho jaavoge! Will you do it Raman?"

She shook him to hear his yes but he just posed a blank look and then asked, "it's not so simple!"

She nodded, "Yes it's not simple...its tough but never impossible...kuch bhi naa mumpkin nahi hai Raman...just think about us...did you even think that I will come into your life? Jab hum miley, kya aapne socha ke humaare beech aisa ek rishta bhi hoga? Humaara rishta, yeh pyar sab kuch impossible laga tha na? But look...we are together...we are in love...aise hi sab kuch possible hai"

Yes, he had to agree to that. He just nodded after a few seconds of deep thinking. She hugged him tightly.

But even as they hugged each other, she sensed that his body was stiffening against her hold for the very first time as if he wasn't here with her now and she realized that it was time she shifts his focus to her else he would remain entangled and confused in those thoughts. She instantly parted from him and he also freed her away but she had no intentions to leave him aloof like that.

She encircled her hands around his neck and pulled him closer boldly. Just inches separated their faces and she voiced, "Aapki dessert aapke saamne wait kar rahi hai aur aap usske orr dekh bhi nahi rahe...this is not done Raman"

Raman smiled at her naughty flirty comment. He knew that she was trying to switch the topic and revive the magical romantic night. He couldn't refuse his own desire either.

So he encircled her waist and replied gazing at her pink lips, "Bohat tempt kar rahi hai yeh special dessert...I cant wait to taste it...come"

Saying that, he took her inside...

Tauba Tumhaare Yeh Ishaare
Hum Toh Deewane Hai Tumhaare
Raaz Yeh Kaise Khol Rahi Ho
Tum Aankhon Se Bol Rahi Ho
Jaadoo Aate Hai Tumko Saare
Tauba Tumhaare Yeh Ishaare
Hum To Deewane Hai Tumhaare
Choolete Ho Taar Jo Dil Ke
Tum Hi Batao Tum Se Milke
Jaanu Dil Koi Kyon Na Hare
Tauba Tumhaare Yeh Ishaare

By the time, Raman bolted the balcony door and turned, Ishita was busily doing something at the table. On closer inspection, he saw two bowls of gulab jamun. He went behind her unannounced but she was anyways expecting him. So she wasn't startled but just jerked a bit when he almost crash hugged her from behind nuzzling into her hair and placing a deep kiss after moving aside her soft long hair.

Jism damakta jadu jadu, zulf ghaneri khushbu khushbu

Saase hamaree mehkee mehkee, nazre tumharee behkee behkee

Tumhara badan hai jaise chaman, hosh uda dey yeh nazare

Tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh deewane hai tumhare

Raaz yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

Jadu aate hai tumko sare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

He huskily voiced teasing her sensitive skin, "Mere dessert ke baare mein bhool gayi, huh?"

She smiled as she took one of the bowls, "How will I forget that? See what I made for you"

He peeped at the bowl in mock anger, "kya? Yeh gulaab jamun???"

He breathed in the scent of her soft lustrous hair seductively making her warm up as well. She felt a tingle all through her as he did that. He added, "main toh kuch aur expect kar raha tha..."

She composed herself and replied to tease him, "accha? Par main toh isi dessert ke baare mein bol rahi thi...aapki favourite sweet hai na??"

In a quick action, he swirled her around once and instantly caught her back in his arms, "favourite tha...ab mera favourite kuch aur hai"

His eyes travelled down to her lips as he said that. She turned her face away when he came closer. He voiced in annoyance, "yeh toh cheating hai...kuch kehke tempt kardiya aur ab kuch aur dene waali ho, huh?"

She blushed and lowered her gaze while his palm went to caress her cheeks. His fingers were teasing her senses with its seductive play on her cheeks and they also stretched onto her ear lobes. She closed her eyes and tilted her head almost resting into his palm in the effect he stirred in her. He grinned as he continued his romantic teasing and voiced, "tum bohat smart hogayi ho Ishita...You exactly know what to do to distract me and also cool me down!"

She opened her eyes and replied, "Main toh humesha se hi smart thi..."

He instantly replied, "par aaj tak laga nahi..."

She gave an instant reply lightly poking into his chest with her nails, "mujhe bhi toh patha nahi tha ke iss khadoos Raavan ke andhar itna romantic dil chupaa hai!"

He caught her fingers pretending pain, "Ho madrasan, it hurts"

She looked at his chest in concern and caressed the spot to ease the pain but then his naughty wink made her realize that he was just acting. He added, "agar dard kam karna hi hai toh..."

She didn't let him complete his demand but just leaned forward and kissed his chest gently as if to soothe the pain. And then voiced slowly, "I want to take away all your pains Raman..."

He melted and was touched by that gesture of hers and also the words but then his naughty side instantly showed up and he bent down to her lips replying, "That's easy...you just have to..."

His words trailed off and she looked up enquiringly to see him very close to kissing her. She chuckled and kept her fingers on his lips,"Pehle yeh waala.." and brought the dessert bowl between them.

He hissed and threw back his head thinking about how she remembered about the sweet even between their romantic moments. Pushing her hand aside, he replied faking anger, "yeh nahi chahiye...pehle woh dho jo promise kiya tha"

She smiled at his child like stubbornness and complained, "aap bhi na Raman...maine itne pyar se banaaya hai aur aap hai ke usske taraf dekh bhi nahi rahe hai!"

He grinned naughtily and replied in a husky voice. His eyes were only gazing her lips, "What to do? Tumaare saamne yeh sab meeta pheeka padh jaatha hai"

She blushed at his intense gaze but then chuckled hearing his filmy dialog and replied, "awww itna pyar karthe ho aap mujhse??"

"Tumhe ab bhi shaq hai, huh? Then I have to prove it"

Ishita nodded "Yes" and before he did anything at all, she added, "Eat this and tell me how it is..."

He shook his head amused. His naughty mind had already decided what to do. He almost snatched the bowl from her hands and before she could react, took a scoop and pushed the spoon into her mouth. She had no choice but part her lips and take it in. He fed her 2-3 spoons without a break and then in an instant, he kept the bowl down and gripped her shoulders firmly and claimed her lips with his. Neither did he ask her anything nor give her a chance to escape or deny this pleasure to him. He just took whatever was rightfully his and also knew that deep within her, she also wished the same.

The sudden gesture of his wasn't expected by her. She arched back into the warm support of his hands by the impact of his passionate kiss.

He savoured her and sucked in the sugar and ghee smeared on her lips. The sweetness only seemed to increase with each moment. Her own flavour was adding to the taste and he couldn't stop relishing it!

His expressions showed his appreciation for the delicacy she was offering. Her eyes were closed but then she knew that he loved it as his demand for more of it only kept increasing. Her hands automatically went around his neck and she clung to him for support. She was melting into him each passing second. His hands caressed her slender frame and settled on her waist. He lifted her slowly into his arms. Her faint protests to stop him went vain. His lips never released her and all her denials went unvoiced.

The passionate encounter took away all her senses and she felt that she would die in the sweet pleasure he was bestowing on her. Soon his lips found their way to the saree pin and she never realized what he was upto till it was too late. He pulled the pin away to let the saree pallu slide down a little. His fingers roamed around her waist and further down into her pleats. She called out his name in pleasure, "Raman...please"

Raman groaned hearing his name from her. He almost forced her to the floor in his urgent desire for her. He huskily whispered into her ears as he nipped her ears, "Please what??, sweetheart"

His romantic gesture, his mischievous question and the new way of addressing her as sweetheart made her blush profusely. His urgency made her shudder inwardly and her heart thudded loudly. She giggled and pushed him away with all her strength. He tried to grab her but could only catch hold of her saree. Not waiting to get it released from him, she sprinted away to their bed hugging herself in embarrassment. She turned to look at him once before she crashed down into the bed. She buried her face into the pillow and lay on her stomach.

He followed her with her saree which now was in his hands. She wasn't even looking to his side. He smiled at her shying away as he came to the bed to complete what he started.

Not just that night, every day, every night to come was just theirs. And his aashique was just for her to cherish and treasure for a life time together!

Koyee nasha hai chalka chalka, hosh bacha hai halka halka

Ham hai jaise khoye khoye, jage lekin soye soye

Machalti raho pigalti raho, baho key ghere me humare

Tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

Chhu lete ho tar jo dil key, tum hee batao tum se milke

Janu dil koyee kyon naa hare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare

Tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

Raaz yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

Jadu aate hai tumko sare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

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Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
talk n understanding is the only keys to successful relationship..
i m 1st to like and comment...
yey...😃
Edited by lively-piia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Both parts super duper amazing vidya...loved it
aww...such a romantic ending...wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow vidya..thats was a super duper romantic part
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super romantic update. Loved reading it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice and romantic update which was very much needed in between the heartbreaking track that is going on in the show. I loved how Raman and Ishita were so lost in each other during the whole KC rituals. And the way Ishita made sure Raman doesn't think about Shagun anymore and distracted him was really sweet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update...
Just awesome...
Brilliantly written..👏👏

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