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This story is totally different from the original plot, may be at some point it may coincide but that is likely to be really unplanned. Anyways, I Love Raman so much and I Love IshRa so much more.

I just hope that you all will accept me as you have accepted other terrific writers here. I just want a small space in your heart. I L U.

INDEX

Prologue- Below.
Part 1- Page 2



A Little Thing called... Love!


The magnificent gates opened on their accord by the remote and the shinning black BMW entered the premises of the glass adorned building. The doorman opened the door of the car and a suave man clad in the black suit piece came out. His everything oozed of elegance, the way he walked, the way he was talking business on his blackberry and the way he nodded at at his employees. It was like a film, like he was Prince out of some fairytale.

He not being distracted by any comment or gazes of his female employees entered his luxurious glass cabin. Just when he was about to sit in his chair, his throne precisely, a medium height man knocked twice and entered the cabin. He was asked to take a seat by a nod in his direction. He sat and waited for the King to end his call.

After a while when he thought the time was right he opened his small mouth, "Sir. The 'Man-Goh' Campaign is on full swing, but Malhotras wants a meeting to be set, in your presence, and... " he paused to which his boss cocked his eyebrow at him and thus he continued but with distracted confidence, "...Sir, Ashok Khanna would be their too." he finished, and saw no expected outburst or fury came and sighed and relief and then mustering all his strength, asked, "Sir may I leave?"

"Uh..Oh...! Yes. You may Mihir, but not before bringing the file of our contracts with Khanna." His boss, the mighty Raman Kumar Bhalla said in a very quite tone, deprived of any emotion other than indifference.

Mihir was surprised at his unusual behavior and his quite demeanor that he was scared, and uttered a quick, "Yes Sir", and went out.

"Ashok Khanna" he uttered as if taking the same of his biggest demon, just before purging it away, and gave a swing to his chair watching it going round and round, and then moved to the glass window to glance beyond the present.

*****


Red santro stopped in the parking of Indira Polyclinic, and a woman clad in simple cotton suit came out, with the dupatta flaring due to morning breeze. Her lips adorned with genuine smile as she wished a way out through many people and children clad in hospital gowns taking walks and sitting on benches greeted her and waved at her.

"Dr. Ishita!" a man with a handsome face and beautiful smile showing full pearl set called. He stood before her with a over friendly grin.

"So what did you think? Are you coming?" He asked expectantly.

Ishita looked doubtful and distracted, but she smiled and nodded, "Okay Dr Subbu."

"Its just Subbu for you... Okay then See you at 6." he said excited and went away.

Ishita stood their for a moment too long and the sighed as if tired and turned her heels towards her cabin.

***

"I an telling you Ishu, He is into you... I mean what are you waiting for girl? He is a doctor and handsome too and he likes you... I think you should give him a shot." said Dr. Sneha excitedly.

"Neha, Its just a dinner, We are friends and Its nothing more." Ishita exclaimed.

"But..." Sneha continued but was cut off by Ishita.

"You know everything about me... How can you think I can ruin someone's life? And you know that I can never do this... It would be a big failure." Ishita said.

"Ishu, That was past you know. I mean that period is over, you have all your life, are you planning to give away your life like that. You want to waste it because of that stupid flint?" Sneha asked exasperatedly.

Ishita remained quite and when she was about to answer a couple with a child came in and Sneha knew convo ended.

*****

"Life is never hard, Its just sometimes we don't know how to operate it successfully."

It was what he thought, looking out at No where didn't bring any lost memories or conclusions that would help him achieve what he wanted. People who didn't knew would say,'He has everything.' and who knew him would comment, 'He is still not satisfied and that he is greedy and doesn't understand emotions.', he never could make them understand his situation nor they would, even if he tried, they knew how to criticize and that is what they would do, well he didn't wanted them to know too. It was like mutual. He had started to enjoy their criticism.

After a while he heard a soft knock and their re-entered Mihir with the blue file.

"Sir", he exclaimed confidently, "Here is that file sir."

"Terminate all the dealings with Khanna, Mihir." Raman Said simply.

"But Sir..." Mihir mumbled Shocked.

"...Expose them, ruin them... I don't care how you do it... but I want results. And in 48 hours too. Is it clear?" Raman said in a cold and threatening voice.

""yess Sir!" Mihir frantically nodded before leaving the cabin dazed and slightly shivering.

*****


Okay!
That's a small prologue.
I hope you'd like it. Its a SS and It was seven equally short parts.
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I am completely obsessed with the serial... so I had to read the novel.😆
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I am completely obsessed with the serial... so I had to read the novel.😆
I do go extremes when I am interested in something... Its the way I do things...

BTW you too have read that means...😆


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Part 1



It was almost 5 PM when Sneha barged into Ishita's cabin which made Ishita jump in surprise as she was much involved into her work in hand.

"Aah", cried the patient as Ishita's instrument collided roughly with her gums.

"Oh! I am extremely sorry!!", Ishita and Sneha apologized getting panicky.

"Its okay Doc." said the woman who still seemed in pain.

"Dr. Sneha!!" Ishita turned towards Sneha who was still standing at the door guiltily and asked, "What are you doing here?"

"Ishu, did you forget your Date?" Sneha Chirped

"Sneha... I am working here." she said at she pointed at the patient who was now intently listening to the two docs about the Date and was smiling. "And well... Its not a DATE but only dinner." Ishita said with indifference.

"Same difference Ishu." Sneha huffed.

"Sneha... I'll talk about this after work, Please." Ishita sighed.

"Okay. How much more time would you be needing with Mrs Prasad?" Sneha asked looking at the lady lying on the recliner midist of the equipments, hushingly.

"Just few minutes more", Ishita answered while going back to her patient.

Sneha nodded and left.


*****

"Sir... a team of officers has been sent at their Gurgaun site and inspector Salim has promised to help us expose Khanna. We have different evidences to support our conviction." Mihir said while standing infront of him.

"hmm... Good. And what about the meeting with Malhotra's?" Raman asked while still looking into his BlackBerry.

"Sir, Its fixed on Thursday this week."Mihir answered promptly and continued after a small pause, "Sir... we got a call from Shagun Madam, She wanted to talk to you... I said you are busy but...now She is waiting for you outside." Mihir completed in a wavering tone.

Raman looked at him for fraction of second and then asked him to escort her in there.

Mihir went out only to come back with a beautiful woman in chocolate colored saari, everything about her oozed elegance and richness.

"Shagun" Raman acknowledged.

"Raman", Shagun nodded and sat gracefully opposite to him.

*****


"Are you finished yet?" Sneha peeked in after half an hour.

"Yeah" Ishita sighed getting up and walking towards the door.

"So what you are going to wear?" Sneha Asked excitedly.

"This...", she pointed down towards her suit.

"Are you out of your mind? How can you even think to wear THIS on your first date even!!" Sneha exclaimed horrified.

"Sneha... Its not a DATE. Okay?" Ishita said frustrated.

"Yeah, whatever." Sneha huffed.


*****


After an hour Ishita found herself sitting across the most frustratingly flirtatious guy she had ever seen. She never liked boys like him, well to be straight she never liked anyone. And in her limited experience she had admired her Jiju, Bala. He was most decent man she had ever seen and she wanted someone like him who would be caring and decent and loving, which she thought was not possible. Her Jiju was unique and her sister was lucky. Bala was like a big brother to her and he at times would act as her father. They discussed her aspirations and life.

All the while she kept quite while on her *Date*, as he was continuously speaking without giving her chance to answer. Most of his talks were comprised of Flirt. She was getting bored. And just then her phone rang giving her some hope.

"Oh! I am sorry, I thought I kept it on silent mode.", Ishita apologized and then looked for the mobile to turn it off when the number flashed with the name, "Dr. Surbhi Calling".

"A moment Dr. Subbu", Ishita said as she took the call.


[One sided chat-Ishita]

"Hello. Dr. Surbhi... Everything fine?"

"Ohh!"

"No... I was just having Dinner with a colleague."

"No, Its okay."

"Yep... I'll be there."

"What's his name again?"

"Mr Bhalla. Okay, I'll be their in 15 min."

She cut the call and looked at Subbu apologetically, "I am sorry Dr. Subbu, I'll have to go... Its urgent."

"Ohh! I understand. But only on one condition I'll let you leave", Subbu smiled mischievously and said with a cheeky grin plastered on his face, "Only if you'll call me Subbu and not Dr. Subbu from now." and grinned wider.

Ishita looked uncomfortably towards him and gave a small smile and nodded, "Bye Doc.. err... Subbu"


****


"Raman... Sambhalke, I am so sorry... Meri Wajah se you got into trouble... bohot dard ho raha hai na... shit... I am so sorry Raman." Shagun was continuously apologizing.

"Its Okay Shagun... It was not your mistake... I was over confident... Where is the Darn Dentist." Raman hauled

"She is on her way sir." a sister answered him nth time.

"Darn! from how much time she is *on her way*? Shagun lets go somewhere else." Raman said angrily.

"Raman... she is the best here, wait its hardly 10 min since we are here." Shagun tried to make him understand.

"Whatever." Raman huffed as pain took over.


*****


Ishita reached the clinic and walked towards her cabin, the place looked tensed, she rushed towards the sister and asked, "Sister, Where is the patient, where is Mr. Bhalla?"

"Oh! Dr. Ishita! Thank god you came, your patient is inside, God he's making ruskus, I mean I have seen patients but he is such a child." said the 48 year old with a tinge of mirth.

Ishita rushed inside her cabin and found a woman sitting on the chair while a man lying on the bench in most uncomfortable way, she knew that he was in much pain.

"Mr. Bhalla?" Ishita called.

Hearing her voice Shagun looked up, "Thankgod Doc. you came he was in so much pain and..." she trailed off and she abruptly stood up and exclaimed absolutely shocked, " OMG!!! Ishita Iyer!"

Ishita looked shocked too but said meekly, "Shagun".

While Raman turned towards two women and came into sitting position slowly. And said indifferently, "I am in pain here. Vaise hi itna late ho gaya hai."

Both women looked towards him, one was surprised and one was amused.

"Mr. Bhalla, Please." Ishita motioned him to sit on the recliner to which all equipments were attached and examined his mouth and then concluded, "There is deep cut in his lower lip and little scratch on canine gum, I'd have to give stitches." Ishita said, while Raman shrugged and Shagun looked questionably.

Ishita continued, "I'll have to give him an injection first."

"WHAT!!!" Shagun and Raman screamed.



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