ISHRA OS #9 ~ ORE PIYA~ part 2 pg 2 july 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hiii dearies i am here again with a new OS ..
hope to get the response..
a new concept ..
( not from show track)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Captivating eyes , the sweet chime of the gungroo caught his attention.. he was looking at her just like a bee is attached to the honey.. the way she was twisting and turning made him hypnotised .. the way everything was turning out to be it was not something that can be judged or was planned .. captivated by the moves he looked at the gigging sound.. she jumped and took a bow .. as soon she turned he clicked a picture ..

So beautiful.. that were the words that escaped from his mouth.. the innocence that filled in his heart and soul at that instant cannot be seek and seen anywhere .. There was a little hesitation when he clicked that pose for the first time, the way she shied made his heart flutter .. for some time or say for the instant of time he wanted that smile that innocent features and that naive damsel for him.. a soft chuckle escaped his mouth seeing her getting scolded but that was not the thing that he wanted .. it was his heart that laughed seeing her doing a mistake.. a child in her .. taking two pictures more he went in the deepest nook of his life .. every niche that he had hidden was suddenly alive with her .. that white and red colour outfit made her look angelic that glow on her face when she smiled when her teacher didn't caught her mistake was so adorable ...

He sat on the bed , it was the chilly night .. the December was known for having the worst cold nights in that small village .. he opened his camera and glanced at the photographs... he was marvelled at the beautiful creation of god whom he had clicked... that small wave of emotion on her face .. that deep emotion of the pain that she danced made him live the dream that he always wanted to ...

How can someone be so innocent ... she is naughty and her heart is full of love.. he said all to himself .. the way he was talking to her pictures can make anyone say him the deewana in her love but is it possible ... asked his cold heart ... he was not there for building any kind of relation again but will it possible for him to remain away from her ..

Unknown to what that innocent smile that pure heart and the bubbly nature did she was unaware of the storm of those emotions that she had unknowingly created in the heart of someone.. that child like heart giggled at the second talk that a friend of hers said sometime back .. She was absolutely delightful.. Her curls that roughly settles on her nape were like the dark clouds playing hid and seek with the shiny stars.. those rosy lips which always find another reason to smile in spite of the heavy circumstances in her life ..

She gestured her friend to say something and apply the dark heena on her palms .. taking in the fragrance on the heena those dimples came on her milky white skin were unbeatable .. her friend said something and the next moment a blush crept on her face..

If she was the epitome of naughtiness than she knew how to portray maturity in her .. the classical dancer that dances only listening to the tunes.. there was something that always makes her different from others ..

But this difference will be loved by him... she is a nutshell princess and he is the princess who will keep his princess in his heart ...

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A random thought

Do share your views ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That's something different.😊
I usually don't like plots that are different from the plots.🤔
But I thought of giving this a chance. Now, I'm a bit sad, 😒 coz it was so short. 😆 The story was good. 👍🏼
Update soon.⭐️
Raman village mein kya kar raha hai? Holiday par hai ya professional photographer hai?
I loved the paragraph where he was taking her pics and describing her. 😳
It reminded me a bit of Anandi from Life Of Pi. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thx

Originally posted by: the_Rij

Beautiful 😊 Awesome...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh well thanx
will post next part soon
does it resembles something ?

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">That's something different.😊</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">I usually don't like plots that are different from the plots.🤔</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">But I thought of giving this a chance. Now, I'm a bit sad, 😒coz it was so short. 😆The story was good.👍🏼</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Update soon.⭐️</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">Raman village mein kya kar raha hai? Holiday par hai ya professional photographer hai?</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">I loved the paragraph where he was taking her pics and describing her.😳</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#0000ff">It reminded me a bit of Anandi from Life Of Pi.😉</font>

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Posted: 11 years ago
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BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN👏
I WAS LOST IN IT😃
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Part 2



The sweet smell of the heena in her palms and the intricate designs made in her hands were the small source of the happiness that she always find in all the things she does.. she wasn't from a well off family but she was the only person she knows in her family .. leaving alone with the distant relative she wasn't too happy but the happiness that the sweet princess always finds in her heart was something that nothing can complete . she was self sufficient and self loving .. her love lies in the steps that she learns the only movement that she feels .. deprived of the quality of hearing and speaking she was the one of her own kind...

The princess looked at the heena designs .apart from her dance that relieves her from all kind of tensions the second thing that she loves to do is applying heena.. the heena she felt symbolises the dark effect of someone's love that she always feel around yet she didn't know when she can feel it in real.. the reality doesn't always lie in the eyes that she feels but the deepest truths are sometimes presented in a way that even the non believer of the love and god starts to know that every single heart beats with his permission ...

The next morning he took his camera in the small hope to find her again.. the greenery and the landscape was so soothing that gave even a burning soul the peace in their hearts .. but his eyes were in the search of someone who can reduce the unending search of himself ... the search which can only end with the discover of someone who can see right through him , just for him ...

Sitting in the silence for almost an hour he found the sun shining amidst of the heavy clouds and just like his mind said he turned and looked at the beauty painted in the orange hue that was right now looking like the sun that was setting its wings in the sky and she was shining the way he wanted that too in his life for the second time and making him lost in her ... he just like a thief he clicked her once again .. but this time he found her hazels staring at him in the confusion .. he smiled awkwardly and tried to look away but couldn't do so.. making his camera fall in the process ... and looking at her leaving the place ...

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Next : meeting and closure

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was beautiful... full of arousing anticipation. I hope the two vary souls unite in the next chapter.
Please update soon...

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