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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: felciya
Well Written. Waiting for your next part.

Thanks for commenting...

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#32

Originally posted by: Rozy77
great start 👍🏼
thoroughly enjoyed it

do continue soon...

...thank u...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: yhmfever
Well it was nice but i would love to have ishra moments in it
Hopefully in the next part

Hope you will like the next part... for reading...

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#34

Originally posted by: arshi.zoha
Really vry nice ..
But the ending ws abrupt .. pls cont this

Yes I will continue as I said it was a part of the Os i wrote...I will update soon...Thanks fopr reading...

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#35

Originally posted by: chathu
n then????? 😆

and then they lived happily ever after......😆😆

Its not completed yet...Thanks for reading...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sush_
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Shanky tumne os likha.. Yayyy!!

Sush...Yes I wrote it......tell me how it is, when you will read it...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode
me aa gai 🤗 😆😆
muje vanny ne inform kiya that shanky is calling you on this forum on new OS 😳😛 as usual on ps. not active on forum like bv and sslk😛

woohooo shanky, am happy you are writing on IshRa 👏
seriously i liked your decision to keep dialogues in hindi. because of specialty of ravan kumar s one liners 😃 and sweet pampering of ishita for ruhi "bachcha" that give me feeling she is her daughter only

aah raman ka bhoot 🤣
you kept me hooked for next chapter 😆
jokes apart: you have maintained her depth of character equal to the show . and waiting for their confrontation also 😳

please carry on buddy cough cough my drsaa 😛

zen master,I was waiting for u...

how r u?

Its actually just a short scene which got extended as I used so many dialogues...I have no idea,its good or bad...Its neither fully serious,nor thoroughly romantic,not even fully funny...hoping that you'll will like the next part...