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ExcuseMePlz

@ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi...😳

For past few days I wanted to write this scene on Ishita and Raman after watching their arguments and today finally I wrote it...I am just posting one part of what I wrote...Pardon me for all the errors...I have proof read it for almost 10 times as its my first post here...But still there might be many mistakes...And I couldn't think of an original title and its evident...All the dialogues are in Hindi because its more impactful...But if any of you want me to translate it then I will surely do...Just let me know...😳I sincerely hope you all will enjoy it...Thank you...

P.S. --- Calling Zen master...Yaha ho to aa jao...😳...

**I didn't notice I have written Ishita OS in place of IshRa...Now edited...**

Links ---

Part 1 --- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108611513

Final part --- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/108650344

Next Two parts --- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110236734

Edited by shankythebest - 11 years ago

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@ExcuseMePlz

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was a normal evening in Bhalla house.Ishita came back home from her clinic.Mr. and Mrs. Bhalla along with Simmi were going to attend a function.Whole Bhalla family was invited but only three of them decided to attend the late night function.Though Romi was very excited initially but later he dropped the idea as he was loaded with work in the office and he will have to work till late night.Raman as usual was not interested in attending any function leaving important works and Ishita decided to stay at home with Ruhi because Raman would be at home for dinner.

Suddenly Ruhi started crying to attend the function when she saw everyone getting ready.Ishita was reluctant because they would be able to be back very late at night.Though Ishita knew how stubborn Ruhi is but still she tried...

Ishita : Tum waha jakar kya karogi Ruhi,ye elders ki party hai na?

Ruhi : To kya hua Ishima,Ananya bhi to ja rahi hai?

Ishita : Paar tum logo ko ate ate bohot late ho jayega,to phir subah kaise uthegi mera bachcha?

Ruhi : Plz,Ishima kal to Sunday hai.School bhi nehi hai.

Ishita understood Ruhi will not agree but she tried for the last time...

Ishita : Ishima,itni der taak akeli kaise rahegi,Ruhi?

Ruhi : To aap bhi chalo na humare saath,plz.

Ishita realized now if Ruhi gets stubborn to take her with them in the function then it will be impossible to make her understand.So finally Ishita said...

Ishita : Nehi,Ishima nehi jayegi,agar Ishima chali gayi to Papa to hungry reh jayenge,issi liye Ishima yehi rahengi,lekin Ruhi jaroor jayegi aur bohot enjoy karegi aur kisiko taang nehi karegi.

Ruhi : Yay!Ok,Ishima.Main kisiko taang nehi karungi aur good girl banke rahungi,Ruhi promise.

All of them left for the function and Ishita was all alone.She read a book,she watched news,took some rest and then she came out to make dinner.When she was about to enter the kitchen her phone beeped.She got a message and it was from Raman.

"I will have my dinner with clients.Don't wait for me.Khana kha lena."

Ishita was disappointed as she was planning to make Raman's favourite dishes.Though she had no expectations that Raman will be surprised but still she was excited.But she shooed her disappointment.She was bored like hell.She finished her novel to pass the time.Then had Salad in her dinner and went back to her room.

Raman reached home and nobody was there.Ishita was in washroom.Only the lights of their bedroom were on.

'Ye,Ishita bhi na,pure ghar ko bhutiya ghar banake chora hai.Hall ka light jalega to kisika kya bigar jayega!Lekin nehi,ye bolunga to,'bizli bachana chahiye' iss topic pe kamse kaam teen char ghante ka lecture sunana prefer karegi,Madrasan...'Raman thought to himself and switched on the light.Then he remembered he forgot an important file in the car.So he went to get the file from his car,locking the door again.

Ishita came out of the washroom and saw the lights of the hall on.

''Maine to light off ki thi,Raman aa gaye kya!..'' Ishita thought.

''Raman,aap aye ho kya?'' Ishita asked.But there was no answer.

''Lekin,mujhe pakka yaad hai maine light off ki thi,sirf bedroom wala on tha!'' Ishita was puzzled.

She checked the lock of the door and got sure that no one was at home.She thought she must have forgot switching off the light.She got a call so went to receive the call.After the call ended she went to the balcony of their room.She had her earphone on and started listening music.

Raman was totally irritated.The weather was too hot and the only thing he needed was a quick shower.He again entered and he saw the door of the bathroom open.He searched for Ishita but she was not there.He called her,but got no response.

''Pakka behri ho gayi hai ye aurat,isska kuch nehi ho sakta...'' Raman said to himself.

After searching for Ishita in the whole house he found her in the balcony.She was listening to music,closing her eyes.

''ISHITA,ISHI..." Raman called her but Ishita couldn't hear.

"Le,abhi agar koi chilla chilla kar maar bhi jaye to bhi issko kuch pata nehi chalne wala...Mujhe kya,jo chahe kare...' Raman thought.

Raman went back to the room,took his clothes and went to have shower.

After a while Ishita came back to her room.She was still listening to music so she had no idea that Raman was at home.

''Aiyyo,ye light off karna bhul gayi main...'' Ishita thought and came to the hall and switched off the light.Then She came in front of her dressing table.She looked at herself in the mirror.

''Kitna achcha lagta agar Raman ghar pe dinner karte to...Kabhi kabhi to mauka milta hai aisa...'' Ishita thought.

She combed her beautiful long hair,applied lip balm.She did nothing but still she was glowing.She always feels awkward whenever somebody praises her.But the day she first saw Raman checking her out from top to bottom,after that she loves to stay tip top even before going to sleep,perhaps while sleeping also.And that was not the only day he checked her out or was awestrucked by her beauty.She noticed him quite a few time.But the moment she looks at him,he starts doing other things.Then he will look at everything except her.Raman Kumar Bhalla is too fast in such things but its not easy to fool Dr.Ishita Iyer.

Ishita was never a girl trying hard to look good,she was naturally good looking.She never expected praises from people.But today she was getting ready and eagerly waiting for Raman.When he secrectly adores her that feeling is totally different,much more impactful than the direct praises.

"Ishita,you are totally turning into a narcist.Look at you,adoring your own beauty..." Ishita's inner self popped out and tapped her head with her hand.

"Agar pati complement na de to koi kya kare," She answered at once and gave a sweet smile.

Then she took her favourite perfume bottle and sprayed it over her while humming the song she was listening to.

''Ishita,iss waqt kyun perfume laga rahi hai tu...Party karne thodi na jarahi hai?Sone se pehle koi perfume use karta hai kya?...Wo bhi itna saara...Poore room ko garden bana diya hai tune..." Her innerself asked.

"Aise hi,koi reason nehi hai," Ishita said confusedly.

"Agar Ravan Kumar agaya to ate hi uski ugly taunts jhelna parega,bewakuf kahiki...'' Ishita's innerself reprimanded her.

Raman came out of the washroom.He was drying his hair covering his head with towel.

Ishita was still standing with the bottle in her hand.Suddenly her eyes went up on the mirror and she saw something white moving in front of her bedroom door.As she didn't expect anyone in the house so she couldn't even realize that it was not 'something white',it was a man,it was Raman in his white shirt and pant with a white towel on his head.She got really scared and totally forgot to use her brain.She turned and shouted loudly.

'Aaa,' Ishita screamed on top of her voice.

Edited by shankythebest - 11 years ago

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very well written ... loved it ⭐️

Hope you are going to continue this 😃

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

LOL!! Can't believe Ishita has mistaken Raman for a ghost!! I hope you're continuing this just so we get to see Raman's reaction to all this. And owh, it's so sweet how Ishita wants to look pretty at all times cause of Raman.

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ZedZee

@ZedZee

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice one 😊 please do continue soon 😃 Eager to know what happens next 😉

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...brilliant start...u write well...plz continue soon n pm me too plz

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Tanyaarora11

@Tanyaarora11

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was really good, loved reading it. Please continue soon

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey , this was very good👍🏼...u wrote very realitistic situations ...apt frm the character's POV...

and you left it at such a crucial point...i want the update pretty soon...plsss. 😃