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A Cold Rose

Well guarded, was her heart

Iced to tender emotion people acclaimed,

Left alone for far too long, was her heart

Needed a little warmth of love he claimed.


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Hello, lovelies! If I were to ask you what romance is for you, would you be kind enough to reply? Whether or not you comment about the story, which I hope you do, please do answer the above question.

Talking about this story, well, it was an idea that just popped up, if you know what I mean. I was working on another story, where these guys were support characters and then, bang, they just wanted a story of their own. I couldn't resist.

I hope you like reading about them, as much as I love writing about them.

PS: the story will be updated once a week. 😃 If time permits and inspiration strikes, maybe twice or thrice a week (but you'd be best off not be putting much stock into that) 😳

~Yours, AJ


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The barb in the arrow of childhood suffering is this:
its intense loneliness, it's intense ignorance.

OLIVE SCHREINER


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Prologue Pg 1

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Moved to blog

http://aurajosyshenoy.blogspot.in/

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You are right, these guys deserve a separate story of themselves.
Though I am sort of curious about Rose too.😆 Locked in the room and kicked all over has she? Hell cat indeed.

What a contrasting personality of the best friends and what a refreshing time it would have been for him.

I liked him and seeing him through her dark, cold eyes [😆] had me made utter this to myself.
Refreshing. Definitely refreshing.

I liked her balcony, by the way, I like to keep my place as spacious and as empty as possible, which you know (I think, do you?😆)

And I am warning you woman, if ever the you-know-what's interior would be even remotely closer to hers, then I am going to murder you. Hmph.
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Superbly amazing
jsut wow
Soo nice
I loved the relationship build up
The inner turmoil of ishita
And the balcony just wow scene
I am officlaly lost in ishra land
Just perfect writting
The grammar , puntuations all were in place
Just beautiful
Update super super duper soon
And pm please
Loved this story
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Wonderful! Please do continue, however I have noticed that Ishita's surname is Rathore which is cool with me. I do want to kindly request to keep Raman's surname as a Bhalla since it's suited him better that way. He is always a Raman Kumar Bhalla! 😊
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Very Nice. Well written. Thanks for the pm.
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loved the background setting of the story
continue soon
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wow, this was simply amazing
wonderfully written indeed
just loved it
do continue soon
take care
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Lovely concept...
Update ASAP and please PM when ever you update...

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