ISHRA OS Tagathon # 3:Trouble is a friend - Page 7

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

I wish I had your thing for quotes because I love language. The way words are put together fascinates me but when i start reading I get lost in the character that I totally forget the lines that actually made me like the character. That is one reason I got attracted to your style of writing because you do have a gift of framing sentences in a beautiful way!

Originally posted by: serendipity.

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Awieee! This was ADORABLE AANI!

Hey Reens thank you 😃

aah! <3 okay, im so so sorry, im VERY VERY fond of all the three writers, really am... Isha, Lucky, Aani... but i will be a bit biased and say this, Aaniii!!! yours was definitely my most favorite of the series 😳

☺️ you honor me

Other than my bias, the reasons could be that Isha and Lucky, collectively... they gave you a build up... a backdrop... and so you had to focus on the meaty content, it automatically gets easier, that way (or so i think? 🤔) lol,

You are of course right Lucky and Isha did give me a fantastic base to work with 😊 they made my job easier - Isha' piece let me know where she sees them in their relationship, while Lucky took it a notch up 😊

and you did exactly that, and trust me when i say i had a HUGE HUGE HUGE grin on my face reading it! REALLY! 😳 I know its never easy for someone to continue SOMEONE ELSES' work... i mean two people... three people... as in however many people... that many different perspectives! How i see a scenario and how you perceive the same can be different and STILL doing so much justice to it? BANG ON! YOU'RE AMAZING. I LOVE YOU.

☺️ ☺️ Yep two people dont exactly have the same thoughts on the same subject even if they may have the same wavelength, and somehow that made my OS different, since I wanted to divert it in a new zone 😳

the fact that Raman lied to HER, to the POLICE, well to EVERYONE except himself about the car breaking down, OMG! ☺️ 😆 😆 that was so cute! Absolutely loved it.

😆 😆 the thing is I can see lover-boy Raman do this in my mind I hope that made sense 🤔 😆😆 he would have the hardest time opening up to her, but once his feelings are realized it would be task to stop himself too isnt it? 😳

Him nihaarofying his beautiful wife was just plain beautiful. Him having to "accept" the truth of having to want to spend time with his wife... AAAH! 🤣 APT! ;) LOVED it yaar!

😆 this part - the one where he had to admit things was inspired by the recent MM engagement thing, he had to admit, though to make Mihir understand - that he lied and basically fooled him and so did Ishita. 😆 over here I could see, him having no choice but to blurt the truth out since police may harass them and worse assume Ishita is that kind of a girl if he lies 😳

❤️ this was seriously amazing and i absolutely LOVE HOW and WHERE the story is heading! I really hope the Tagathon never ends and amazing writers like you all keep continuing this for an eternity! 😳

Looking forward to reading what the next writer has in-store for us! 😳

Aww thank you Reens 🤗

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Another great Os 😊

Aani, I do seriously think I am falling in love with your writing. It's always such a treat reading your fanfics! Now off to revise! 😊

Originally posted by: Autumn.

What a write up wow!!! And your jwm scene came out in the show too. Amazing you are Aani.

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Brilliant OS Aani..

This one was so different from your other works.. Like always.. You rocked this one too.!!!

I loved Ishu's part where she realizes that her hubby is so attracted towards her.. And the effect it has on her.. Though she can't stop herself from comparing the differences to her past, but they also make her realize the changes in her life...she is enjoying every bit of the effect she has on him..

Coming to Raman, Aww.. He actually wanted to admire her so he pretended the car broke down. Well, it's not hidden that he is attracted to her but that one gesture of him wanting to spend more time with her was super cute.. I was grinning widely imagining the chase..And ofcourse the almost kiss.. 😳 ❤️

Their never ending bickering.. Buddha khadoos..Raman's one liners 😆 it just makes them even more adorable.. Their dialogues were awesome.!!! ⭐️

Thank you for the rocking OS .. 😊