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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww tanya...this ws the best best update of ur story...soo soo awesome..!! loved readin it..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Very Nice. I found some of the Ravankumar style lines in this part. It gave a smile on my face. They slept together without Ruhi n Ishita hugged him tightly. It was good they sorted out the mu quickly .Waiting for your next update n Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww that was cute! IshRa scenes with Raman and Ishu's good old nhok jhok Well written👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update soon waiting for the next ...do pm me also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thankyou So much for the appreciation. It really motivates me to write more. Here's the next part. Please do share your views.

Part 5
When Raman got up, he looked at the woman sleeping right next to him, she had her hand on his chest and her head was on his arm.He stared at her and couldn't help smiling, he was truly happy, It had been one of their best nights since, they'd got married.She was so close to him, he couldn't resist his inner feelings he wanted to do so much more, but he wasn't sure about her feelings and somewhere deep down he was scared of his Jhansi ki rani, he thought to himself " Raman beta agar kuch bhi harkat ki toh Jhansi ki rani Chandi ka roop dharan karlegi " He decided to get up before things got out of control for him but when he slightly moved he realized that his yellow wrist band was entangled in Ishita's hair.He tried to move his hand, but Ishita was about to get up, he immediately kept his hand back and a small smile crept on his face. He had no other option, he couldn't have woken her up, he found her fairy-like when she slept, and on a personal level he hated when someone woke him up, he was against the entire idea of waking up people unless there was an emergency,he couldn't do that to anybody and here it was his Ishita in his arms, with her mouth shut. It was the best feeling for him. He decided to just stare at her pretty face because he knew once , she got up she'd never let him do that. He caressed her face.And yes his hands automatically touched her lips, he couldn't control he bent forward to kiss her luscious lips, in his defence he did try to get up, now the wrist band got entangled what could have he done. When his lips were about to touch hers, someone banged the door which made Raman fall from the bed, Ishita got up hastily and saw Raman on the floor and said " aap" and Raman sheepishly fell on the ground because he was really scared of kissing Ishita and the immediate banging on the door, made him come back to senses. He shouted" Tum pagal ho darwaze pe knock hua aur tumne mujhe Dhaka de ke niche Gira diya " she was so confused and said "Nahi I swear meine nahi giraya" she tried to help him he refused. He was definitely play acting, he in his wildest of his dreams didn't want Ishita to know that he had almost lost himself in her beauty a while back. He had fallen because of his own act. But he continued with his banter anyway. She said sorry sorry " and went to check on the door. It was Adi. Raman saw him.and Adi said" dad why didn't you sleep with me?" Raman said, beta by the time I came back you'd already slept and I didn't want to disturb you. He said " okay" I want to talk to you in private. Ishita was about to leave, Raman stopped her and said " Adi I'll meet you in 5 mins, in the room" Ishita was pleased. He didn't tell her to go, Earlier Adi's all demands were met without any further discussion, but this time he didn't tell her to go,infact he stopped her from going.These little gestures by RKB made Ishita fall for him even more. Adi gave a frown and walked away. Ishita smiled at Raman, and he gave her an irritated expression and said" my back is killing me, courtesy my wife" listen to me how many times will you actually make me fall before you kill me. There's a knife in the kitchen, ek hi baar khatam Karo kaam. Kya roz roz ka natak. She said"I'm sorry, I really don't know how it happened.dard ho raha hain?" He said " yeah man! What do you expect? I have still no idea, how on earth you became a doctor. She said " wait,I'll get the balm. He said okay, when she turned he gave a wicked smile. And spoke to himself " kitni Bhooli hain yeh, vaise toh badi Jagga jasoos Banti hain" she returned and he got all his innocent face back. She looked at him and felt horrible she told him to lie down. He did so. Then she said " shirt toh Utaro" he said " it's paining pretty badly Yaar, Tum utaarogi toh haath nahi toot jayenge tumhare. She looked at him, she was embarrassed but nonetheless she started unbuttoning his shirt and Raman was laughing and enjoying the entire act, whenever she looked at him he gave her an " ouch it's paining expression " but when she looked down he used to start smiling.she finally unbuttoned his shirt, and made him lie on the bed. She then carefully started applying balm on his back. Her hands felt like magic to him, she had done that before once, but that time, he had hardly paid attention.but now, the way she moved her hands made Raman's jaw drop. He thanked god, that because she was applying balm on his back, she couldn't have seen the expressions he made.On the other hand, Ishita was more than pleased that Raman couldn't see her face, she was completely turned on. Raman was pretty handsome, no doubt his face made her tremble at times, he was so perfect, she'd never really gone for looks, but couldn't deny the fact that her husband was one of the handsome men she's ever seen. But his chest and his abs made her restless. When she unbuttoned the shirt, she was turned on, she was quite disappointed that all she had to do was apply the balm, there was so much more she wanted to do, after all she was called Jhansi ki Rani, she had pretty wild intentions in her heart, but she didn't know how he felt and with his usual way of talking to her, put her to misery even further. Adi, on going out, hadn't shut the door and infront of Ruhi's room, all this was being witnessed by Shagun. She thought to herself " what the hell, they weren't supposed to be talking. I have to do something at the earliest else this bhenjiii...uhhh!
Raman came to his bedroom and found Shagun lying on the bed and Adi sitting on the couch, without looking at Shagun he asked Adi " haan beta bolo" Adi said " I want you to take me and mom shopping with you, today" Raman said " uhmm! Adi what do you want? Cars , games , toys, x box. I'll get anything for you. Just tell me what. Adi said " no I want you to take mom and me shopping, she wants to buy stuff and I want you to accompany us. Raman knew, that she was the one who has planted this idea in Adi's head and he knew what a materialistic woman she is and now when ashok has left her, there's no way her expenses were being paid. After all, she was high maintenance and no one better than him knew that. While, he was going through such thoughts and idea came to his mind, he told Adi " yes he'll go with them, and told him to get ready. When Adi left the room, he looked at Shagun and said" listen to me, I know you've done all this but I don't care, I have an idea, you want money right like always. I'm gonna give you as much money as you want. Just say the number and I'd throw a check at you. Just leave me and my family alone." Deal? He'd actually gotten excited at that, he was cursing himself why hasn't he thought about this before. He wanted to get rid of this woman at the earliest. He was quite sure, she'll say yes and ask for a huge number. he had mentally thought that he'd agree for as much amount as she demands. But to his shock, she said " No baby! I don't want any money, I just want you and Adi. I want Ruhi, you me and Adi together like a family, like it was supposed to be. You're the father I'm the mother and we have 2 beautiful kids. Fine, we got separated but now I'm back in your life jaan. Let's start afresh. I know you still love me and you will always. Well, I still remember how you couldn't get your hands of me and now you've been controlling since so long. She got up from the bed locked the door and stood in front of him and continued " I know how you don't share a physical relationship with your wife, because you're in love with me and there's no other woman you'd rather share a bed with than me. It's okay now I'm completely yours and with this she kept her hand on his button and started to unbutton it when he immediately pushed her back and slapped her.
Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good
Loved ISHRA scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update Dear!Thanks fr pm!Luved Ishra morning scene!Shagun saw Ishita applying balm on Raman's back!Hate Shagun!Raman slapped Her!Yippee!Luv U Raavan Kumar!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome one
Ishra moment was so cute !
Finally Raman opened his eyes concerning Shagun 👏
Shagun 😡 The nerves of this woman !
Good Raman reacted like this !
Hope Ishita will get to know and there's no MU created by Shagun !
Loved it !
Eagerly waiting for the next one !
Thanks for the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ishra moment was beautiful.raman sach mein ravan hai.khud ki niyat kharab thi but blame on ishita 😉 .shagun 😡 is so cheap.Lets start afresh.really?wats their to start.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
tanya...this ws the best update tilll nw...loved readin it

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