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Posted: 11 years ago
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Where did u disappear. Pls update soon. Waiting for ravaan kumar to show his ravaan roop to shagun
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Parts 2-4
awsum updates
loved a lot
shagun is so disgusting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone! Thankyou for all the appreciation, here's the final part. Please share your views :)


Part 6

After slapping Shagun, Raman barged out of the room, leaving her dejected and sad in a crying state on the floor, he didn't even utter a word to her,he didn't need to.After coming out of the room, he went straight to Ruhi's room, he'd already committed a mistake by not informing Ishita about the lunch, thus,
He didn't want to make any more mistakes, so he went to her and told her the entire story of what happened in the room. Ishita was stunned and finally came closer to him, his breath almost stopped, his eyes glued to her, without a blink he's staring at her perfect face while she's taking slow steps and coming closer and closer, Raman said " Ishita, I didn't do anything trust me. She continued walking towards him while he was taken aback for a bit, because he was telling her something very serious and she was just not reacting the way he had expected her to, she finally came pretty close to him and Raman was sanding against a wall, perplexed as to what this woman was about to do, she came close to him while his eyes were glued at her and he was perhaps thinking she'd slap him or something, clearly that story couldn't have invoked Ishita to kiss him, he was practically seduced by his ex wife, and he was narrating that to his current wife, this was surely something bad but nonetheless, it was his JKR In front of him, he'd have to take the punishment whatever it was. He just stood there staring at her while now she had come really close,Raman's eyes were still glued to her, she came really close to him and she said while holding the top button of his shirt " yeh wala button right?, shagun tried to unbutton this one" ?he was damn scared was she about to kill him, he muttered " yeah, but I stopped her hmm trust me...ishita...you..aah. You..! Her scent was making him crazy and her fiery eyes he was going mad. Ishita snatched the button of his shirt and threw it out of the window and before he could react she pressed her lips on his lips and kissed him passionately, it took him a second to realize what just happened and after that he held his wife tightly and kissed her with compassion, he'd wanted to do that since ages, and today out of blue he got what he desired,they parted just to breath once, and again started kissing, it felt like both had so much fire and passion that they couldn't stop, they just needed an initiative for one to start, and clearly Ishita did it today, they were both completely into each other, there was fire burning inside both of them, they hadn't realized they'd wanted each other so much, they couldn't let go, After nearly kissing for 7 minutes, Ramam spoke " ishita , mujhe Pehle pata hota, kab ka Shagun se button khulwa diya hota. She shouted at him and hit hard on his chest " ramannn, I hate youu. He looked at her, pulled her face up, touched her cheeks and whispered in her ears, "but I love you" she was blushing like mad, completely red and she said pakka na? Ruhi toh nahi dekh rahi peeche"? and winked at him. Now, he was blushing he made a sound indicating no. She smiled, even he smiled and they hugged. Ishita spoke" listen, we've gotta get rid of Shagun. Raman looked at her and said " really? You think? Tumhe aisa lagta hain? Crazy woman obviously Yaar. Yehi toh nahi pata kaise. Then she said " I know how."

Raman came to Shagun's room, he was wearing a round T-shirt, and pair of linen trousers. Ishita was sending her husband to lion's den, she couldn't have let him go wearing a shirt, what if Shagun tried to unbutton it again thus she specifically made him wear a round t-shirt he did throw a fit about it, but she promised she'll make up for it in their bedroom at night, after hearing this, he could have even agreed to wear a Dhoti, toh t-shirt kya cheez thi.
He came closer to Shagun and apologised for the slap, she was shocked he said " I'm really sorry, you were right, I fantasise about you day and night, and I slapped you in a fit of rage. Let's get together. She was escalating with joy and this transformation of Raman, made her feel victorious. That's exactly what Ishita and Raman wanted. After that she came closer to him, he immediately moved a step backwards and said " but there's a problem?, Ishita, I did marry her for Ruhi, but now the judge won't give us Ruhi's custody, they feel Ishita is a good mother, how will we get Ruhi back? She immediately retorted back " Raman, I know about that bhenjiii and Ruhi's relation, and I know about the judge as well, let's do one thing we leave both of them together, I've got you and you've got me. I'm sure Ruhi will be happy with her so called Ishima. Let's leave her here only and elope. Raman said " okay but Adi loves Ruhi Yaar, and how will we be able to do that and Adi doesn't even love me yet, he still thinks that I was the one who pushed him and Raman faked a tear. And Shagun saw that and said " Arey, that was all crap Yaar, me and Ashok made all of that shit just to make Adi against you, nothing of that sort happened baby and you know that, me and ashok polluted his mind to such an extent to make him hate you, we played games and said all crap stuff to Adi, and he believed everything just relax I'll do it again. Just when she said that sentence Adi walked in and behind him Ishita was standing. He had listened to the entire conversation, that was Raman and Ishita's plan. They wanted Shagun to confess everything and Ishita made sure Adi heard each word. Shagun was shocked, Adi was infuriated he shouted at his mom and cried, Ishita and Raman held him and helped him overcome, after getting his senses back.Adi told Shagun to leave the house, as he didn't want to live with a woman who instigated a son against his own father. Shagun was shocked, she realized all this had been a trap for her, she shouted at both Raman and Ishita but she had no other option, Raman said " ab tameez se jaongi ya dhake de ke nikalu. She felt insulted and went out of the house with her stuff.
Raman hugged Adi and both father son cried like crazy, which made the entire Bhalla family in tears, Ishita the most..! They had parted the differences, Raman got Adi back in his life forever and that too truly. Everyone was delighted. Ruhi came there as well and Raman hugged both his kids and they hugged him back, Raman was truly happy. After sometime, Raman made both his kids sleep at Ruhi's room, he tucked them well. Kissed them both on their foreheads and went to his room to meet the love of his life, without whom none of this would have been possible. For a moment before entering his room, he thought about the first encounter with Ishita, the fights, the marriage everything flashed back into his mind,And he couldn't help smiling how that woman practically changed his life, in every sense she gave him happiness. He opened the door of his room and he was thinking about all the making up Ishita has to do for making him wear the t-shirt. His eyes searched for her in the room, and when he found her, he locked his room and checked once again if it's locked. Ishita heard the noise and said " hogaya lock, kitni baar check karoge " he said " Bahaut awaaz Nikal rahi hain tumhari aaj, aao band kardo" and after saying that he walked closer to her and held her from the back side and started kissing her neck, he had held on for a long time, he couldn't have controlled any more. His lips on her neck felt like fire to her, she was burning with passion she immediately turned herself towards him and kissed his lips, then his face and now she regretted the t-shirt, the shirt would have been a lot easier to take off, but nonetheless, there was no stopping for Mrs Bhalla tonight, while he was busy burying his face on her shoulders and licking her everywhere, she struggled with trying to get his t-shirt off, Raman got what she was trying to do, and her hands coming in between made his kissing her neck and shoulders even more difficult" he said "kissi baat ka chain nahi hain madrasan ko , har cheez fast chahiye isko, he winked and immediately took his t-shirt off which Ishita was struggling with. Ishita ignored his taunt, she was desperate for him, it was anyway the first time for her, she found his bare chest even more appealing and kissed him on his chest, and found herself totally wrapped in his arms, Raman slowly opened the buttons of her kurta, and while caressing her neck and hair pulled it off from her, and unstrapped her bra. He fell deeper and deeper and with in a matter of few seconds all their clothes were lying on the ground and both Ishita and Raman made love to each other and finally completed each other in the truest sense. They consummated their marriage in the most passionate form and had the best night of their lives.
Edited by Tanyaarora11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Awesome update...
Aww
Loved ishra kiss...
Great plan...
So hot and passionate ...
Finally they became one...
Is this incomplete???? Last line,???
Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniiee

And what? I wannaa knww😆




Sorry :P I had intended to write something, but fir it didn't go well so I removed it last line remained. Though I've edited it now :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Awesome update...
Aww
Loved ishra kiss...
Great plan...
So hot and passionate ...
Finally they became one...
Is this incomplete???? Last line,???
Loved it




Thankyou so much :* and sorry, I did intend to write something, but It didn't turn out to be good, though I've edited it now. And I'm glad you liked it. Thankyou :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww this was awesome read it all in one go, will u be continuing cuz this was amazing totally loved it. Please PM me if u do...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
perfect ending to this beautiful story tanya...!! loved it..!! plz comeback with ur new ishra story soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"kissi baat ka
chain nahi hain madrasan ko , har
cheez fast chahiye isko"...lol...its superb line...
u r amazing writer yaar...
superb part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsum update
loved the last part

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