The Unwilling Participant - An IshRa OS - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: anodaksgfan

This is a wonderful piece by u again..

for once I dont care about ishra..
I wish in any indian tv series ppl talk and then realise their love..
I dont understand whats d big deal..
they never show ppl talking about their emotions..
the vamps and the villiams express much more than the lead characters do..

I just love how beautifully u have put all dis together..
how they know in the end that each others feelings and emotions matter to both of them..
be it ishitas pain..
be it ramans undying ego war
be it ishitas confusion dat how exactly is raman
be it raman knowing dat she has a backache..
be it ishita satisfied when he promises not to use her as a object ever..
be it raman knowing dat she appreciates d effort he put in making dat necklace made..

these are d lil things u just need in life and love just follows somehow..
there can b nothing but love between ppl who care so much for each other..

loved it aani:)
U r a blessed writer
.seriously:)


Hi Chitvan 😊

@bold - tell me about it we hear the -ve characters going on and on and on about what they are gonna do, what they feel and what they have in-store and this and that, but when it comes to the leads - either they give boring lectures ( am on Raman' team here 😆 ) or they fight but ask them to talk and they just go mum, in IshRa' case I understand their reluctance to open up to each other but certain times you simply cannot neglect things and brush them aside with a smile which I think this situation did qualify for, alas things cannot be always like we wish they were

@red - all these conflicts make them so interesting to write about and watch so that was what came in my OS too 😳

@blue - exactly I think the little things matter more - grand gestures aren't exactly that hard to do if you have the money and an event manager for it, along with a need to show off but little things are personalized, no one else can do them for you, especially in a marriage. They have to have those moments of clarity where you pick up even the most insignificant things sometimes because at the end of the day thats sometimes what matters - like a quote goespeople will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.

@pink - thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Aani, thanks for your reply to my post! 😃

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No need for any thanks Mary 😃 it was a pleasure to read your comment and reply to it, I am sorry I was busy so just got around to it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: pomegranate

Great OS, aani. I love the way you write.



honestly, this was a much needed conversation between ishra. Don't know why we did not get in the show, raman and ishita are long overdue for a heartfelt conversation. it was completely unrealistic of ishita to revert back to normal self so quickly. as much as I am enjoying the show, I feel that CV's are stuck in a constant loop of nok-jhoks because we like it. it's time to show some emotional intimacy.


Hi Zara thank you for the comment and the compliment 😳

@bold - exactly the other times when the cvs show IshRa having these tiffs I understand that, I could buy why Ishita could not make the apology for the necklace before and later chose not to do so at all, but something this humiliating cannot be brushed aside simply like that, Ishita chose to dance with Raman and not let him down, I find that commendable and even agreeable but in the privacy of their room why could she not say a few hard words is beyond me. She should have asked him something perhaps if not downright argue but it seems the makers wanna show IshRa arent yet ready for that kinda connect and emotional intimacy to creep into their marriage, all I can say to that is - its feeding a fire thats at a very nascent stage now - someday the bomb will explode!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

thanks Yashasvi 😊


Originally posted by: PagliLadki

I was looking for a Premheer ff and found your ff 'Love in the time of orkut' (I don't remember the title exactly) and read in the intro that you have written few ffs on other lead pairs as well. I love reading your work and would love to read ff on hiten gauri and iqbal neha. If possible can you ease provide me with their links or if you hv an index on the forum then the link of the index. It would be of great help


God I had forgotten that FF like ages back how did you even find it 😲 yeah I have written a few other ffs but mostly they are crappy stuff- the good things started happening only sometime back and honestly I have no recollection of most of the stuff I wrote earlier because its not that good, honestly its so amateurish I would cringe if I find it myself 😳

And really I dont rem most of the stuff I have written - I follow select shows and can write only when I fall in love with a pair - Hiten Gauri were my first muses but its been so long since their shows I dont even rem the names of the ffs I wrote then and Iqbal Neha, hmm cant even recollect if I ever wrote on them in the first place

Yashasvi thats so sweet of you to ask me for my prev stuff but its honestly bad
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Saw your reply Aani... Quote karoongi aur lambi post ho jaayegi 😆

I am glad you liked my comments... and I also saw your reply on my logic post. I refrained from commenting, since so much happened (with the segs and the spoilers) after I wrote the post, anything I say now will look outdated...😊 but I read and agreed with every word you said...

See ya in the next one Aani!


😆 😆 @bold - kya hamare liye yeh naya hoga? 😆

Thanks for liking the comment Lucky and its ok I understand why you could not reply back to my response 😊

See ya in the next one! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: KurbaanHua

I always look forward to reading your OSs!!
This particular one reminded me that in the show they manage to bring up Raman's pain from his first marriage frequently, even still, but we don't get to see much of Ishita's painful memories. I'm sure there are plenty of things she does or sees which will remind her of moments she had spent with Subhu.


Thank you so much dear 😊

@bold - at the risk of repeating myself I'll just copy paste a few lines I wrote in my reply to Mary just a few comments ago 😳

she is a blank board as of now the thing is I believe the makers are opting for a novel like approach here, you only see things the protagonist sees and knows and atm that is Raman here, so we only know his end of the story, his side of things whenever its allowed. Also thats what sets YHM apart from the rest of the shows in this aspect - here the narrator (kinda) happens to be a man, so we know only his pain and trails unlike most which focus on the girl and neglect the hero. The show so far is barely 150 - 160 epis in, so this is not something which worries me truthfully, cause when Ishita takes over it will be very amazing to see the change of graph from her end. Also that would enable us some new insights into her 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: EkPaheli


Hi 😛 May I know your name pls 😳

@bold - 🤣🤣 made your day didnt I? ah the sense of accomplishment a victory provides 😉 😆😆

@red -☺️ thank you

@blue - I am a sucker for convos and will be so happy the day IshRa finally have a heart to heart regarding any matter which is what I believe is the foundation of any strong relationship


yeah sure... Meet 😊
n urs?
of course u did... u know when the epi aired..when he called shagun for dance...
i was really upset... not my fault...they showed precap as Ishita is too much hurt. nd i reacted that way only... but actual epi was complete turn...
but still i feel it could be better if they showed Ishita's hurt...
khair epi mein na sahi yahan hi sahi... one of the main reasons i love reading stories here... we get the scene what we actually want to see...
i needn't to say ur OS is master piece...loved it to core...
same here...me too big time lover for heart to heart convos...
i miss it sometimes in IshRa... want their conversations more often nd more open towards each other...

nd yeah hats off to u...how u take out time to reply all comments...thats really a sweet gesture from u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: FieryLioness


yeah sure... Meet 😊
n urs?
of course u did... u know when the epi aired..when he called shagun for dance...
i was really upset... not my fault...they showed precap as Ishita is too much hurt. nd i reacted that way only... but actual epi was complete turn...
but still i feel it could be better if they showed Ishita's hurt...
khair epi mein na sahi yahan hi sahi... one of the main reasons i love reading stories here... we get the scene what we actually want to see...
i needn't to say ur OS is master piece...loved it to core...
same here...me too big time lover for heart to heart convos...
i miss it sometimes in IshRa... want their conversations more often nd more open towards each other...

nd yeah hats off to u...how u take out time to reply all comments...thats really a sweet gesture from u 😊


Hi Meet I am Aani 😊

@bold - exactly my feelings

@red - ☺️ thank you

@blue - I guess they are doing this because deep down both of them are scared to open up to someone - like Raman said last night having a failed marriage isnt easy and once broken trust cannot easily be imparted to anyone else, Ishita will mouth something on similar lines tonight - that a broken heart takes a lot to mend yet it still carries around the cracks even if its mended so this will be a pattern till some major breakthrough happens I think until then we wont see any REAL convos as far as I can guess

@pink - 😳 well I cant always make replies but I try my best also I believe interaction with readers is the best reward for a writer 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
true said Aani... in last epi Raman's dialogue nd tonite Ishita's,
make it very clear, why we r not getting any open convos yet...
but i think time is not far... in spoilers we read Raman will talk to Ishita abt Shagun's suicide fiasco... m hoping they will execute it properly...nd we will see a conversation between both...
may be later Ishita tries more to gel up wid Raman nd try to make him speak nd let out all his hurt...

chalo gotta go... i have appointment in parlor don't wanna get late😆
c u arrnd
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Hello Aani!

I liked your story specially the last part was super cute!😃 Such a change in their behaviour yet so comfortable. It was really nice to read their mutual concern for Ruhi.
Coming to their dance which was the hot topic for so many days, I am probably the only one who supports Raman's dramatic idea. I agree it was unfair to Ishita when he spoke like that but it reflects the security Raman feels. He knows she will understand because things have changed between them and she did. There is a stark contrast between the Holi dance and this one. In the former, he used her and had never given it a thought. It was only to show Shagun. But here, the scenario changed. Nothing he did was for Shagun's sake. He just pities Shagun. Later on he will learn to be indifferent to her which will finally put an end to all such drama. If Raman had just ignored Shagun and went ahead to dance with Ishita, it would have made no difference to Shagun who would count it as a victory which would be of no use. He might as well put her in place. I mean, from which angle did she find Raman ogling at her? Blind woman! She is a person desperately trying to cling to her past without which she has no future. It was even more evident in the "Sangeet" that Ashok's interest in Shagun is only because of Raman. If he forgets her, she loses everything.
Ishita, true to her nature, immediately confronted Raman, through the dance. She was constantly pushing him away but he kept on coming back and then wiped her tears. What a way to communicate! Beautiful! How can one resist such persistence! At least, that's what it looked like to me.
Their story is moving at a comfortable pace. They have yet to learn so much about each other and I am very much looking forward to it.
I hope you don't mind this long post. I was on a vacation for 2 weeks and coming back I see all these people against Raman and Shagun's dance, that I couldn't resist sharing my view.


Hi Sneha how are you?
Hope you had a blast on your vacations 😊

@bold - that is an influence of what we see on screen they are finally getting comfy with each other and of course Ruhi is their world so concern for her comes to them as natural as breathing

@red - in hindsight I agree with you, but this OS was written prior to Galliyan airing and at the time I was actually mad at him for doing what he did and felt really sorry for Ishita - so you could say my anger cooled down with the time but before I saw few things I was pissed off at him majorly I even commented something along those lines on a post Lucky made about the dance - that while Raman is moving on surely this is I suppose the last stage of the closure he needs before he becomes indifferent towards Shagun - he wants to shame her because he wants her to suffer what he must have once the word of her leaving him for Ashok must have spread. Getting a divorce is bad enough as it is in Indian society, but being divorced because your wife chose another man over you is adding insult to the injury beyond words - so this is his revenge sorta I guess.

@blue - she is a narcissistic, self-absorbed woman who knows the worth she has in her life is only courtesy of the effect she can prove she still has on Raman, as was shown in the Mumbai party Ashok already has a roving eye, and was out for the entire night when that brat was sick. So I assume he had a ONS with that woman - the only reason he has kept Shagun is to hurt Raman, but with Ishita slowly becoming his priority he is seeing the diminishing value of his keep - once he is assured Raman has absolutely no regard for Shagun he would even stop flaunting her around, He may keep her for Adi' sake though, since he knows that is the only weapon he still has left in his quiver to hurt Raman and with the custody being allotted to Shagun - if he intends to use Adi he has to let her stay with him

@pink - yep like I said once I was calm enough I saw the dance with a whole new perspective and esplly the part about wiping the tear like I replied to Mary

beneath that anger was also the pain that she had, the fact she was hurt by this callous move Raman made, so when the pain somehow overpowered the anger, she could not hold it in anymore and a tear came forth, BUT the fact that Raman not only noticed it, but he wiped it off, and that too in a way which would not allow anyone to even notice that it was there in the first place it touched her. She was already feeling insulted but to cry in front of so many people would have been even more humiliating to her - in wiping away that one tear he saved the remainder of her pride and respect which made her forgive him as per me 😳 the placing her head on his shoulder was also a symbolic way of stating she finds herself secure with him enough to let him see her tears, that he is the shoulder she can lean on - and only him and no one else. 😳

@purple - yep they barely have begun knowing each other... and the love is yet to come in unlike most members I don't find them in love just yet - as of now they are accepting each other - waking up to the fact that yes this marriage was a compromise one made for Ruhi - but regardless its one and she is his wife and he is her husband and now they have each other - as each other' partner and its a given they look out for each other and trust and respect each other, also care for one another 😳

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