The Unwilling Participant - An IshRa OS - Page 2

Hey Aani...love ur writings as usual...

This one was long but that's a good thing 'cos then we feel satisfied...not at all sleepy...we get dreamy in the IshRa land...the detailing in thoughts, feeling and emotions you provide is just superb...i can completely picturise everything in my mind...

Loved how you connect things happened in the past...

The complete argument was very genuine and apt from the characters' view...in the show i guess its difficult to include such detailed aftereffects of things but ur OSs always makes up for it...

Keep up the good work and plss PM me too if u do to others

Couldn't agree more - An OS from Ishu's perspective !!!
But I agree to disagree with your last PS line just above your OS post!
Aani, its more, the merrier !
LOVED IT !!!

RES!! Very long indeed :P I'll read later :)

Wow 👏👏👏

I love that it was long Aani, especially that it was a long conversation between them, that is so so missing in the show.

WOW!U have built the story beautifully.I wud really like to watch such scenes in show too.raman sud realize his mistake.He can't use ishita everytime like this He time n again warns her not to interfare in his life but forgets that himself.Instead he hurts her n doesn't feel even slight regret of hurting her n thats irritates me a lot.Ur os was perfect expression of wat sud happen after mr.bhalla has done the drama.

Beautiful 👏
you always manage to calm us when we are hurt and upset for ishita. such a shame cvs never use opportunities in tracks to show normal heartfelt conversation between ishita and Roman.

Another great thing about your one off fictions is that they provide an insight in the characters' emotions through their subconscious thoughts and conversations that should be mentioned in the show but for some reasons they aren't included. Through this Os, the readers will have some ideas on how Ishu really felt. She must have felt so humiliated that even words cannot describe. Therefore this is causing her an unspeakable anger which is shown in her dance although she did later softened up and warmed up in the dance when her husband wipe her tears. And then very loving rested her head on his shoulder like her head belong to him and his shoulder. Normally both Ishra are very dominating but at that moment she submitted herself to him. She belong to him only. There is so much intensity,mind-blowing chemistry and unique storytelling which is communicated through their dance.

Now I am going off the track in here, coming back to your Os, you have done something vital in this Os which is writing in Ishu's point of view. That is a difficult task to master, particularly due to the fact that while we know Raman very well, since his character had progressed so much through the series so it's easy to identify his emotions and thoughts. Whereas we can't really see how Ishu is feeling or her thoughts because probably because the show didn't focus on that area. This is one thing about the show that I was disappointed about. Probably because there isn't enough time on show since its only approx. 22mins. Well done, my dear friend Aani, you have managed to write Ishu's point of view into very justified way and she was in character. 😊

Aani ji...

edited my post, you know where 😊

mind blowingly awesome...loved it :)