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Posted: 10 years ago

Hello YHMians, back with a new part...sorry for the delay!

Not proof checked...Errors honge...so pls excuse that!

Thanks for all the likes and comments..every comment is a motivation to write more...thanks a ton!

Part 14:

He didn't have to urge her any further after that. She pushed his shirt further away from his shoulders and lined up gentle kisses all along the wounded area and then finally rose up to kiss his cheeks...

Her face was close to him and he looked into her deep beautiful eyes!

He pushed aside the hair which troubled her eyes and their eyes met for a long moment before she snapped out blushing and buried her head into his chest. He kissed her hair and closed her in an intimate embrace. Both of them could feel the distance between them melting away and the new closeness was giving both a unique feel of ecstasy and peace which was beyond anything else!

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chayn bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

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Days were passing by and both Ishita and Raman had comfortably fit into the groove of their new life. The next step or rather their consummation still seemed far as none broached into it. Ishita was shy to take the initiative while Raman didn't want to force his wife into it. He didn't know if she was ready for it.

He had just stepped out from a client meeting when his phone buzzed with a message from an unknown number. He clicked open the message. Pictures attached to the message were enough for him to know who it was from.

"B*****D", he swore under his breath as he quickly dialled the number

He picked the call in a couple of rings, "Hello Mr Raman...tumaara call ka hi wait kar raha tha..."

"What do you want?"

Raman's direct question was answered by a laugh and then a sarcastic reply, "Aah I should have known...Angry Raman Kumar Bhalla on the roll"

Raman growled back angrily, "Come to the point! Ab iss pictures ko bhejne ka kya matlab hai?"

He replied calmly, "ab Ishu tumaari biwi hai toh usske pictures tumhe hi bhejunga na? Or did you want me to put it on the internet, haan?"

"SUBBU...tumaari gandi zubaan se Ishita ka naam matth lena...warna agli baar kuch bolne ke haalat mein nahi honge"

"aaah gussa...main toh darr gaya...but don't worry...main itna bhi bhoora nahi hoom"

His act and the words only angered Raman more, "tum kitna kamee** hai yeh toh mujhe patha chal gaya...maine kabhi nahi socha ke tum jaise insaan Ishita ke life mein..."

He snapped him short, "Exactly Raman, main Ishita ki life mein tha, hoom aur humesha rahunga...a divorce cannot take away my name from her life..."

"Don't you dare Subbu...Ishita se tumaara rishta tha...par ab nahi...ab woh meri biwi hai...aur raha sawaal unn photos ka, it makes no difference to me..."

"farq toh tumhe padhta hai Raman warna mujhe call kyun kiya?"

His question hit Raman hard but he soon shot back, "dekho, photos bhejke, aise bhakwaas baatein karke mere aur Ishita ke beech daraar nahi dhaal sakte...samjhe tum?"

He laughed at that,"daraar main dhal raha hoom, huh? Jis rishte mein already daraar ho, wahaan main kyun kuch karoom?"

Raman was about to blast him but Subbu went on without stopping, "Main Ishita ko acche se jaanta hoom...woh mujhse pyar karti thi, aur ab bhi mujhe aur humaare pyar ko bhulaa nahi paayi...shaayad hi kabhi bhool payegi...aakir main usska pehla pyar hoom...humaare beech pati patni ka real rishta tha...woh photos uss pyar ka, nasdeekiyaan ka proof hai...Ishita ne gusse mein mujhe neecha dikaane keliye tumse shaadi toh karliya but I know she can never get over me...and she can never love you with all her heart..."

That was the maximum Raman could hear. He shouted back, "Shut up..."

Subbu only grinned and mocked him back, "kyun sacch sunnke bhoora laga, huh?"

Raman didn't speak more. He cut the call but his mind was troubled by the conversation. He wasn't jealous or insecure regarding his relationship with Ishita. He wasn't even much bothered seeing those intimate photos of her with Subbu but even then why did he want to blast Subbu? Why did he even call him? As Subbu said, did it really make a difference to him? Was he so unaware of where their relationship stood? Or was it the incomplete relationship causing a feel of insecurity inside him? Why wasn't she able to get closer to him? Was Subbu really the reason?

He smacked himself for the dilemma he put himself in. He scolded himself for thinking about all such illogical things. Yet so many questions exploded in his mind stealing away the calmness he usually carried in him.

More than anything else, he was angry on himself for having let that creep and his talk affect him so much. Hadn't he indirectly fulfilled Subbu's intentions? He skipped the meeting in the afternoon and took time off to stay alone for some time. He needed his time and space to get over this insane anger and incoherent thoughts. He couldn't let all this affect or hurt Ishita. He couldn't even let her know about this.

Elsewhere, Ashok and his brother sat sipping a drink in the conference room. Ashok slyly smiled after a call. Suraj was eager to know what the smile was for.

Ashok said after cutting the call, "You were right Suraj...uss Raman Kumar Bhalla ko kamzor karne keliye usske sabse weak point ko hi dabaana padega...Jab Shagun ne mere liye usse choda tha tab woh toot gaya tha...lekin phir woh Ishita aagayi...but now, our plan is back on track...History repeats! Cheers to Subbu!"

[Note: Ashok had lured Shagun offering her a more luxurious life and also promised her a well placed career in modelling and advertising world]

Suraj clinked his glass as he chuckled knowing the rest of the story well, "Raman ke kismet hi kharaab hai Ashok warna Subbu humaare haathon mein kaise aa paunchtha...Ek phone call karne ki dheri thi aur Subbu US se seedha humaare office mein land hogaya...ab woh wahi karte jaayega jo hum kahenge"

Ashok laughed and replied, "Yes of course, in fact ussne already kardiya hai...Raman ne itna important meeting cancel kardiya...Emotionally usse breakdown karne ka isse bada hathiyaar ho hi nahi saktha"

The brothers laughed hoping that the cancelling of the meeting was just the start of the downfall of their rival Raman Kumar Bhalla.

Raman sat in the bar with his untouched drink. Yes he had come there to calm down his mind but then it wasn't happening, rather his restlessness and the guilt conscience only intensified. He had to be at home with his wife but he had come here. He had promised her that he would never resort to alcohol as a solution to his worries or tension. The promise bound him and stopped him from drinking what he ordered impulsively.

He made up his mind to get back home after almost an hour of idling around. By now, he was sure that home was the only place which could give him the much needed solace. Home, he cherished happily that his stone built shelter had become a home because of her.

Meanwhile, Ishita was no less in tension. She had received a call from Subbu as well. Disgusted and disturbed she was. Added to that, she was also worried about what Raman was going through since Subbu had told her that he had sent a gift to her husband. A gift that her husband would love to see and those were memories of his wife's past marriage. She instantly knew that Subbu had been upto some nasty mischief to ruin her life with Raman.

She had tried calling Raman from that point but Raman didn't pick the call. She even called up his office to know that Raman had left early after cancelling all the meetings and appointments.

She couldn't understand head or tail of what was happening but the only thing which gave her a little relief was the trust she had on her Raman and their love. Their love, though not acknowledged, was beyond all these disturbances. All she wished for now was a love filled complete life with him. In these tense moments, she realized that she was wasting away their precious moments of life due to trivial issues. It was time she surpassed all her issues and moved on. She had to give Raman all the love he deserved and also desired. Her eyes fell on their wedding photo that he had fondly framed and kept on the side table. She took it in her hands.


Gliding her fingers on his handsome face, she pouted, "Where are you Raman? Why aren't you picking my calls? Miss you..."

His smile always made her smile but today she flared up, "Don't smile and annoy me...Just come back to me soon"

She hugged the photo and closed her eyes praying for him to come back soon. As if answering her prayers, the doorbell rang, snapping her out of her thoughts.

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Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Part 15:

From the double bell, she knew it was him. She sprinted to the door knowing for sure that it was him.

She forgot all her tension and the moment he stepped in, she rushed into his arms. She kissed his chest voicing, "I missed you"

He was surprised by her sudden hug and her words. He too pecked her hair, "Missed you too"

She complained, "Why didn't you call me?? Neither did you pick my calls"

All he could reason back was,"I wanted to give you a surprise"

The truth was also that he had switched off his phone so that none from office called and disturbed him. A call from Ishita was the last thing he expected since she never called during office hours.

She smiled and whispered, "I don't need surprises...I get so worried when you aren't around"

After a long moment of comforting silence, he tried to part but she wasn't letting him go. Raman voiced in concern due to her changed behaviour, "Ishu...you ok na?"

She just hummed as she didn't want to burden him with her anxieties regarding Subbu while he too was thinking the same. Both were trying to act normal and casual with each other. He plainly replied, "Then let me freshen up...then we can have dinner together"

She opened her eyes wide as she realized that she hadn't made dinner. She nodded and he walked into the room while she rushed to the kitchen. In ten minutes he walked into the kitchen and casually stood beside her. She couldn't help gaze at him. His presence distracted her for the first time. All she could think of was just crash on to him and feel him close to her.

She knew that she wouldn't be able to cook if he stood there, gazing at her. So despite his protests and offer to help, she pushed him out of the kitchen. He was confused because he always helped her in her chores. So what was her problem today? He didn't probe much but just decided to go.

All through the dinner, he was quite silent which irked her a little. In his usual form, he always told her about his day at office and there would never be such unsettling silence between them. His topics never ended while talking to her, neither did his naughty pranks and comments. She was so accustomed to his flirting comments that today his silence poked into her.

She had planned to tell him amidst his talk about being ready to progress their relationship further but today, he was totally silent and not giving her a chance to open up the topic. She was worried now and was also wondering if it was all due to Subbu's sudden interference.

Raman vanished into their room soon after dinner. She finished clearing up the kitchen and then walked to their room. She saw that he was in the balcony, clutching the railings and looking at nothing in particular.

She decided to confront him with all her anxieties rather than continuing this silent vibes which wasn't seeming too positive for her.

He didn't seem to have noticed her coming and standing next to him.

"Raman, does it bother you that I was once married and another man has touched me before you?"

Yes that was the only question whose answer would completely do away with all the anxieties and insecurities off their life. Her sudden question brought him out of his own trance. He had to agree that Subbu's call and those photos had troubled him initially but then never the way she assumed. His silence and out of form behavior was just to stop himself from blurting out anything about Subbu to her and upset her. Moreover, he was also upset and angry over himself for having given her into the hands of such a creepy perverted guy who had hurt her so much and still wanted to harm her. That guilt was also the reason for his silence and off behavior.

He turned to her and looked at her enquiringly trying to understand what she was thinking. He took a deep breath when he realized that he had to pluck away even the slightest doubt regarding this from her mind forever.

He replied back, "Does it bother you that I was once married and have loved, touched Shagun in every way that a husband loves his wife?"

She was perplexed and felt thrown off her stand when he put forth this question. She had never once thought about it and felt angry about him asking it to her. A sudden realization struck her that she had done the same to him and perhaps hurt him by doubting his true love for her.

From her guilt ridden eyes and regretting expressions, he could understand that she had never thought about all that. So he replied with a smile, "That gives you your answer too Ishita!"

She went on to share that all her worries and anxieties were due to Subbu's call. He opened up too knowing that it wasn't wise to hide things from her. He was just attempting to hide it all from her and keep her away from all the evil things that engulfed her.

Nothing remained secret between them and that gave a huge relief to both disturbed minds. They were at ease now and felt all their emotional burdens taken off them.

They enjoy a long moment of silence as the cool night breeze caressed their faces romantically. He knew that the discussion had been rather serious and heavy. To lighten it up, he probed naughtily, "Accha yeh bathao? Why did you chase me from the kitchen?"

Without a second thought, she blurted out, "You were distracting me Raman! If you stood there, then you wouldn't have got dinner", she replied mindless of what that meant. Raman was pleasantly surprised by her reply. It was the first time that he felt that she was physically attracted to him.

He naughtily commented, "hmmm dinner nahi miltha but shaayad kuch aur, kuch better mil jaatha, hai na?"

She noticed the naughty glint in his eyes and blushed fully understanding what he meant by that. Her blush made him naughtier and he chinned her up to face him. She couldn't handle his gaze for long. She just whispered, closing her eyes shyly, "Raman..."

He leaned closer to her face huskily asking, "Kyaa??"

She didn't wait there but just walked into their room swiftly not giving him a chance to grab her. He grinned wondering what had gone into her all of a sudden. But the gradual progress in their relationship all these days was giving him the confidence to push for more.

He entered the room and saw her standing clutching the sides of her kurti. He knew she was quite nervous and that made him know what she was thinking in those moments. Perhaps she was ready too and wanted to take this forward.

He shut the door and walked to her. Cupping her face in his hands, he kissed her forehead. His gaze shifted to her pink luscious lips which seemed to be inviting him for a long time now, but he stopped and enquired, "Are you ready for this?"

She lowered her gaze and nodded shyly. He smiled and voiced slowly, "I want to hear your yes Ishu..."

"hmmm", came her reply as she raised her eyes to meet his.

She tried to look down instantly but he stopped her by capturing her lips. She closed her eyes as his lips touched hers. Her hands encircle him passionately and she stood on her toes as he deepened it. He lifted her and she bent down her head to kiss him and never parted from him. He forcefully parted lowering her down to trail a line of kisses down her cheeks, nuzzling her neck lightly. She trembled as his lips and fingers played all around her sending a shiver down her spine. She kissed his shoulders gently clasping on to him. He dipped his face into her hair breathing in her fragrance. Her scent captivated his senses and drove him wilder.

He passionately roamed his lips all over her not wanting to part away even for a second.

When she couldn't handle the passion any longer, she just let go of his hold and almost fell into the bed. He gently laid her onto the bed and slid besides her pulling her into his arms.

Both had silently confessed their love long back and today it was a mere union of their physical forms which was a reflection of their immense love and passion.

Ishita and Raman, whose hearts were already bonded, become one in all meanings.

Problems, worries, tensions, conspiracies, trouble makers would always remain part of their life. They never end or stop bothering them but their love for each other is strong enough to sustain and tide over every problem. NO Ashok, No Suraj, No Subbu or nothing can break this love, nor stop them from filling up their life with colors of happiness and love.

Together they can solve it all and keep living their life happily.

Every problem that came their way only strengthened their love and brought them closer!

Usko Chupa Kar Mein
Sab Se Kabhi Le Chalu Kahin Door
Aankhon Ke Pyaalo Se Pita Rahu
Uske Chere Ka Noor

Is Zamane Se Chupkar
Puri Kar Lu Mein Hasrat
Hai Tujhe Bhi Izaazat
Karle Tu Bhi Mohabbat

In Dino Dil Mera Mujhse Hai Keh Raha
Tu Khwaaab Saja Tuu Jele Zara

Hai Tujhe Bhi Izaazat Karle Tu Bhi Mohabbat

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So how was it? pls do reply...


Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was worth the wait... Finally a mindblowing update, totally loved how they actually discussed about Subbu's matter with each other. The underlying strength of their relationship is trust and it was not as weak as how Ashok, Suraj nor Subbu has perceived.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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My good ness double dhamaka... 😲 😉

running to read...

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She just whispered, closing her eyes shyly, "Raman..."
He leaned closer to her face huskily asking, "Kyaa??"

perfect moment...it was...i just cant get over it...
and thanks vidya for adding it...
and dont forget to add in ur upcoming stories tooo

this was big surprise of ishra till now...
that moment...blush..husky whisper...

*oopsss blushing blushing *

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hailaa...u ended sr in some lines...

not done 🤣

between im eagerly to knw... hw raman

goin to backfire three kameena's sassumma(suraj),

beta(ashok) n new puppet (subbu)😡

i want raman to punch the donkey head so much that he n his

so called sassumma never to buttin ishra life...😡

anyways thanks to subbu...😆

with one call.. both who were having trouble

in taking first step... went for freehit...😆 🤣

puttar n jkr r really unpredicatable 🤣
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Originally posted by: rev4eva

It was worth the wait... Finally a mindblowing update, totally loved how they actually discussed about Subbu's matter with each other. The underlying strength of their relationship is trust and it was not as weak as how Ashok, Suraj nor Subbu has perceived.


absolutely...I really want Ishra in the show as strong as this. though they tide the problems and come out of it, their relationship always stays strained and in the verge of breaking apart. that annoys me always!
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Posted: 10 years ago
A perfect ending to a perfect fic V. I started reading it after a very long time and I enjoyed it so much. This was beautiful, romance queen. When this two are together, no one can beat them.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nvr xpctd u vl end dis soon...
waitng fr updte eagrly bt it ended...
as alwys u r the queen of romnce of ishra...
its alwys be unique nd diffrnt...
may b i tell u alwys bt ur updtes r stres bustr fr me...
thnk u so mch vidya fr dis updte...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shavi2311

nvr xpctd u vl end dis soon...

waitng fr updte eagrly bt it ended...
as alwys u r the queen of romnce of ishra...
its alwys be unique nd diffrnt...
may b i tell u alwys bt ur updtes r stres bustr fr me...
thnk u so mch vidya fr dis updte...


thanks...lots of stories and I couldnt handle every update...so chose to finish some of them...😆
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Originally posted by: Oishi_S

A perfect ending to a perfect fic V. I started reading it after a very long time and I enjoyed it so much. This was beautiful, romance queen. When this two are together, no one can beat them.


thanks O...u make me blush! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely end to the SS Vidya and I see what you did there - ANOTHER SR 🤣
Vidya can I ask you what is the number of this one? 🤣
Edited by EkPaheli - 10 years ago

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