OS: Rekindled Passion!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
Awww sooo sooo hot! Loved the way you wrote about what they were going through! Amazing piece of writing!!😉

Thank u isha for liking this story . It feels good to read goody goody things about one's write up. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omggg tht ws HOTTT...my goodness...i WANT MORE MORE MORE...🤣🤣...PRETTY PLZ iska part 2 part 3 likho plz...durin party n aftr returnin frm party...i wanna see till HOW LONG these two can "control".. 🤣🤣...

nywz truly PASSIONATE HOT ROMANTIC OS..i ws fully lost in it...!! ...Dori scene ws totally OOOH LALALAAA...

Nikki my darling!! 🤗

I always want to surprise u with a pm thati have written up so ething but u end up surprising me by seeing first thing once I post my story!!😳😆

U found it HOT??? Like seriously? U know I always feel jealous when I read hot fictions because I feel I can't write hot stuff n I am good only for rosy rosy type of romance n Romedy 😳

But I am happy to read ppl blushing n finding it hot!!

I guess I will have to think of part 2 of this now!!

Thank u massoom partner for ur feedback. 🤗

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Haaye! Maza aa gaya! RKB embarrassmant se bach gaya😆

You should write more mature stuff😉( I mean stuff that is more mature)😆

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome os ...
The way controlled himself was markable...
U describe their feelings abt each other so nicely...
Plz continue it...

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: PreciousPri
This was such a well written OS!!

You described their feelings so so well... IshRa's attempt to control... lets see how long it lasts 😉

Passionate and Hot ... loved the dori part

Please write an update for this... please

Thank u dear!!

Yeah it is fun to see Raman Bhalla controlling himself. For Ishita it is much more easier n even in the show. Raman is an amazing character, a personality which attracts. N him getting attracted us even better!!

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priyanka chakraborty

@pscmp

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Its truly hot plz continue...soon 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: _Deepika_
OMG...U r so cruel ...this cant be an oneshot...this has to have more parts...plz plz plz...write another part...get these two dhakkans confess for god sake...it was so flawlessly written ...his uncontrollable naughty dreams ...her indecent desires ...RKB's unique style of gifting JKR ...ufff...wear this and get ready or else i will leave without u ...aisa lag raha hai ...dhamki diya he kisine...poor soul ...not at all able to bear the torture of his beautiful and sexy wife ...LOVED LOVED LOVED this write up...u r such a beautiful writer dear...keep writing 😊

Deepika do I have to repeat myself?? U r one of the ppl who I really look forward to.

Thank u for loving my work n for ur generous comments on it.

Cruel??? Am I??? 😆

Well it is fun to b cruel sometimes just like our hero!!😆

But u r giving my ideas. I have always stopped my stories before a confession. Let's c how I can make them confess especially the kharoos.

Will update this soon hopefully.

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore
Haaye! Maza aa gaya! RKB embarrassmant se bach gaya😆
You should write more mature stuff😉( I mean stuff that is more mature)😆

I should??? 😳

Why not??😆

Thanks for enjoying n for ur feedback.