Os I Care for you ! part 4 page 6

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Hello guys !! This is my first post here , i am an new member !! and im just loving reading all the os here !! So im trying out something ! Positive and Negative feedback accepted !!


Raman : Madam tayyar kab hogi ?
Ishita : Ho rahi hoon 2 min .
Ishra were going to a important business party, and ruhi wanted ishita to go along.
Raman to himself : Abe yaar , iss madrasan ko lekar jana padega ! Udar kitna embarassed karegi . Bashan jar jar ke . Isko room mein lock kardoon ? he said with an eyebrow raised.
and continued : Nahin Yaar !! Ruhi upset ho gayegi or kitne papad belne padein ke usko manane ke liye. Or yeh madrasan kitna drama keregi. Bewakoof aurat.
Raman to ishita : Darling, Party abhi hai , tumhare kalyan mandapan ka mahurat nahin hai . suba 4am ka . Jaldi karooo
Ishita came out wearing a sizling white evening dress. and raman was wearing a black tuxedo. They both were looking fab together .
Raman was checking her out . He started from the bottom her high heels , then her sexy legs that she dont show often and he continued , her waist and then her beautiful face. with a bright smile .
She was actually really impress by his looks too .
Ishita to herself : Ishuu... Mihika theek hi kehti ti ! Raman kitne handsome hain !! Subu to kuch bhi nahin hain inke samne . Ajj to sari ladkian inko hi dekein gi .OR Wahan pe to Shagun bhi toh hogi ,
Her face fell down , she didnt like Raman and Shagun to meet cuz she was always finding reason to get close to him . and she didnt like this .
Ishita to herself : Im not jealous , but he is my husband .
Ishita came back from her thought. and raman was still freeze looking at her .They shared an eyelock , wonder how long it was. They were just lost in their own world
and suddenly raman came back to his senses and look at his watch : It was 8pm shit they were late .
He went close to ishita ! Ishita step back, he went more close, she step back .
She couldnt go back cuz there was a wall .
Raman put his hand against the wall to block ishita. and went close to her . Soo close .
He started to caress her face with his hand , she closed her eyes and started to smile . She always liked his touch . Raman puts his lips closer to her . Raman touched his lips with hers. Ishita , whose hand were on raman's shoulder , held him tighly , just then raman went near to her ears and screamed : MADAM chalO .
Ishita was really disapointed cuz she really wanted to kiss raman and she was embarassed. How could Ravan kumar do this ? He is so shamelesss. He is making fun of my feelings.
Raman held her hand and drag her to the car.
They sat in the car and reached the venue without exchanging a word . ishita couldnt even look in his eyes.
They reached the place. Raman's inverstors and business associates came to welcome him . Raman introduced ishita to them. and then Raman and ishita went to a table and sat . Raman : Waise Jhansi ki rani tum teek ho ?
Ishita : Haan mujhe kya hoga ? she said in a very irritated tone
Raman : Achaa i get it now
ishita : what ?
Raman : U wanted me to complete what i started ?
Ishita understood what he meant but was acting innocent.
and said : HUh
Raman : haan jo aj kamre mein hua
Ishita : Kamre mein kya hua ?
Raman : Bewakoof to tum ho , or bhool ne ki bhi bhimari hai tumko , dentist kahin ki
Ishita : Just SHut up
Raman : You can make shut up .and winked at her .
Ishita to herself : Iss ko kya hogaya .she looked around to see if shagun was there but no she wasnt there yet .
Ishita said : please tell how ? Cuz that would be the best thing
Raman : U dont know how ?
Ishita : Bolo
Raman : yeh sab bol kar nahin hota , Action time u know .
Ishita understood what he meant and looked down shyly.
TO tease her even more, Raman said : Oh please joke tha ! Sharma kyun rahi ho ?
Raman : Ishita !
Ishita super annoyed : Yes
Raman : On a serious note , U look fab together and Shagun will die seeing u .
SHe said : Thank u ! and why tha hell do u always bring shagun between us .
Raman noticed that IShita didnt liked to bring shagun between them and she didnt like to talk about her either.
Raman : Okay baba !! i wont next time . Ruhi promise .
SHe smiled at him , and just then she saw a hand on raman shoulder and it was none other than shagun .
shagun : Hey raman !
Raman didnt respond .
Shagun : Raman u look great today . Like always , u know !! Meri pehli pasand jo te tum
Ishita felt really bad and she left the table .
and she went to stand on a corner .
After a moment raman run to join her , but she was really annoyed.
Raman : Ishita come na ! Leave her . She is like this .
Ishita : Leave me alone !
Raman : Y is it affecting u ? As if u were my wife , ur just ruhi's mom .
Ishita felt really bad . A hour back : he was about to kiss her and now he is saying this . whats wrong with him ? He cannot feel the connection between them . OF COUrSE HOW would he ? he is just madly in love with his ex. she felt to irritated and and left the place.
While she was walking Raman saw , that her dress zip was opening .
Raman : shit yaar ! Yeh madrasan pagal hai kya ? Theek se apni dress bhi band nahin ki .
ya itni moti hai ke dress band hi nahin huyi .
Jo bhi hai u must help her raman , she is your wife and u cannot let this happennd. She is Mrs Raman Kumar Bhalla.
Then suddenly , the light closed and all the couple were requested to join the dance floor and enjoy the evening .
Raman went to ishita and grab her waist and bring her to the dance floor.
She said : Leave me raman go to ur shagun
Raman pull her even more closer and start touching her back
Ishita : Leave me !!
Raman shut up . DANCE with me
Ishita : just to show ur ex right ?
Raman : think what u want i dont care
Ishita and raman were dancing passionately .
on the song "Maine kudko "
Raman put his hand on her back and tried to close her zip
ishita felt something weird she thought he was about to unzip her clothes.
ISHita : what tha hell ? whats wrong with u ? what are u doing ?
Raman : Im doing this cuz i care for u ! and i have rights on u

Do let me know if i should continue !!!
sorry for gramatical errors :D




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really enjoyed it, do write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Obviously plss continue. Would love to knw wt happened next. Awesum update n u write fabb...

Im waiting for ur PM...PLSSS..thnkuuu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome 😃 ..pls continue dear 😃 ..loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
Raman : Im doing this cuz i care for u ! and i have rights on u
Ishita : which right are u talking about ? Im ruhi's mom and not your wife .
Raman came close to her and said in her ears : Ur dress zip is open moti .
Ishita : U opened ?
Raman : I have some manners. I wont do all this in front of everyone . Bewakoof desperate madarasan
Ishita smiled at his cuteness .
Raman : Im trying to close it . But ur so fat that its not closing .
Ishita : Please close it Raman !!
Raman : A gayi apni line pe . But ishita its too dark here i cannot see anything.
Ishita : To kya karoun mein . Mera dress kul gaya to ?
Raman : Main hoon na ! and winked at her
He hugged her and bring her to a room in the venue.
Raman : Deka i told u !! When Im here not to fear.
Ishita didnt said anything , she was just worried about her dress.
Ishita : Raman will u please close the zip ?
Raman sat on the bed and said : Toda pyaar se kaho
Ishita : RAMANNN
Raman : no baba !! Pyaar se !! Wildly nahin ,.
Ishita : Mujhe tumhari zaroorat nahin ill do it myself . She tried to close it but she struggle. her hands were not reaching .
She was damn irritated .
Ishita made a puppy face and look at her ravan kumar
Ishita : Raman ..
Raman : Im waiting ... Pyaar se !!
Ishita : U know what ? Bahaar mein jao . Ill take help from someone else . Maybe someone hotter than u !!
She just realised what she said . She called Raman hot . She wish she could take her words back . He was smilling .
She went near the door to leave the room . He came and held her hand .
Ishita : Chodo mujhe ,,, I will die but not take ur help now
Raman : Kiski logi ?
Ishita : Kissi ki bhi !? Par tumhari hargiss nahin.
He locked the door and blocked her with his hand.
Raman : Pehle bahir ja kar to dikao
Ishita: Leave me !! Pagal admi .
Raman : Wait ... What did u said then ?
Ishita remembers her word but try to act innocent .
Ishita : euh... hmmm Nothing .
Raman : U Said someone hotter than me ? that means u find me hot right ?
Ishita : U hot ? My foot .
Raman : Oh please ! i know im attractive lady . But please control urself .
Ishita : Ya right !! Keep praising urself .
Raman : im not ur the one who praised me ! I know I myself Raman Kumar Bhalla im irrestible .
Ishita : Let me go !! My dress is opening Stupid ! Praand
Raman : Thats great !! and winked at her .
Ishita : Its not funny anymore !! Are u helping me or no ?
Raman : Kyun margayi ho ?
Ishita : what ?
Raman : ur the one who said u prefer dying before taking my help ?
Ishita was not enjoying this anymore . She just stop to reply .
Raman : Gooungi ho gayi ho kya ?
Ishita didnt respond
Raman understood now it was too much . But how would he control his feeling while closing her dress. He was his husband and he started to have hidden feeling for her . There was moment he just wanted to kiss her ! but he stopped himself everytime.
Raman : Turn
Ishita gradually turned and he started to zip her dress. and gradually started to touch her back . She was liking his touch . She always did . Then gradually he finally closed the zip .
He was still passing his fingers on her back .
Ishita : Raman yeh app and she turned back
Facing him now
Raman : Ishita shhh Chup kar jao ! Warna.
Ishita : Warna . she understood what he was upto . and she wouldnt mind if it happens.In fact , she also wanted to kiss him .
Raman grab her waist so passionately .and pull her closer. and closer. He couldnt resist ! She was just perfect .
He put his lip closer to hers. and end up kissing her passionately . She reciprocated .
Both of them were so enjoying it !!
She was just not understanding this men , there is moment he is so awnn and there is come he is arghhh.
Finally they broke the kiss because they were breathless. They looked at each other akwardly .
Raman leaves her and went to sit on the bed.
Ishita was embarassed and she was blushing Raman : Well ishu .
He called her ishu for the first time and she liked it .
Raman : Well , Yeh jo bhi hua , im not regretting it .
Ishita didnt know what to say .
Ishita : Well , we are married . so chalta hai ,Chill
Raman : Really ? thats weird . Mujhe laga ta that u will slap me .
Ishita : Well i was about to. Then i just saw how desperate u were . I can understand , u havent kissed someone since 6 years na . after shagun .
She just wanted to know.
Raman : Oh hello ! Apni kahani bata rahi ho .
If u didnt wanted , you could have stopped me ! But tum bhi to maze le rahi thi na ! Ab kya drama kar rahi ho.
Ishita blushed.
Raman : By the way , Shagun kiss better than u . Just saying . She was really wild with me .
Ishita : I dont wanna know about it . i dont care
Raman : Ur just jealous cuz u dont kiss well . Pehli kiss thi na zindagi ki
Ishita : Ur dream ! I kissed Subu before u ! AND he was so much better. U know the feeling to kiss taller guys . its just awnn
Raman to himself : damn shameless woman .she used to kiss subu and they were only engaged.
Raman continued : Well ishita !! JO kehna hai kehlo . but tumhe kiss karte wakt wo feel nahin ayi jo shagun ke sath athi thi . U know
Ishita : shi shi shi ! gande admi .
Raman: U were the one who said we are married. so why u shy ?
Ishita : raman u know what ? just shut up .
Raman : Awnn jalan ho rahi hai .
Ishita : Jale meri jooti.
Raman : really
Ishita : i can kiss better than ur ex
Raman : Prove it .
Raman was sitting on the bed and ishita went on him and sat on his lap and started to kiss him , very passionately .


Do tell me if u liked it !!
Im just doing Ishra scenes .!! and thanks for the comments !!
Will continue soon ! Can u guys suggest me what u guys wanna read ?
thank u !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super duper amazing
Sorry for not commenting earlier was just a little busy with exams
But amazing story loved it
Continue super super soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You should apply to join Balaji!!! Loved this whole scene! Awww!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

You should apply to join Balaji!!! Loved this whole scene! Awww!


Awnnn that is so sweeet of u
Im
Glad u liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a cute OS.Like how you've mixed romance with the usual nhok jhok that happens between Raman and Ishita.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the whole scene! You need to continue the whole ' I kiss better then your ex' thing! Awesome 😃

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