Ehsaas Track: Collection of 10 OSes - Page 47

Loved it..

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Fantastic update Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Loved Ishra scene at d party!Sonali Kotnis Is here!Waiting to see jealous Ishita!Pls continue soon!

thank you :)

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

Hey Lucky? 😊

Anyways, I'm not sure if I have commented on any of your work, since I'm mostly silent until necessary. 😳

But this latest installment of your series compelled me to comment. I absolutely love the pace at which you are going! I love reading the fine details and the little things that keep our IshRa going and most importantly, I love your trend of show each of their individual thoughts!

Lastly, you're a fantastic writer! 👏

Thank you very much for your comments :) I think you commented on one of my earliest stories.

I do believe it is essential to explore and detail their thoughts. It helps me build a better image of the characters and relate to them on the show too!

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Oh man WHY was sonali there DAMN
It was a nail biting moment the bold ishita the romantic raman the party and everything so perfect then we have SONALI
I wanted more ISHRA
If I were ishita I would have pulled raman away to the washroom and finish up what was to be started ;)
Anyways in my dream ishra land I forgot to mention that this update was just superb
The emotions were soo nice written
Lucky how about emailing sonali ( the writer of YHM) to make the writer for a couple of episodes I bet u will give the show much better TRPS then she would have evr dreamt off
Ur story has no loop holes I read again and again and it just perfect
Love ur quotes at the end :D
Great work
Please update one more part with no sonali
Btw I have a request of an OS u write emotions soo well can u write an os where Raman is giving ishita a" full body" massage please but that's if u have time :)
Thanks soo much more the pm
Ps : u asked how my exams were ? They were superb and I passed with a distinction.
Pss: thanks for asking for my exams I felt that to be soo sweet :D

first... Congrats on your exams!!!

@bold... thank you very much... I detest gaps in stories, so I try and make sure mine has none. and I am glad you thought so. thats really a compliment I will hold close to my heart

Originally posted by: debomaaneet

OMG really???Sonali Kotnis, Raman's imaginary girl??Ab ye kahan se tapak padi! 🤔
Next part is going to b interesting, for sure.
Mujhe to abhi se karele ki boo aa rahi hai ;))) Love is in everything..in their unspoken words, in their concern for each other, in their hesitation, in their gestures.The warmth of their unspoken love can b felt."LOVE WAS WHEN I LOVED YOU".
Loved how Samir being a sincere friend told Raman about Ishita...I AM IN LOVE WITH THE UPDATE :*
5 stars from me! * * * * * :D

Who said Sona was imaginary Debu ??? 😆

Thanks dear for your comments, as always :) and about the lines you quoted for me, I am truly humbled!

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Wat the!!! Sona??? 😲 😆
That was my first reaction after reading the story!!
Now coming to ur write up,
Lucky ji u r on a roll. Another beautiful OS from u.
I love to spend a Sunday reading good stuff n this made my morning. 😃

Thanks for your lovely comments Jaanu 😊

Sona... yes😃 wait and watch, I only hope I can do justice to the suspense I introduced 😊

Originally posted by: cool_aparna

Very well written Lucky...

All situations were very real...Ishu asking abt Raman thru Ruhi, milk spilt in her distraction, Raman going to Mihir's place to distract himself...helping him in setting kitchen, realising what change ishu has brought in him, Ishu's persona u described as it seems to ppl i.e. when she met Sameer...bang on...and u ended it on Sona...that's interesting...awaiting next part...

Thanks Aparna... will post something tonight I think

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Hello Lucky!😊

Ever since I started watching the show, Baawra Mann has been my favouriate song for Ishita and Raman. For me, the song describes the essence of their story. I have this weird habit of assigning songs to situations let it be however trivial. I was so excited when I saw that you selected this song. Your story was as beautiful as the song.

Aww! Poor Raman. The guy must have been very embarrassed and it is so like him to avoid her.

Raman is a really well written character. It is not just about his maturity, understanding and perceptiveness. One would actually believe that he is the CEO of a successful company. It is easy for him to do any sort of task be it household or office. More so because of Ishita's presence. I loved that entire paragraph.

Raman should really need to convey his entire thought. The guy always means something and says something else when it comes to Ishita.😆 You've selected a lovely attire for Ishita. I really like the combination of blue and green and when combined with a hidden meaning, it is even more beautiful😃

Sonali Kotnis! I don't think I can wait long for the next chapter.😆

On the show, we are at this point witnessing intimacy creeping slowly in to Ishita and Raman's relation and your story kind of reflects that. The breakfast and phone call scene of yesterday's episode is a perfect example. It was so beautiful to watch. I felt the same while reading this OS. Thank you for that.👏😊

Hey... like I said, this is not the story I wanted to write... I had a song and story in mind, this part was only supposed to be one paragraph of background... but once I wrote it, it took me more than 1 hour (and I m not exaggerating) to find a song... I LOVE this song, and i started playing my playlist, only because I was bored searching for random songs, because this story didnt have a theme as such. and this song is always on my playlist, so when it started, I had my Eureka moment!!! I am really glad you liked it

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

Haha lucky what a ending

And a slightly different vibe from your normal story but good

Thanks Leo :)

Originally posted by: sree89

well this is the first time that I am commenting on your works...but I think I have read almost all your works until now in this forum,you are an amazing writer...and loved this part..it is fantastic ...fingers crossed to read more about Ishra...

Thanks Sree... for commenting on my stories. Feels good to know you have read the previous ones too!

As long as the onscreen characters continue to impress me, I will write. thanks for the encouragement :)