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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#431

OMG really???Sonali Kotnis, Raman's imaginary girl??Ab ye kahan se tapak padi! 🤔
Next part is going to b interesting, for sure.
Mujhe to abhi se karele ki boo aa rahi hai ;))) Love is in everything..in their unspoken words, in their concern for each other, in their hesitation, in their gestures.The warmth of their unspoken love can b felt."LOVE WAS WHEN I LOVED YOU".
Loved how Samir being a sincere friend told Raman about Ishita...I AM IN LOVE WITH THE UPDATE :*
5 stars from me! * * * * * :D

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

These lines are for you only Lucky di...
"Through all Eternity to thee A joyful song I'll raise,
For Oh! Eternity's too short to utter all thy praise"
-Joseph Addison (The Spectator)

Love you 🤗 🤗 🤗
M missing all colourfull heart shapes n that muahh smiley of whatsapp here 😉

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

Wat the!!! Sona??? 😲 😆
That was my first reaction after reading the story!!
Now coming to ur write up,
Lucky ji u r on a roll. Another beautiful OS from u.
I love to spend a Sunday reading good stuff n this made my morning. 😃

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

Very well written Lucky...

All situations were very real...Ishu asking abt Raman thru Ruhi, milk spilt in her distraction, Raman going to Mihir's place to distract himself...helping him in setting kitchen, realising what change ishu has brought in him, Ishu's persona u described as it seems to ppl i.e. when she met Sameer...bang on...and u ended it on Sona...that's interesting...awaiting next part...

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Hello Lucky!😊

Ever since I started watching the show, Baawra Mann has been my favouriate song for Ishita and Raman. For me, the song describes the essence of their story. I have this weird habit of assigning songs to situations let it be however trivial. I was so excited when I saw that you selected this song. Your story was as beautiful as the song.

Aww! Poor Raman. The guy must have been very embarrassed and it is so like him to avoid her.

Raman is a really well written character. It is not just about his maturity, understanding and perceptiveness. One would actually believe that he is the CEO of a successful company. It is easy for him to do any sort of task be it household or office. More so because of Ishita's presence. I loved that entire paragraph.

Raman should really need to convey his entire thought. The guy always means something and says something else when it comes to Ishita.😆 You've selected a lovely attire for Ishita. I really like the combination of blue and green and when combined with a hidden meaning, it is even more beautiful😃

Sonali Kotnis! I don't think I can wait long for the next chapter.😆

On the show, we are at this point witnessing intimacy creeping slowly in to Ishita and Raman's relation and your story kind of reflects that. The breakfast and phone call scene of yesterday's episode is a perfect example. It was so beautiful to watch. I felt the same while reading this OS. Thank you for that.👏😊

Edited by Metamorphmagus - 11 years ago

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Haha lucky what a ending

And a slightly different vibe from your normal story but good

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sree89

@sree89

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#437

well this is the first time that I am commenting on your works...but I think I have read almost all your works until now in this forum,you are an amazing writer...and loved this part..it is fantastic ...fingers crossed to read more about Ishra...