IshRa OS: Llovera! *CHAPTER 2* PG1

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lourel24
loved it.Ravan kumar wud not spare ishita now.He wud fully embarass her.Wud like to see ishita too knowing about his fantacy so,that she cud too embarass him.it wudv be superb to see mr.bhalla embarass becz of his testestrones.cute.plz do that.

Embarrassment galore, yeah? 😆 Sure

Gracias!😃

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
OMG!! Like seriously!! This is the mature stuff u were talking about. I cant write like you i am afraid. Not pro enough!!😳
But i love yours.
Ishu having wild dreams - too hot to handle why only for Raman Bhalla, even for me!!😳

Thanks a lot! 😃

Did it get too risque/sleazy? I hope not. 😳

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: magati
nice thanks for the pm
continue soon

Thank you! PM karna toh mera farz banta tha😆

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Hey Pareena so this is unfamiliar territory now and so sizzling at that ... Raman heard her - interesting development... really interesting cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve next for us.

Thanks for commenting! What I have up my sleeves doesn't look impressive enough to me. But you guys seem to like what I write. So I guess I will keep posting😆

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum
Firstly, good to see that you are ACTUALLY alive and thought of finishing your stories.
Secondly, thank you for the PM. Much needed. As in the way the activity in this forum is increasing, searching for specific posts ends up being tedious or futile.😆
Gosh never knew that Ishita's hormones would provoke her to such an extent that she won't have any control even in her dreams!😉😆
Nice thought. Expected a continuation of the first part. Nonetheless projected in a different way is all i can say.😆😆
Kindly, do not keep your readers waiting and do update soon buddy.

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I apologise for not posting for so long but I request you to be a little forgiving. It is difficult for me to take out time to write down the whole thing in one go.(which is my style) Ab kya karein? I have a packed schedule. Right now, I'm cutting down on some hours to get this done.

Coming to the update, I'm happy you aren't throwing tomatoes at me. 😆 It was decent enough, right? Your wishes shall be fulfilled when I update the rest of CH2 this weekend. Okay?😃

Thanks!

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Awesome..

Thanks! 😛

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@THEfanOFheartz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Hey!😃 Nice OS! ❤️ 👏

I love the title in chapter 2:"Meet Me on the Equinox " It's very unique title i must say!

😉

May i ask do u know french? Or was the first part above of 1st chapter was Spanish? U see i'm very curious. 😳

Anyway coming to the chapters of 1 n 2 they were fab.👍🏼I loved it it was pleasure to read!❤️

Hats off!👏

I like the the way you use ur effective words in ur sentences to describe something!

U write fab! I must say! Keep up the good work! 👍🏼

U should write more soon!

Do PM! 😉

Edited by THEfanOFheartz - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

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I apologise for not posting for so long but I request you to be a little forgiving. It is difficult for me to take out time to write down the whole thing in one go.(which is my style) Ab kya karein? I have a packed schedule. Right now, I'm cutting down on some hours to get this done.
Coming to the update, I'm happy you aren't throwing tomatoes at me. 😆 It was decent enough, right? Your wishes shall be fulfilled when I update the rest of CH2 this weekend. Okay?😃
Thanks!

Hmmm. Seems like you're a working woman. Anyways i was joking by the way!😃
Write whenever you feel like. Until and unless one is willing to write with a good mood only then does the writing end up being classic.
Practically, can you even throw a tomato in a writing forum?😃 Bad PJ i know! My apologies.
Yes it was decent enough. The whirlwind of emotions in a human was depicted perfectly. The world actually did seem topsy-turvy to Raman!😆
Yeah okay!