IshRa OS: Llovera! *CHAPTER 2* PG1

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Hey Pareena so this is unfamiliar territory now and so sizzling at that ... Raman heard her - interesting development... really interesting cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve next for us.

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

loved it.Ravan kumar wud not spare ishita now.He wud fully embarass her.Wud like to see ishita too knowing about his fantacy so,that she cud too embarass him.it wudv be superb to see mr.bhalla embarass becz of his testestrones.cute.plz do that.

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ABBY92
To be honest, even I thought the whole situation was real at first. I woke up out of it when Ishita woke up. Can't wait to see what Raman is going to do with this new scenario to tease Ishita !!

Really? That's great! It pleases me a lot to write for you people. Hoping I can update soon.😃

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Firstly, good to see that you are ACTUALLY alive and thought of finishing your stories.
Secondly, thank you for the PM. Much needed. As in the way the activity in this forum is increasing, searching for specific posts ends up being tedious or futile.😆
Gosh never knew that Ishita's hormones would provoke her to such an extent that she won't have any control even in her dreams!😉😆
Nice thought. Expected a continuation of the first part. Nonetheless projected in a different way is all i can say.😆😆
Kindly, do not keep your readers waiting and do update soon buddy.

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: .scarlet.
Reserved

RES too

I'm so stupid😆

Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

OMG!! Like seriously!! This is the mature stuff u were talking about. I cant write like you i am afraid. Not pro enough!!😳
But i love yours.
Ishu having wild dreams - too hot to handle why only for Raman Bhalla, even for me!!😳

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan
Res

Edited...

WOW... what do I say... this one had me blushing, and I dont blush easy... It was such an evocative piece. Hats off my friend. Very nicely done.👏

Now, the story looks very promising. You've brought in the physical attraction into the picture. I for one, am very very curious to see where it takes them next 😊

Also, please allow me to applaud your writing skills. The 3 parts I read (Before Diary, Diary and this one) don't seem like they have been written by the same person, yet look so connected in terms of underlying emotions and story. And I am saying this in the most positive way, and I don't know if I am making real sense here 😆

Thanks for the PM and please do let me know when you update next 😊

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my writing.😊

The second chapter didn't feel like a continuation, did it? Even I wouldn't have liked that as a reader. How amateur of me. I was just trying to get something up for you guys for it was already 1.5 weeks since I last posted. I apologise. I was going to link it all up and clear the confusion about the sequence of events in the rest of Ch2. But I guess people won't like it.

I apologise for sounding so off. Felt really happy when I read your comment. I have a tough week ahead.😊

Edited by RibelleDelCuore - 11 years ago

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: frenzyy
awesome update

Thanks! The rest of chapter 2 will be up this weekend.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my writing.😊

The second chapter didn't feel like a continuation, did it? I know you're not mentioning it purposely. Even I wouldn't have liked that as a reader. How amateur of me. I was just trying to get something up for you guys for it was already 1.5 weeks since I last posted. I apologise. I was going to link it all up and clear the confusion about the sequence of events in the rest of Ch2. But people don't seem to like it.
I apologise for sounding so off. Felt really happy when I read your comment. I have a tough week ahead.😊

Good luck with whatever you have next week 😊
Dont worry about continuity... personally, you have seen my OSes. I tend to keep them separate unless something specific warrants a follow-up. The emotional continuity was there 😊 Catch you on the next thread my friend :)

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@Ribelle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Good luck with whatever you have next week 😊
Dont worry about continuity... personally, you have seen my OSes. I tend to keep them separate unless something specific warrants a follow-up. The emotional continuity was there 😊 Catch you on the next thread my friend :)

Thanks for making me feel better. I can be so dramatic, right?

Anyway, I really like your OSs. They are discrete yet they have an underlying timeline. And they're not confusing. 😃

So, I was editing my previous comment and you replied. That was fast😆

Physical attraction is one of the most important things in a love story, isn't it? 😆 You do make sense to me. what you wrote made me go "Yay!" Just hoping it doesn't get more "differently written " in the forthcoming chapters. Now that would be confusing!