Ishra OS I will prove your innocence

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This is my first OS in this forum plz give your comments
After the last night incident ishita is devastated that raman didn't trusted her. ishita is getting ready to go to the clinic at the door raman was waiting for her to talk regarding last night incident but she ignored him. Raman couldn't bear ishita ignoring him.

ishita in her car thinking about last night incident and how everybody accused her, here raman is following ishita to talk to her. ishita occupied in her own thoughts met with an accident. she felt unconscious and suffered several bruises. Raman who is following her saw ishita meeting with an accident he quickly reached the accident spot. Raman is shattered to see ishita in that condition.

Raman screamed "tumhe kuch nahi hoga ishita"
Raman took her to the hospital doctor said to file a complaint. Raman threatened doctor "Agar meri ishita ko kuch bhi hua to aapko chodunga nahi aap pehle treatment shuru kijiye.

After the treatment doctor said to raman ishita is fine she will come
to consciousness. Raman thanked doctor and asked can i see her?
doctor said yes.

Raman went to see ishita held her hands tightly and started crying like a
baby. Raman said to unconscious ishita "Main bohut dargaya tha ishita mujhe aisa laga ki mein tumhe hamesha keliye khodoonga. please ishita mujhse baat karo, tumhari khamoshi mujhse bardash nahi hogi. Holding ishita's hands raman cried.

Ishita gained conciousness and saw raman beside her. Raman saw ishita and smiled " thank god tumhe hosh aagayi main tho dargaya tha tumhe is haal mein dekh kar" said raman.

ishita was quiet she didn't uttered a single word Raman asked ishita " ab tum kaise feel kar rahi ho.

ishita " mein kaise hu isse aapko kya farak padta hai raman."
Raman " tum aise kyun kehrahi ho ishita mujhe tumhari fikar hai"
ishita " aapko meri kitni fikar hai yeh kal saabit ho chuka hai raman"
Raman " aisi baat nahi hai ishita kal sabh kuch aachanak hogaya ki mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aaya. ek taraf tum ho aur doosri taraf meri behen main kya karta ishita"
Ishita " Mujhe aapki koi explanation nahi sunni hai raman. Aapki patni ki character par koi ungli uthayega phir bhi aap chup chaap dekhte rehgaye kuch bhi nahi kaha aapne. Aap yaha se jaaye raman mujhe aap se koi baat nahi karni hai".
Raman said " please ishita meri baat samajhne ki koshish karo.
Just then iyer's entered the room to see ishita. mrs iyer is angry on raman for not trusting ishita. she asked raman not to hurt ishita and to leave the room. Raman leaves the room disappointed and promises himself to prove ishita's innocence with in 24 hours.


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chinudolly thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 super duper awesome story
plz do continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful OS
loved it
awww Raman can't bear Ishita's silence
Poor Ishu met with an accident
Raman crying and asking her to talk
Ishita angry and disappointment with raman
raman promises himself to prove her innocent
lets see how he does
please continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woowww..yaar😊😊..too good for a first timer..👏👏..I would LOVE to see this accident and hospital track😊.. want Raman to realize Ishu's worth😃..want to see him realize how imp she is to him and mostly I wanna see tears in his eyes for her😳..Lovely story dear👍🏼..pls continue and update soon⭐️..and PM me if you can..Thanku🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Outstanding start Dear!Pls continue soon & Pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS dear!!!! 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for your likes and comments will update the next part very soon...
Edited by sudhi03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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O my god ...superb os...👏👏👏

realise of love raman felt for ishita..atleast ..😛😛

yaar ..i m a big fan of karan patel with divyanka tripathi...!!

if they will be together for ever naa then i would ready to give my life to them...!!😃


😉


just ready to write another mind blowing os next time..i m hardly waiting fo the next os...😳😳😳




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