~MY HEART KNOW U ~ Ishra 4 shots story UPDATED CH-3 Part-B (page 17) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
thank u so much dear 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: radhu-taarey


Thank u moni 🤗 🤗 🤗 i know u understand me very well... n ya one more thing if u can plz write any story on Mihir and Mihika coz i love them too... 😃


🤗 aww u r welcome radhu , my sweetu buddy
see i cant promise but ya i will try
would love 2 write a story on them ok 😛 but it may take 2 -3 week or so
i will be able 2 write after completing this story only 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Wonderful update Dear!Loved Raman telling Ishita that He's their for Her & nobody will dare to hurt Her!Loved Ishra hug!Loved Mihika teasing Ishra!Waiting for Ishra spending a ni8 alone without Ruhi & waiting to see Raman's plan!Pls continue soon!


awww dil se big wala thank u so much dear for a dil se wala precious comment
😊😊😊
ya i will continue soon 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: taani.priya1997

awesome cute loving story


🤗 awww dil se thank u s o much didu
love u a lot didu 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: aishapie

Nyc story...raman n ishita r so cute.
i really hope ki show main bhi kuch aisa hi ho.


aww thanks a lot buddy 😊😊😊
ya i also want d same but koi nahi jo hum show main nahi kara sakte vo main story main to likh he sakti hun 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

thank u dear 😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: oaz30

Very nice, let's hope Raman reacts like that . Pm next part


thank u so much dear
i also hope d same
ya i will pm u 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: simples28

Aiyooo dear...why did you stop?..😃..So beautifully u have written it yaar..loved the hug and mini romance....Im desperate to know what's gonna happen when they are alone..pls update soon dear and pls PM😃😃


😆😆 i stopped as suspense is imp in a story 😆
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aww dil se thank u so much dear
i m so glad thatv u loved it 😛
😆😆 aww i can understand just wait and read their romance 😳😳 when they wil be alone
ya i m updating 😊😊and will pm u 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
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Originally posted by: anaghchavan

superb shots story, as always u write too too good.

i do watch YHM but now stopped watching as i dont like
this current track going on, where raman does not support his
wife.

hope in YHM also happens the same as u have written, hope
raman trust ishita, as u wrote.

update next part soon.

As always u write very well, keep writing.

And waiting for HMJ update as u said lot of surprises coming
in that story, please update whenever u get time.

take care and keep smiling, as i do.



oh my god sweetu 🤗🤗
🤗🤗

i wanna give u a hug for this special comment 🤗🤗
love u so much my sweetu buddy 🤗🤗
dil se thank u sooo very much ⭐️
it really means a lot 2 me
i also want that raman trust ishu 😳

sorry yaar u have 2 wait some more days for hmj update but will try 2 give u a long update and ya surprises , and more dhamake r on ur way in hmj 😉😆
so just wait a nd read
i will try 2 update that asap pakka 😊
u too take care my sweetu cutu buddy and
keep smiling always 🤗😊😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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~ MY HEART KNOW U ~

CHAPTER- 3 (PART A )

Raman - haan we will start d plan from tomorrow , to ab main ja (before he could say jaata hun ishita interrupts )

and say- nahi raman plz aap mujhe akela chodkar mat jaayiye na please don't leave me alone

raman understood that ishita was still fearing and scared because of that bad incident

raman assure her saying " ok ok relax ishita, I m not going anywhere , main yahin hun aaj raat tumhare paas don't worry , no one can dare 2 harm u " 😊

mihika says " thank u jiju "

raman - " no need 2 say thanks "

amma - thik hai to phir raman aur ishita tum is room main so jaana , aur mihika tum aake dusre room main so jao ok

mihika - ok peri ma

appa - raman beta kuch bhi chahiye ho to bata dena

raman - ok appa , mujhe kuch bhi chahiye hoga to main aapko bata dunga

amma - acchha main tum dono ke liye khane ke liye kuch bana deti hun , as hum sabne to vandu ki party main khana kha liya tha , par tum dono ne to kuch khaya nahi hoga na

raman was going 2 say no 2 amma 2 not cook anything as he is not hungry but stops thinking about ishita and ishita was also going 2 say no 2 amma 2 not make anything as she also don't want 2 eat anything but stops thinking about raman

both think about each other other

so amma goes 2 cook and appa goes 2 take rest


ishita 2 raman - raman mujhe bhookh nahi hai , par aap khana kha lena ok

mihika - dekhiye na jiju akka has not eaten anything and now also she is refusing 2 eat , we tried a lot 2 make her eat but she is not listening , ab aap he samjhaiye akka ko

raman - what is this ishita , (just 2 change her mood and make her eat something 😉 😆 😛) , actually wow ishita tumne meri baat ko itna seriously le liya ??, chalo acchha he hai ki tumne meri advise ko seriously liye aur apna fast kar rahi ho na khakar , ab aur MOTI to nahi hogi kha khakar 😆😆

ishita was shocked 2 hear that 😲😲, she stood open mouthed :o lolz

ishita - what kya aap ab bhi mujhe moti bula rahe hai , mihika bolo na ki main moti nahi hun

mihika (Says smilingly ) haan jiju meri akka itni bhi moti nahi hai 😛 (😉as she understood when raman winks at her that raman is trying 2 divert ishu's mind and also he will make ishu eat )

ishita (glaring angrily at mihika ) - itni bhi moti nahi hai ka kya matlab , u also mean ki main moti hun

mihika - maine aisa kab kaha akka

ishita - now don't say a lie ok , very bad tum bhi apne jiju ke side le rahi ho , ek to vo tumhari akka ko moti bula rahe hai and tum unka sath de rahi ho

raman - arree ishita tumhari behan sach ka sath de rahi hai , ( giving a hi-5 2 mihika)

ishita - u both r too much , and by d way I m not moti

raman - yes u r very fatty , aur ye baat tum bhi jaanti ho , to natak karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai , tabhi to khana nahi kha rahi, aur dieting kar rahi ho

ishita - aisa nahi hai , main khana nahi kha rahi kyuki mera mann nahi hai aur mujhe bhookh nahi hai ok

raman - HAWW ishita aise jhoth nahi bolte mihika kya sikhegi tumse , aur mujhe pata hai tum khana isiliye nahi kha rahi taki tum moti na ho jao😆😆

ishita - 1st thing main moti nahi hun , aur 2nd thing , main khana khane se bilkul moti nahi hone wali ,

raman (trapping her by his talks 2 make her eat , he says laughing )- to phir khana khao aur prove kar do na😛😛

ishita - ok fine I will eat and prove it 2 u

mihika was laughing seeing their cute fight 😆

raman (2 mihika )- arre vaah dekho tumhari akka maan gayi , jao ab jaldi se khana le aao isse pehle ishita ka mood change ho jaye

mihika and amma get food 2 raman and ishita and they went from there

mihika - good night akka and good night jiju

ishu- good night

raman - good night

and they eat while constantly looking at each other ,

after d food

ishita was smiling and says 2 raman "u said all that 2 make me eat na 😛"

raman smiles and looks at her while smiling - ab haa 😆😆😆

ishita smiles and say 😆😳😳" see main moti nahi hui khana khane se " haha they both laugh 😆😆😆 ,

{ my little shayari } ~

[ u can think these feelings of ishita's heart]

{ tere sang jaane kya sukoon mere dil ko milta hai ,

ki teri baatein sun mera dil rote rote has padta hai ,

aur saara dard mano gayab ho jata hai ,

aur har aansoo muskaan ban jata hai sang tere ,... haa tere sang , sirf aur sirf tere sang "}

[ now of raman's heart ]

{ tu muskaati hai par hasi mere chehre par aati hai ,

Tere aansuon se aankhein meri nam ho jati hai

Jaane kaisa ehsaas hai ye ,

Pyar hai ya ishq hai ye

Ya tujhe paane ki chaah hai ye

Ya tere sang jeene ki khwaish hai ye

Jo bhi hai ye par ab tu mere liye sab kuch hai re " }

After their intense eye lock ,

Ishita came out of trance first and says

" raman aap bed pe so jaiye , main neeche so jaungi "

Raman " no ishita main neeche so jata hun

Tum bed pe so jaao "

Ishita " aap bed pe sojaiye main neeche soungi maine keh diya bas

Raman" maine bhi keh diya na ki main neeche sounga , tum bed pe so jao "

(plz assume there is no sofa or couch in that room )

Ishita - bola na main neeche soungi

Raman - ok fine NA TUMHARI NA MERI ,

Hum dono saath main so jaayenge bed pe

Ishita - what

Raman - don't look at me like this

Main ek side pe so jaunga , tum dusri side pe so jaana , jaise hum ruhi ke saath sote hai ,

Ishita - oohh ok ,

and they both go 2 sleep

ishita - ops blanket to ek he hai , and dusra blanket amma ke room main hai , main abhi le aati hun , but unhe sleep main disturb karna thik nahi hoga , ok then I wont take blanket , u take it ok ,

raman - nahi mujhe blanket nahi chahiye

tum le lena ok and ab ismein I don't want any arguments

ishita says " ok fine " after understanding that he is not going 2 agree and so no use of arguing

ishita change her clothes and wear night dress , though she had a little difficulty while changing as she got hurt on back when fell on d floor while running from parmeet

after that both go and when they were lying on d bed

ishita wince in pain " ss .. aahh aaiyoo amma" (as she got hurt on d back when she fell on d floor because of parmeet )

raman get up immediately a little worried - what happened ishita

ishita (try 2 hide ) - no nothing , u sleep

raman - batao kya hua , kahin tumhe koi chot to nahi lagi????

ishita - arree its ok raman ,don't worry I will be ok after taking rest , u sleep ok

raman - come on tell me damn it ,kya hua , ???? kahan chot lagi hai tumhe ???? come on tell me damn it , kahin bleeding to nahi ho rahi wound se ????

she gets up somehow , and raman help her getting up n now they both r sitting on d bed

she had no choice but 2 tell him

she says hesitatingly " voo... voo.. raman vo actually "

raman " ye vo vo kya kar rahi ho , batao ishita kahan lagi hai "

ishita " aap rehne dijiye na ,chodiye so jayiye"

raman " tum bata rahi ho ya main doc ko bulaun "

ishita " ok fine bata rahi hun , doc ko bulane ki koi zarurat nahi hai , vo actually mujhe back main lagi hai "

raman " par kaise lagi ??? "

ishita (with tears in her eyes remembering that worst incident ) - usne pehle mujhe zor se push kiya and vo jab main parmeet se bhaag rahi thi tab main gir gayi thi floor par aur shayad tabhi thodi se chot lag gayi "😭😭

raman felt so damn angry on that creep😡😡😡 , that blood person , that jerk because of whom ishita is in pain now , now only outside but inside also 😭😭, he wounded her from outside but f rom inside also , he gave wounds on ishu's heart , soul and self respect , ... 😭😭😭

he felt some tears coming in his eyes too , but he control him and say " don't cry ishita, main usse chodunga nahi , he will have 2 pay for all ur wounds "

raman " acchha abhi mujhe dikhao so that main uski first aid kar saku

ishita " nahi raman uski koi zarurat nai hai"

raman " tum doc ho ke itna bhi nahi jaanti ki wounds pe first aid karna bahut zaruri hota hai "

ishita " its ok raman , I know that but I will do that tom "

raman - " kaho to main mihika ya amma ko bula du , they will see and do d first aid ya phir main doc ko bula du ??"

ishita - no raman its not needed , plz aap so jaiye , chodiye na ye sab , mihika ya amma ko bulane ki koi zarurat nahi hai , vo so rahe honge , bevajah pareshan ho jayenge , aap bhi so jaiye ,

raman - ok fine , but then let me see ok ,

ishita - maine kaha na its ok leave it

raman - I said let me see it ok , ab aur koi arguments nahi , ok , u can trust me don't worry , now turn around

ishita - I do trust u😊 ( and she turns )

(only 18+ can read further part ) 🤣

PLZ OPEN D FOLLOWING SONG LINK IN OTHER TAB

MERE BINA FROM CROOK

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAthM9qKqXg

both were feeling very awkward but had no way 2 escape lolz 😆😆... I guess love was flowing in d air ... 😳😳😳

Raman slowly put her hair on one side , and slowly slowly opens d chain of ishu's shirt while trying 2 look at other side but he couldn't stop himself from looking at ishita 😉

☺️While raman's touch was sending shivers down her spine , raman was also feeling different ,.. he was having mixed emotions , he felt pain because of her pain and love feeling her and being close 2 her .😳😳

He slowly slowly raise his eyes and look at ishita's back ,

Raman (gulping down his saliva 😆) - thank god bleeding to nahi ho raha but kahan laga hai ishita , tumhe pain kahan ho raha hai ????? main koi baam laga dun

ishita - nai baam to amma appa ke room main hai , and agar aap vahan gaye to bevajah unki neend kharab ho jayegi , rehne dijiye na

raman - ok Wait then main jaake ice cubes leke aata hun,

He zip up her shirt 😳😳 and go 2 get d ice cubes 😳😳😳

Raman get d ice cubes and sits back

And slowly slowly again opens her shirt 😉😉 😳😳😳 and ask " kahann ... kahan laga hai ☺️?????"

Ishita points by her hand that she is having pain down her back ..

Raman touch her back sending shivers down her spine , she was having goose bumps as raman touch her back and he was also feeling something different , something magical , something called as love

He ask while touching her back - ab yaahan yahaan laga hai kya ??????

Ishita - nahi , thoda neeche 😳😳

He moves down her hand loving 2 touching his wife , his love , his angel,

But as he touch that part where she got hurt

Ishu wince in pain 😭 - sss and he understood that she has got hurt there ,

... he take an ice cube and gently apply over her back ,... she was feeling cold and relieved too , as she was having pain , she was looking down feeling very shy and nervous

He was looking at her while applying ice ... 😳😳😳 while some strands of her hair come on his face , so he raise his other hand 2 put d strand of her hair behind her ear , he do that very lovingly , but as he do that she looks back from d corner of her eyes 😳😳😳 , their eyes met again and they both got lost in each other , he got lost in her completely , she was loving 2 drown in his eyes , but at d same time she was feeling nervous as well , so she looks down again not being able 2 stand his gaze and he also come back 2 his senses and starts applying ice again on her back ...

Raman - abbb ho gaya . .. ho gaya ,.. ab to zyada pain nahi ho raha na ??????

Ishita nods in no

Raman slowly caress her back😳😳😳 with his cold hands and she also don't stop him , as she know she belong 2 him , his love was relieving her , she feels no pain no problem, no stress, no tension when he is with her , ... 😳😳

They both were floating in d magic of love 😳😳😳

After coming out of trance he keeps d tray of ice cubes on d side table and

He zip up her shirt unwantedly 😉.. and hold her by her shoulders and make her lie down carefully gently , and cover d blanket over her while she was constantly looking at him and he sleeps beside her and close his eyes, and switch off d lamp ... though he know he was not going 2 sleep that night ... but she was awake and slowly turns towards him and put d blanket on him as well ,... he could feel her but he didn't open his eyes letting her do that , she was also loving 2 be close 2 him , how can she let him sleep without blanket , ... both sleep in one blanket on d same bed ... they may a bit part from each other but their hearts were still loving each other , ... raman slowly takes her hand in his assuring her that he is with her always ... she look at him when he holds her hand gently ... they both drift off 2 sleep hand in hand being close 2 their love ...

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PRECAP - PART B OF CH-3= PARMEETS ' WILL BE EXPOSED BY THEIR PLAN WITH A SHOCK 😉😉

SO WAIT AND READ 2 KNOW MORE 😛😛

plz friends dont ask any logic after reading this u know love is logicless and avoid mistakes ,. i hope i didnt disappoint anyone , i tried my level best ...

plz do tell me u all like it or not ???? and plz if u like it then HIT LIKE AND DO COMMENT AS WELL FROM HEART ...

TAKE CARE AND KEEP SMILING ALWAYS😊😊

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