This piece is different from the rest of my previous work I feel. I have no experience of kissing so it's all guess work. Be gentle with ur critisism.
For by behna debomaaneet
Raman had to muster all his willpower to separate his lips and body away from Ishita's and not go any further as Ruhi was in the room. But he somehow did the impossible as he was more concerned about Ishita's discomfort than his own. He really had no choice as their mouths had become deserts.
The few minutes that had just passed they had been like opposite poles of two magnets. A powerful invisible force had locked their lips and bodies together. Thus you can imagine what a greater power was required to overcome that force, even momentarily, to get back some breath every so often.
Raman being more experienced had taken the reins in their kiss and Ishita was happily following his lead. She was in awe of how great a kisser he was. She never imagined he could be so gentle or that he could sustain the kiss for minutes. It was slow yet full of passion and his stubble was tickling and prickling her supple skin. She wanted to pop up her calf like she had seen in those olden classics but her body had turned to jelly and all strength had left her body. She thought if he hadn't been holding her tightly she would have fell flat on the floor.
Although he had pulled his lips apart from her, he still had his hands on her upper back and her face. They couldn't physically say anything because their mouths were too dry and they were lacking breath. They just went to and fro from smiling at the floor and each other. Both were tickled pink.
After a few moments Raman went to get a glass of water from their bedside table and offered it to her. She gestured him to have it first. But he moved the glass towards her again. She patiently had her fill. The glass was only a quarter full now. She made her way to fill up the glass but Raman stopped her. He wanted the water she had drank. He turned the glass around in his hand so his lips would touch the glass where hers had. It would feel like they were kissing again. it didnt satisfy his thirst for water as much as his thirst to kiss her again. Ishitas eyes naturally filled up with tears of joy to see how much her husband desired her.
Raman thought he couldn't spoil his reputation any further.
Mera kissing skills bohot zyada ache hai na. 12 out of 10.
Ishita picked her head up from his chest. I can't believe it. Tum khud ki kissing ko itna tareef kar rahe ho.
Kyu na karu. Main haar kam tareef ki layak toh karta hoon. Tum bhi buri nahi ti, pehli baar ki hisaab se. Kaafi natural.
Maine kab kaha ki meri pehli kiss ti
Nahi ti. Toh phir usse kahi zyada acha kiss karna chahiye ta. Don't worry hum bohot practice karenge, main tumhe sikadunga.
Achcha. Khud ko itna acha kisser samajhte ho toh, agli baar khud ko kiss karna aaina mein ya phir un mannequins ko, jho tumhe itna pasand hai. Mere muh mat lagna.
Raman had the look of real concern and desperation on his face. he thought, have I gone too far.
Ruko, ruko. Tumhe mazak samajh mein nahi ati. (Now speaking softly) Tumne sachme bohot achcha kiya ta. 8 out of 10. Aur tumhari hoth toh petals ki tara naram hai. He said blushing with a cheeky green. Ishita gave a smug grin to let him know he was forgiven.
Tumhari lipstick smudge hogayi hain.
Raman got out his handkerchief carefully and gently removed the smudges. Looking intensely and closely at her lips. Savouring every moment.
Aap ki hoton pe bhi lipstick laga hai, Rama. Main poch ti hoon. And she took the handkerchief from him and started wiping of the lipstick looking into his eyes every other second.Yeh mehla hogaya hai. Main ise tik se saaf karke aap ko wapas kardungi.
Nahi, nahi. Ise saaf mat karna. Kabhi bhi. Yeh mehla nahi hai. Raman said hastily, without thinking.
Then realising what he said, he began to blush.Jab tum meri paas nahi hogi aur main tumhe miss karunga ya tumhari kiss ko miss karunga. Toh main ise dekunga aur chu bhi lunga
Raman,mujhe yakeen nahi hora, ki tum itne senti ho.
Kya karu, tumne jo mujhe Raavan se Raman, phir Raman se Rama banadiya hai.
Ishita couldn't resist the to hug him and placed her head on his chest. Raman automatically hugged her back.
Just then Ruhi got up said Ishima.
They both got startled because they thought they had been caught red handed but she was still had her eyes closed.
Ishita rushed to her. It's ok beta, so jao.
They were half disappointed and half pleased because if Ruhi had not woken up then they probably would have stayed hugging but then they wanted to sleep in each other's arms that night.
Aap pehle change ki jiye phir main change karungi.
When Raman got to bed, he felt he would start missing Ishita as soon as he closed his eyes. Even the prospect of dreaming about her wasn't good enough.
(The inspiration for this part as some may have guessed already is the song I don't wanna miss a thing by ROCK band Aerosmith)
Don't wanna clothes my eyes. Don't wanna fall asleep. Coz I miss you and I don't wanna miss a thing
Coz even when I dream of you. Even the sweetest dream would never do. coz i miss u Coz I miss you babe and I don't wanna miss a thing
Edited by creativeFF - 11 years ago
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