my ishra ff updated part 5 on page 3

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

What! You dedicated this update to me?? Omg!!"Aaj kal paao jamin pe nehi tikte meri" 😳 Thank you sooo very much di.I'm humbled.big *huggie* 🤗
You've plunged into a totally new territory which you've not explored before..& you have passed with flying colours in this attempt of yours 👍🏼 You get the full marks from me 😃

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

In my next post beaneath I m quoting some lines which I liked the most 😊

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

"They had
been like opposite poles of two magnets. A
powerful invisible force had locked their lips and
bodies together. Thus you can imagine what a
greater power was required to overcome that
force"-Wonderful description 👏
" Tum khud ki kissing ko itna tareef kar
rahe ho.
Kyu na karu. Main haar kam tareef ki layak toh
karta hoon. " Lol 😆
" Don't worry hum bohot practice
karenge, main tumhe sikadunga.
Achcha. Khud ko itna acha kisser samajhte ho
toh, agli baar khud ko kiss karna aaina mein ya
phir un mannequins ko, jho tumhe itna pasand
hai. Mere muh mat lagna." 🤣 Oh my god! Hilarious!Abhi v mera pet dukh raha hai.
& last but not the least lyrics of this song by Aerosmith are great! I haven't heard them before...but now I definitely wanna listen to the song.

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creativeFF

@creativeFF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

im really glad you liked it. because it was on your request. i was really scared because as you said it was new territtory for me. plus i think those are my favourite lines too.

it was a toss up between aerosmith or

tumhe dekh dekh sona
tunhe dekh dekh jagna
meri yeh zindagani
tere sang hai bitani
[B

i thought aerosmith sounded more romantic although cheesy

R]do u liv in india.

huggle u back

Edited by creativeFF - 11 years ago