SS IshRa (Ishita & Raman)-Ek Naya Ehsaas- Part 3 - pg 14 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Deepika, I am more happy to see you here, u went oof!!
Glad to know u see the show, Hi5/ some of my d3 frnds love the show, am happy.

Ur writing has been beautiful, sorry cudnt follow ur ffs/ss

This piece is brilliant, way u wrote ishi's descriptiona nd she taking control on Raman, wow...and Heart v/s mnd, and Mihir in betw, just great!!
Loved Raman's thoughts too, aptly penned down, welcome back!!

Loved the Os, ty for pm, waiting for next part/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow really amazing just loved the scene now raman is going to say thank u rani ki jhansi or jhansi ki rani very good n thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U sweetheart for the PM... the Os is very Gud... Pls continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayeee Deepkia
this OS was tooo good that i cant say how much i loved it
its simply awesome
mind blowing
thanks 4 ur PM



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved It 3
Update soon
P.S tnx alot for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Edited*

DDD!!!!! Yeh kya kar diyaa aapnee!! Matlabb Woaahhh! Itna awesome kaise likh sakte ho aap?
IshRa Mujhe toh pehle se hi pasand hai dono! Aur aapne inn par bhi likhaa! I am feeling so goooddd ☺️ Acha woh sab leave...kaam ki baat pe aati hu 😎
Ek Naya Ehsaas! Waaah Waaah matlab Waaahhh kya title hai...awesomeee!!
Kya likha hai aapne yaaar...dil pe dard ho gya mere
Raman kumar bhalla ke character ko kya sahi pehchaana aapne..gazabb..kudos to you for that.
The way he thought about her and the way he was defending his own feelings was perfectly written. The whole essence of raman+rawan was there 😆 And mihir!! Awww i lovee this guy :* :* (Yaha puchchi ka emoticon nhi hai :O) Actually i love Raj! 😳 Par haaannn aapne sabka part bahut sahi likha...basically this whole update revolved around raman's feelings and you depicted them so very nicely hukum!! Superb! 👏
Brilliant Precap ;)
Now i am going to comment on next one *Runsss*
And its lovely to see my hukum back in the old happy writing mode...be like this! 🤗
Love you Muaahh
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Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey YHMians...this is the 2nd part of this SS...this part is more of a build up part...hope you all will like it...Your feedback will be anticipated 😊

This part is dedicated to Nikki and Surbhi 🤗

Thanks Nikki for being such a swthrt and Sur ..love u baby 😳

Thank you so much for such a lovely response to the 1st part😳


Chapter - 2

He flipped the pages of his file aimlessly ...without even sparing a single glance over them .. He checked the time and the restless expression on his face changed into a frown .The restlessness was taking over his entire persona..He was frequently changing positions on his chair .

Why do I feel so fidgety today..he asked himself...



It has been an eventful day ...They had a pooja at home..He was not in mood to celebrate any kind of festival as he lost the land contract just because of her..He insulted her in front of all his family members for acting so absurd and causing such a huge loss in his business. Her move might have proved to be career destroying for him. But...it was not meant to be that day. He was supposedly God's favorite comic character and she was his most favored protagonist. After all the ruthless words and insults caused by him to her ,almighty decided to show him the mirror of reality. It was her "6th sense " or "gut feeling " which saved him from the huge loss and embarrassment in front of his clients. All those downward curves on their faces changed into upward ones.His family and office team were grateful to her for saving him.They forced him to say a thanks to her and show proper gratitude .But he chose to act as Raman Kumar Bhalla - the arrogant ,emotionless Businessman ;which was his pretension to save his fragile heart from the ruthless outer world.He was grateful to her,but he chose silence over voicing out his feelings. He neither wanted feel vulnerable in front of her nor he wanted to listen to her lecture.So he walked out of his house with Mihir with a straight face and left for office.



His day in office was not smooth..not that he was facing any challenges from client's front...Clients were content with his decision or her unexpected move which saves their organization from huge loss. Due to festive season the day was going quite laggard .He was not his regular self today.Raman Kumar Bhalla,the workaholic ..who couldn't stay away from his contract papers and files even on his marriage day looked uninterested in those cold files and documents.His heart craved for some warmth.


Raman..


A voice disturbed his thoughts...

Haan kya hua ...he said irritatedly


Tum yeh gol gol ghumna band karoge...mujhe chakkar aa rahe he...

He looked at Mihir's befuddled face and realized that he have been roaming around his cabin in circles for quite sometime now.He stopped walking at once.



Tum thik toh ho na Raman...tabiyat toh thik hai na tumhari?

Itne restless kyu ho?

Tabiyat kharab hai kya ?


Mihir threw his rapid fire questions on him...


Uff ...chup ho ja Mihir...saans le le...meri pagal Biwi ki tarah behave mat kar...he voiced his annoyance .


Acha baba...lo me chup ho gaya...but tumhe hua kya hai...Mihir threw another question at him...after all he could see his plan with Mihika to get this odd couple close to each other was showing colors lately...



Tum bahut restless lag rahe ho...jaise ki kisi chij ke liye intezar kar rahe ho...Mihir continued ...



Arre yaar.. itna time ho gaya...Jhansi ki Rani ne aaj ek baar bhi call nehi kiya... roz toh har 10 minute main call kar kar ke dimag kharab kar deti hai...aaj pata nehi use kya hua...ek bhi call nehi kiya ab tak...Raman blurted in a single breath...he didn't even register his exact statement..his gaze never left the mobile screen.



Oh toh tum...Bhabhi ke call ka wait kar rahe ho...Mihir chuckled looking at his elder brother's impatience...



Haan yaar...Raman said ..still lost in his internal hassles ...about her



Waoh...Bhabhi ke call ka wait...interesting ...Mihir said in a teasing and slightly louder tone...



Raman came out of his imaginary world with his Rani of Jhansi ..Did he just confessed in front of Mihir that he is waiting for her call..oh NO..its Not happening..he can't voice out his confusions and feelings about that crazy women like this...he will become a laughingstock in front of people...Mihir and Simi will start teasing him...and she will have a hearty laughter at his expense ...No..This can't be happening...



Jyada dimag mat chala...he said annoyingly ...wo Ruhi ka kuch saman lana tha...wo call karke uski list dene wali thi.. he tried to give explanation for his mindless blabbering..



Oh..acha...Mihir replied with an evil smirk while amusingly looking at his soul brother...a father of two kids ...a respected businessman...whom the world calls merciless and chesty ...he looked nothing less than a baffled teenager trying to hide his first crush...


Par Raman...isse pehle kabhi Ishita Bhabhi ke call ka wait toh nehi kiya tumne...even if its about Ruhi...he played along...



Wo...main...wo...Raman was dumbfounded...how could he reply to this question when he himself is not able to find the answer...



His phone rang to his rescue...Jhansi ki Rani..his Jhansi kis Rani...the name flashed on his mobile screen...



He immediately answered the call...



Hello ...he changed his tone to a serious one to hide his eagerness in his voice..



Hello Raman..she started



Haan jaldi bolo...mujhe bahut kaam hai...he said in an irritated tone...



Haan toh mujhe bhi koi shauk nehi hai tumse baat karne ka...main bhi bahut busy hu...she replied with equal bitterness in her voice...



Haan haan...Obama ke saath lunch ka program hoga na...he taunted



Tumse toh baat hi karna bekar hai...she was getting irritated by his arrogance and mood swings...



Toh mene kab bola mujhse baat karne ke liye ...he continued



Ruhi ke saman ka list me sms kar rahi hu...le aana..bhulna mat...she said in stern tone



Oh hello Madam ..main kuch nehi bhulta...bhulti tum ho...he retorted



Offo...mere paas zara sa bhi time nehi hai tumse jhagda karne ka...aaj bahut kaam hai..late ho jaega aate aate..she said in a tired tone...



Oh main toh Madam se baat karne ke liye mara ja raha hu...Mere paas bhi bahut...



Before he could complete his statement ...The line on the other end went silent ...she hung up on him...how dare she...khud ko samajhti kya hai...he muttered under his breath...cursing her



Mihir looked at his soul brother..his inspiration...Raman Kumar Bhalla...CEO of the year...the tough business man ...his decisions and understanding result in many successful deals...This Raman looked different...confused about his own emotions..trying hard to keep the tightly closed doors of his heart .. to remain close...failing miserably ...Someone already barged in to his heart ...or He half opened the doors of his heart for
her..




To be continued

Precap - Ishita's missing in the riots and her mobile is not reachable ...Raman Kumar Bhalla in action

Sorry for giving the same precap...this part became long so i kept the rest portion for next chapter😊



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hey guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment ... i will wait for your comments and feedback ...

Please let me know if you want me to continue😳








Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Edited*

Oh Yeah The First one..this feels nyc

Awww Hukum 🤗 Love youu! Iski kya zarurat thi! Aaap bhi naa senti kar dete ho :')
Okay this was yet again an amazing update! Beautifully written dialogues 👏
Raman is getting so restless Gosh...kya sahi likha hai yaar aapne...truly awesome! Loved raman's dialogues...its like i am seriously watching him live!
Raman kumar bhalla pakda gaya 😆 Mihir i love you 😉
and this line
he looked nothing less than a baffled teenager trying to hide his first crush...
😳
The way he was talking on phone to ishita...goshhh...so like ravannn 😛
But that obama line cracked me up 🤣
Loved the whole update! 😎
I am soo waiting for the next one!

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start!!
Loved Raman's turmoil talks. Now waiting for the next :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nicely written. Thanks for sharing!

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