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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
OMG ROFL at this dialogue:🤣

Mihir - Raman , mai mai

Raman - Kya mai mai Bakri kaya kya Nasthe me ?


Such a lovely OS😃..So brilliantly written👏👏..Loved every bit of it..❤️..Arrey yaar your dialogues are so awesomee😊..Also, loved the way Ishu lashed back at Raman and made him realize her pain..and Arreh waah..Raman did so much to see his Jhansi smiling😃😃 would love to see this in the show😊..Pls continue writing..you are indeed a fabulous writer👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
very nice...i would love if u can put the English subtitles to this please..as this type of Hindi is pretty difficult to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Raman and ishitha had spoken to Appa and amma and they had Mihir and Mihika's enagment finalized. Ishitha was slowly feeling gr8 about Raman and started seeing other side of Raman. This was an initial spark between them. Over the past few days Raman and ishitha had been admiring each other to a very gr8 extent. Everytime they came across eachother the were very much feeling the presence of each other. More than that thye had started feeling some magical moments between each other. Raman's Tamil Thank you speech, the way Raman had asked Adhi to apologize to her. She was slowly getting engrossed in his love. She felt pampared more than anything else.

Now she was wondering how come Raman knows the size of her dress. She had altered her dress just to show him wrong. Bottom of her heart she was feeling very sad that Raman didn't see her in that dress. She was blushing badly when Simmi and her mother in law were making fun of her.

She head back to her room to change, see was engrossed in Raman's thoughts. Suddenly she hears a noise in the room and turns arround only to find it was Parmeet. She was shell shocked and was trying to drft away from him. She threntened him to tell all this to Simmi and Mrs Bhalla. He didn't seam to be affected by anything. She was trying to fight back at his advances.

Parmeet: Ishitha Ji wase bi apke Pathi apko chodke che gai, kase pathi hai apke kud yeh sab lathe hai aur beena deke chale jathe hai. So sad.( Your Husbad left you alone, what a husband he is - he brought all this for you and left you alone)

Ishitha: Parmeet Ji apko nehi pathe Agar Raman ko apke harkato ka patha chalega wow apko chodenge nehi..( If Raman gets to know your deeds he will not leave you)

Parmeet: Kya kaha rahi hai Ishitha ji yeh Raman ki damhki aap baki logo ko dena mujhe nehi. Mai jantha hun ki aap done ke bech me pathi pathni ka kai rishtha nehi .. ( this therenenment abot Raman you give some one else not me. I know you don't have any husband and wife relationship.) Ishitha is stunned abt this...

Kya soch rahi hai, muje kaise patha? Main ne aap done ki bat Baishaki ke din sun liya. Auy Raman Kaisa insan hai aap ke jaise sundar Biwi ko chotha tak nehi aur pyar kartha nehi. Aapko pyar ki jaroorat hai, Apko hak hai. Mai aapko who pyar dene ke liya tyar hu , auye mere bho me. ( what are you thinking , how do I know. I heard you and Raman speak . what a kind of husband is raman he doesn't like to touch you. You have a right for love. I will give you that love)

Ishitha: Bas kijeye Parmeet ji. Raman ke bare me aur ek sabdh nehi. Apke tharah Biwi ke hote hue dusri aurat ko nehi dunde hai mere pathi. You don't have a right to speak about him. Wow nam se Raman nehi hai , kam see be Raman hai. Wow srif aur srif Shagun se pyar karthey hai karthey rahenge. Dusri aurat ko mudke dek nehi sakthey. Wow tho mere bad luck hai ki mai unke pyar kabhi nehi ban paye.( Don't talk about Raman, he is not Raman by name he is raman by his actions. He used to love Shagun and will be loving Shagun always) She is in tears and slightly drifts way to escape and is trapped by Parmeet and struck. Parmeet is laughing evilly , that's when a hand very firmly is held on Parmeet. He is shocked and turns arround swiftly to see Raman. He is sweaty and not able to understand what to do. Raman beats him up very badly and lterly kills him. Warns him not to place his evil eyes on his wife. He tells him not to show his face again and but holds himself for Simmi's sake and tells him to leave the house at the earliest.

Now he turns arround to Ishita. She is in tears. He had scars of Parmeet's nails on hre elbow. He slowly cares for that, comforts her. Makes her sitgives her water.

Raman: Yeh parmeet , phale bar kar raha hai kya tumhare saat? ( Is Parmeet doing this for the first time)

Ishitha: Wah pahale bi mere saat eyse behave har rahe thay. Lekin maine initially ignore kiya lakin slowly mere ko galath lagne laga.( He has done this before also with me but Ignored it initially later on I felt it wrong)

Raman: Tum apne apko Jansi ki Rani samjthe ho kaya. Tume mujje kyu nehi bola.Bewakuf, pagal aurat. Tume kuch ho jatha to Ruhi ka kai hota, amma, appa puri family ko mai kya jawab deta. Aur sabje jayada mera kya hotha tumne kabhi socha( Do u think u are Janshi ki Rani, why didn't u tell me. If anything happened to you what will appen to Ruhi, amma, appa, my family. Over and above what will happen to me) , bholo

Ishitha: in a state of shock of what she heard. Aapko mai kashe bolthi , appka aur mera Rishtha...( How will I tell you, mine and your relationship...)

Raman : Kya mere tumhara Rishtha, Pathi hu mai tumhara . tumhare har hal me Raksh rakrna mera frj hai.( What your and my relationship. Iam your husband , protecting you in each and every walk of life is my responsibility). Tumhe kya lagtha hai " I love you " bolna hi pyar hai ya fur bisther me sat sona hi pyar hai.( What do you think saying I love and having Sex is only love). Apart from that two we have done everything a loving and caring couple do.

Ishitha: Par who sab to Ruhi ke liye kiya tha na( But you did for Ruhi)

Raman : Kya Ruhi ke liye Ruhi ke liya. Tang aagaya hu. Tumhe kai see bhasha me samjavu ki mai tum jayse pagal aurat see pyar karne laga hu. Mere activities se tumhe samje me ku nehi aatha. ( What for Ruhi, iam tied of this. in what language can I tell you. I love you, dodnt you understand from my activities.) Mere pasad ka ek dress tumhare liya laya hun fur bi tumhe lagtha hai ki Shagun se pyar kartha hau. Padi liki Dentist ho, doctor banne ka dava karti ho. Dil ka Dhadkan samjme nehi atha tumhe. Who sirf tum hara nam letha hai. Ram hu mai, liken Shagun ka nehi Ishitha ka. Mane kal Shagun se baat bi nehi kiya ku. Tumhe hurt nehi karna chahathatha. ( I bought a dress of my choice, then also you feel I love Shagun. Your are a dentist and clim to be a doctor but you don't realize my heart beat)

Ishitha: She is in full tears. Comes running to hug him. I also feel the same for you Raman But I never told you. Raman smiles and tells her that I understond that when you were jelous and asking questions to Ruhi indirectly about shagun yesterday.

Ishitha Blushes.

Raman: but the mistake is not with Parmeet. You are looking so hot and sexy anyone will what to have you. Iam your husband whats your idea. Must I close the door.

Ishita quicly fees herself and tells him, you have ytour flight , you will miss it. What did you come home for.

Raman relaizes he was home to take a file and takes the file.

Raman: with this situation and Parmeet here I cannot leave you here. Come with me . I will take you to Mumbai.

Ishitha: But Raman we have ruhi's interview in the school. I will stay

Raman: Ok then I will book a leter flight for both you and ruhi. Take that after the Interview and come to Mumbai. I cannot affort to leave you here.

Raman Leaves, gets back to Ishitha and plants a kiss on her forehead. She is full of shyness and smile. Raman gives his trade mark file and tells her I will take my share in Mumbai.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute OS Dear!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice ff...pm me wid ur future upd8s
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Read all the 3 parts in one go...
very cute OS.. Loved their confession ❤️

Keep writing.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read all three parts in one go...
Please continue the story...
Eagerly waiting for the next part..
Awesome...👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
I read the 3 parts n its Lovely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I read all 3 parts in one go. It was awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved ur all three part story, excellent

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