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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: manjusha7
wow beautiful.loved it👏

Thank you so much dear😊😊..Im so happy you loved it😃 inspires me to write more😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
Wonderful OS

Thank you so much dear😊😊 Really glad you liked it😊😃

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
awesome!!

Thank you so much for the lovely comment dear😊😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: 13MEGHA05
Amazing Aishu...
u shld keep writing...
this one is just awesome...👍🏼
very well done dear...👏

Meghuuu😃😃..Thank you so much for your sweet comments😊😊

Im a very big fan of your stories⭐️⭐️..You know na..I just keep waiting for your updates..😊

You lovely writers on this forum inspired me to write this OS😳😳..also I love ISHRA a lot❤️

Thanks again dear😊😃

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: PreciousPri
Beautiful just beautiful 👏 Please do write more ... very good for a first time

Such well described feelings of IshRa

Priii..thank you so much dear for the lovely comments and appreciation😃😃

I am so glad you liked it😊😊..Will definitely write more..😊

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Annet and Janet

@loveabletwinz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Aishu!!!!!! Hayeee!! Congratulations, yaraaa, on your first piece of writing!!!! Vaise, secret wali baat bataon? It did not seem like your first work of writing at all!!!!

You had the perfect mix of emotion and light heartedness!!! We absolutely loved the conversation between Raman and Ishita and we can only hope that this scene will be realized on screen between Ishra! We loved the understanding that you showed Raman having, his realization that Ishita has become a very important part of his Ruhi's life, and especially in his life. It was so sweet to see Ishita lay all her walls down and open up to Raman for the first time... This is exactly the kind of maturation their relationship needs to have, and you have penned it down perfectly!!!!

I hope we will get to read more from you, Aishu!!!! You have all the skills to be an amazing writer! Please do write more!!!!

Lots of love,

AnnJan!

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: simples28

Hello dear..😃😃 Thank you so much for your wonderful comments..😊..You are indeed a fabulous writer..I love the way you write..❤️..I took inspiration from you lovely writers on this forum😊..A teeny attempt on my side⭐️..I am so happy you liked it😃..thanks again😃😃

Hey Simple that's sweet of you to say 😳 keep up the good work and you have a lot of talent too. 😊

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13MEGHA05

@13MEGHA05

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: simples28

Meghuuu😃😃..Thank you so much for your sweet comments😊😊
Im a very big fan of your stories⭐️⭐️..You know na..I just keep waiting for your updates..😊
You lovely writers on this forum inspired me to write this OS😳😳..also I love ISHRA a lot❤️
Thanks again dear😊😃