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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awww its beautiful
very very nice dear
weldone

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I want to see this scenes bas😆

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Tamanna .

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow...it is ssooo...typical os...

hopefully...may concieve to serial...😛😛😛

but at some place , raman said "tujhe " ...it is not good ..

their relation is not like friend...but typiical relation...thats why...improve it in

next os ok...???👏

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13MEGHA05

@13MEGHA05

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing Aishu...

u shld keep writing...

this one is just awesome...👍🏼

very well done dear...👏

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 11 years ago

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .ProperPatola.
Brilliant. This is very good for a first timer👍🏼...Superb storyline. I wish we can see something like this in future.

So sweet dear😊😊 Thank you so much for the lovely words of inspiration😃😃

Yeah I wish to see this in future too😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: peppygirl
Beautifull very well written.if ur first attempt is so amazing then ur upcoming os n ss will be like what dear.
Expecting some more spendid ones frm u

Awww😳...indeed so sweet of you😊..Thank you so much for your lovely comments😃😃

Will definitely make an attempt to write more often as possible😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: 4856
very well written...!! 👏 👏 hope something like this happens in our show..!!

Thank you so much dear😃😃..yeah it's too soon to expect this much sweetness from Raman, but I would love to see this happening in the show😊😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: --mancityfan--
Awesome and very well written

Hope they take inspiration from you and show this in show it is high time

Yayyy😃😃..Im so happy to see a comment from you😊..

Thank you so much for the inspiring words..⭐️..I hope to see something like this in the show too😊😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia
lovely :)

Thank you so much dear😃 Glad you liked it😊

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Hey Simple 😊
for a first time writer you have done an amazing job. The OS was well-structured, sans melodrama and had just the right blend of sweet and sincere to it.

A job well done, my friend.😃

Hello dear..😃😃 Thank you so much for your wonderful comments..😊..You are indeed a fabulous writer..I love the way you write..❤️..I took inspiration from you lovely writers on this forum😊..A teeny attempt on my side⭐️..I am so happy you liked it😃..thanks again😃😃

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