At a Crossroad - a Raman based OS. - Page 8

Originally posted by: Live-life

Well I am glad I was able to inspire someone. Makes me feel good about myself!

You inspire me by your writing style! seriously

You are indeed one of the awesomest writers here!

hehe!

glad I got to know you 😳

All the best for whatever you are busy with. 😃

Originally posted by: serendipity.

AAH, Aani, THIS... was BEAUTIFUL.

I dont even know what else to say. The Raman that you portray always makes me fall harder for him & the best part is, you dont even change him, even in the Fics, he tends to be totally in character and yet so lovable, and you... you genuinely feel his pain while reading your stories and i love that. Again, youre VERY good with the imagery & the emotions. Im just so proud of you, for makingg me... US see the Raman that we WANT to see.

His terrified self... he couldnt get over the happenings of the day & night and how much it had affected him... i was literally at the edge of my seat. You have a nice way with words and i could genuinely feel each emotion. Raman's worry, his concern... his gratefulness... i LOVEDDD his conversating with Mr Bhalla! ABSOLUTELY AMAZING 👏 Kudos for that Aani, Kudos for that. I was so glad it was Mr Bhalla this time. Hes the most suljha hua, samajhdaar Bhalla in the whole family, and he understands everything... even Raman, so well... Loved the little moment at the end... between Mr & Mrs Bhalla... Mrs Bhalla's worry for her son... and Mr Bhalla assuring, rightfully. Really cute. Loved it Aani, Keep it up! 🤗

Originally posted by: serendipity.

Hey! Its absolutely fineee Aani!!! OMG! LOL stop saying sorry OR being mortified for such a petty thing! :P & that too, youre being sorry to ME? am i not the record breaker of EVERY laziness competition there has ever been? im so bad at editing comments myself! so yeah, out of all people, im the least deserving for your apologies! 😆

LOVE YOU! 🤗

Looking forward to some more stuff, i LOVE the way you write Raman, so yeah, id be looking forward to that 😳

😃

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

I'm just speechless after reading this...

You are a brilliant writer Aani.. This was such a beautiful piece of writing that a word or few praises won't do justice to it...

You managed or pen down Raman's inner feelings so well..It was so emotional... Truly, I was moved.!!

His fears of loosing her, his happiness of having her as his wife and the mother of his child, his fear of falling in love with her, the bitter past he loves through and the scars it has left within him.. The happiness that swells his heart on watching Ru and Ishu sleeping cuddled up together.. It's just all too perfect..

Mr.Bhalla and Raman scene was a heartwarming one, we never got such a scene. The last bit of the OS was awesome too, both the parents were happy for their son knowing he has started living once again, he only needs to accept it,!

Thank you for such a wonderful OS.!! 😳

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

superb so touching story..

thank u🤗