The Risk to Blossom - IshRa SS - Final Chapter - Page 14

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Malika
aani u r writing for IshRa...now what more can i ask for? 😳
Your sajan stories used to be a treat for all of us and then i also read ur ankhi ss which was just awesomely written.
and similarly m sure this ss is gonna be as rocking as all ur writings. really liked the first part..though i am praying he doesnt think shes cheating upon him in the show but it does make lot of sense for him to think so.waiting for next part

What can I say Mallu they are working for me 😳 and thank you so much for the sweet comment 🤗 I hope I can keep up with your expectations. 😳 And I wrote Raman doubting Ishita here because he is a man who has been cheated on, and you know they say dudh ka jala thing... you don't tend to trust easily once you have been burned and betrayed.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King
Interesting... And Well Written.. Good Job 👏 👍🏼

thanks Santhu

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Aani

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#23

Originally posted by: lourel24
it was nice start.plz continue soon

thanks laurel, will post the second part this week itself.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: jojo1986

me 2 I agree with you 👏👏👏
and I Loved your SO⭐️

Originally posted by: jojo1986
WOW LOVED LOVED UPDATE SOON PLZ AND PM 2😃

thanks Jojo will pm ya when I post the next part 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sonuluvsmayur
i luv ishra...
u hav started dis ss wid a beautiful concept...😉👍🏼
u write realllyy well...plzz pm me once u upd8 it... :D

thanks Sonu 😊 will send u a pm when I post the next part 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: disha93
Very nice start!!!!
Beautifully written!!! 😊

thanks Disha 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: canadiankudi
Very nicely written. Can't wait for their silence to blossom into a beautiful relationship! Do continue soon!

Thanks dear will post the next chapter soon, this week itself. 😊

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Oh my loRD!

That was such a great update...I mean I have no words! Literally you give great detailed analysis of Raman Kumar Bhalla's feeling and emotions. The poor man has suffered a lot since he married Shagun and you depict this very well in your first part. And looking at the same scenario must have broken him again. Wo kehte hai na, "Jis thali mien khaya ussi mien chedd kiya"

Well If I say I am Disappointed in Simi it would be an understatement. It's much much much more worse that that. Just when you think you have had enough of betrayal Raman is forced to feel it again. I mean how is that fair.But of course you can't change what happened na... I mean I feel bad for Kulraj as well... He was just working hard for his family...to keep them happy

and he must be heartbroken...and Simmi went through it even after having a small baby who hasn't even learnt to speak yet!

Isn't that the same scenario...Ruhi being six months old and Shagun leaving them like she was never there...even without looking back. And in a blink of an eye everything changed.

I can't help but sympathize with Raman...he has indeed been through a lot of hell and of all the people he deserves a second chance.

And when you have something bottled up inside you it comes out like a volcano trust me and that's what happened with Raman and Ishita...

He hurt her and now she is in pain and hurt...well to be honest I think they are both hurting inside and I guess this another ante of friendship blooming in between them and then eventually love!

Becase love heals all wounds...you just need time...

And Raman's apology was so genuine...I mean no one could say that he actually rehearsed for it..he didn't need it...cause this time it was his mistake and he accepted it which makes me respect him even more! 😳 wohoo! Go RKB !

You are a fantabulous writer gurl...keep writing like this...i mean i SERIOUSLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE this update!

All the above was just my khoshish towards trying to show that you are an awesome writer!

Loved it to every word!

Pleas eplease please continue soon and do pm me

if you can I can't wait for the nest update!

Love you!

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Aani

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#29

Originally posted by: Live-life
Oh my loRD!
That was such a great update...I mean I have no words! Literally you give great detailed analysis of Raman Kumar Bhalla's feeling and emotions. The poor man has suffered a lot since he married Shagun and you depict this very well in your first part. And looking at the same scenario must have broken him again. Wo kehte hai na, "Jis thali mien khaya ussi mien chedd kiya"
Well If I say I am Disappointed in Simi it would be an understatement. It's much much much more worse that that. Just when you think you have had enough of betrayal Raman is forced to feel it again. I mean how is that fair.But of course you can't change what happened na... I mean I feel bad for Kulraj as well... He was just working hard for his family...to keep them happy
and he must be heartbroken...and Simmi went through it even after having a small baby who hasn't even learnt to speak yet!
Isn't that the same scenario...Ruhi being six months old and Shagun leaving them like she was never there...even without looking back. And in a blink of an eye everything changed.
I can't help but sympathize with Raman...he has indeed been through a lot of hell and of all the people he deserves a second chance.
And when you have something bottled up inside you it comes out like a volcano trust me and that's what happened with Raman and Ishita...
He hurt her and now she is in pain and hurt...well to be honest I think they are both hurting inside and I guess this another ante of friendship blooming in between them and then eventually love!
Becase love heals all wounds...you just need time...
And Raman's apology was so genuine...I mean no one could say that he actually rehearsed for it..he didn't need it...cause this time it was his mistake and he accepted it which makes me respect him even more! 😳 wohoo! Go RKB !
You are a fantabulous writer gurl...keep writing like this...i mean i SERIOUSLY DON'T KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE this update!
All the above was just my khoshish towards trying to show that you are an awesome writer!
Loved it to every word!
Pleas eplease please continue soon and do pm me
if you can I can't wait for the nest update!
Love you!
🤗

Hey thank you so much for this sweet and amazing reply to my SS 😃.

I am so happy I could translate the anxieties, the heartbreak and the pathos of RKB through my words successfully to you. I find that thing the most important part of a FF, when you read a book you may not necessarily visualize the characters... but with an FF, the challenge is to maintain the originality of the character, someone else has created and write it in a way that it also does justice to the actor playing the said character on screen, since thats how it works for me.

when I read FFs of shows and movies, I visualize, and if I find something OOC I cant go on with it and so I try to keep that in mind when I write too 😳

And I am so happy that you could relate to Kulraj, a character not even seen... which is somewhat original and yet hardly involved in this SS, but who does definitely have an integral role. He had to be incorporated cos Raman had to realize that he somehow knows that misery very well... and in relating these different relations - his and Shagun', Kulraj and Simi' - he will ultimately realize a very important thing about his marriage with Ishita.

Shagun left him for riches - materialistic pleasure and he thinks all women only want money and more money, so I purposely made Simi' affair not be based on monetary issues - hers is an emotional dilemma. I will say this, she may have wronged but she isn't a wrong person - as a new mother she is overwhelmed and misses her husband - yes he is doing all he can for her and the baby, but what good are riches if you aren't happy?

That's what Raman has to realize through this - not all women are the same.... he cannot judge the whole womankind by the yardstick of his one experience. Every woman is different as are her thoughts, needs and feelings. And its only this realization that can change the course of his relationship with Ishita forever.

Once again thank you so much for this awesome reply. 😃 It was a pleasure to read it

Love🤗