SS:Imtihaan Do Dilon Ki - Chapter 5 (LAST) Page 18 - Page 9

Originally posted by: tahseensakina

oye wah ji wah.. tussi bade great ho👏👏... inna acha update dekar dil khush kar deta tussi... finally rehaan is fine..!! 😛😛

aur aap na is SS ko thoda lamba nai keech sakte... woh kya haina... i love ur story... so just extend it na...pleajjj...😭😭😭

Originally posted by: chathu

Just loved it ,, n read trice for now.. , I loved Raman n Rehaan part alot ... ,, its soo touchy,,

n also Ruhita morning routing too,, .. soo adorable

update soon

Originally posted by: Live-life

Another emotional one sweet hearts! I don't know what to say...I am speechless...so much emotion in just one update...*sigh* You guys a really awesome writers...seriously...i had mixed feelings when I read this update,,,but most of all it was the feeling that there is still hope that stood out the most... HIII Janeman!!! (Waves at you frantically) I love you So much!!! Thank you for your comment! It made me sooo happy, yaar!!! We didn't mean to stump you, but I will take that as a compliment that this part made you speechless! Sigh!!! Reading comments like yours is what motivates us to write!!

Th update started beautifully with Ishita waking Ruhi in their daily routine and I must say that the daily routine is very adorable and cute! Epecially the talking to Ruhi's feet...it reminds me of happy feet! haha😆 and before you ask yes I have watched the movie...and don't judge me...we are all secretly childish on the inside! 😛 but It was really sweet seeing the mother and daughter bonding. Sriously...kehte hai na dil ka rishta khoon ke rishte se bhi bada hota hai...Suits rUHI AND iSHITA PERFECTLY! 😳 I couldn't use a better example! Awww, love!!! Sooo glad that you enjoyed that scene! That was kind of hard to write because Ishita and Ruhi have such beautiful scenes on screen and it is so hard to match that kind of natural love! Teheee! Tussi worry not! I no judge you at all!!! and who said Happy feet is for bache? Nahi!!!! Woh tho hum bade bhi tho dek sakte hain, be-sharam, be-jijak!!!! Gosh, we watched Frozen the other day, and Haila! It made us feel like children again, but khair hain! That's the point of it no??

Then comes the fallen of the leaves part...I couldn't agree more on the symbolism to actual life.. things are born and unfortunately they have to die too so that new things are born again...and IN Ishita's case Rehaan is born but...he can't die...i mean for that matter...if he was supposed to die then God wouldn't have sent him in the world in the first place...He can't die because he is a fighter just like his papa.. (today's epi 😳) and mama! I love youuu!! You pick up on the slightest, smallest details in the parts. I hoped the leaf part would convey a sense of dread and I am soo glad that you picked up on it, yaara! I know, it is a sad circle of life...what is born has to die! Sigh :( Yes!! Rehaan is a fighter, just like his mummy papa! Teheee! Today's epi was epic! Lots of lovely moments to cherish!!

Then The hospital scene...it was heartbreaking to see Raman like that...And it was heartbreaking to hear what the doctor had to say...Not nay father would want to choose between life and death for their child...it's like running on a treadmill but not really getting anywhere...Raman is hurting inside and it's showing it outside iwht his anger and frustration...cause that's what we humans do...jab dil mien emotion ka overload hota hai na to it explodes...and the explosion is big...trust me...and it hurts a lot! I understand yaar. Making that choice for your child can be so heartbreaking, especially when there seems to be no other way out! I can't imagine losing a piece of you and feeling so hopeless and out of control! By the way, you express your feelings so beautifully yaar! If you would ever consider it, we would love to read something you write as well :D Pwease??

but the scene where he fell to his knees...oh my god! I cried on that way...i literally cried like the ugly crying😭 I cannot even begun to imagine what he must be feeling *sigh*

and he lets it our by blowing the fuse in form of Ishita...but you can't blame him either...both of them are in equal pain...a very intense pain that shakes your soul... Hayee! No!!!! Pwease don't cry!!! But I know i know, we are all emotional furballs! So we shall send your way a wide, tight hug to give you some comfort. And haina? It is so easy to displace our anger and frustration on someone else when we have a whirlwind of emotions wrapped inside of us. Even I could feel it...just sitting here and reading it...it is very sad to see them like this but great writing those scene sweethearts...when the reader actually feels what those characters feel...samjho you have just received an ward for being the best writer...and no doubt you guys are one! 🤗Awww! That is sooo sweet, Nabi!! Thank you SO much!!! You are the absolute best and I am sooo happy to know that you were moved by this part! Your comments are so encouraging and supportive! 🤗
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And the last scene...I had tears again...but this time they were happy tears! when Raman decided to take Rehaan of the ventilator I was devasted...i mean for a moment there Even I lost hope but then you guys showed IShita in the mandir and Somehow that hope was back...I knew then that there is still hope...because God ke gar mien der hai anded nahi...And i AM A big one on "not losing hope" even in the worst of times...so you could say my philo side took over me on the last scene haha😊 Your philosophical side is brilliant! I loveee your outlook and positivity! You are absolutely right, there is nothing a little patience, faith and hope can't accomplish! I love that you can related to these characters even though they are fiction! You make me uber happy, janeman!!!!

And the doctor said the Rehaan had started responding and I squealed in joy on that one...and my mom was looking at me with a weird expression on her face...and i WAS smiling like an idiot! Hayyyee! Mumma ko shaq tho nahi ho gaya? Yeh kya padh kar itni khush ho rahi ho? Teheee😆😆 You are so full of life, Nabi!!! Tight, pyaar wala hug to you!!God I was so relieved to hear that...after so much darkness and pain there finallly comes the glimmer of light and ray of hope! AND Ishita prayed with honesty and just...hope that when you could have done all you can you just leave it to God to do the rest...truly...Call it a mothers plead for help but...it was pure and clear! Seriously yaar! I am sure you have heard the song "Maa" by Kailash Kher and the lyrics go "Ho Khuda pe bhi asar, Tu duaon ka hain ghar!!"<---- That is just perfect! There is so much strength in the plea of a mother :D

This was such a fantabulously awesome update sweet hearts and the last one where the doctor said apia beta bada hoke football player bane ga...that was so sweet..hmm rEHAAN BACHUU ABHI SE PRATICE SHURU! 😆 nice! so moral of the day was: Never lose hope even when u think there is none, there always is even when you are vertically challenged 😛😆 hehehehe! Glad you enjoyed that little part, Nabi! Thank you SO much for picking up on the littlest things in this SS! You are awesome!! Yesss! Moral of the story - never lose hope, even when you are vertically challenged, because you will always have shoe sole liners to come to the rescue!!!!!!!! 😆😆😆

See...this symbolizes that at the end of every dark night there is a bright morning filled with sun shine and warmth! and Raman ishita that warmth is coming your way...so get ready! hehe! Awww you have a beautiful outlook on life! it is so hard to remember that when the going is tough, but if you can tell yourself that, everything will be perfectly fine :)

Great update...seriously...god...ia m running out words to describe how old you people are with words...Just...totally awesome!

Loved it to every word! ❤️

Seriously...Love you guys...

God...now I can't wait for the nest update...btw thanks for the pm

and please continue soon amigos!

I really need to read the next warna mujhe chain nahi ayega!

Continue soon sweethearts! Love ya peeps! Awww Janeman!!!! You are absolutely the sweetest!!! Your comment brought the widest, broadest smiles on our faces and we can't thank you enough for taking the time out to comment! It means the world and beyond to us! We will update soon, yaara! Do stay tuned :D I am guessing you already know it will be a happy ending :D So rest assured, janeman :D Lots and lots of love to you!