Ye hain mohabbatein... ISHMAN OS pt 6 pg 13 may 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome!
would you pls PM me for the updates of this Story?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Super cute... Plz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YEH HAI MOHABBATEIN

PART 6

it had been days since that incident had taken place .. raman though didnt talkmuch with ishita but he had noticed how lonely she is .. there was a darkness in her life though she pretends to b happy .. her craving of having a child was not unknown to him just he knew that she wanted a baby and somewhere he knew that she will be an good mother if not an ideal mother .. everyone has flaws but she even with her in abiliy to bear child was far better than shagun.. atleast she portrays what she is actually .. his view about ishita was changed and his relation with his own daughter was improving little in slow steps...

he had started taking care of his little ruh and not only this most of her works are now with him he would make her ready for school feed her the breakfast for which he had refused many times just because she reminded him of that shagun ... and in return he would be felicitated with her precious smile and the kiss that she would gladly give him...

raman was living a dream but still there was a craving for his son.. aditya .. shagun had turned no stones to make his life hell and he knew that she would give nothing to aditya and turn him just like her mean and callous..

raman was alone in the hone ruhi and other family members had went to spent some quality of time alone and he refused having his important meeting but he didnt forget to say to his little angel to bring something for him as well that was it his little princess was happiest amongst all..

raman made a strong cup of coffee for him and went to terrace to seek some solace when he fel her .. ishita was there sitting lonely in the corner ..wet and cold winds were blowing and it would rain anytime.. he went near her and found her staring at the black clouds ... she was looking dull and worn out and latey he had observed that she was quite even her gelling with ruhi was less nowadays .. ishita was staring at the wide space when she heard him saying

raman : thank you so much

ishita didnt respond , infact she neither looked at him her yes were like glued to the black clous.. the thundering of couds made him to step back and go but not before asking her to come...

raman : ishita , its going to rain.. andar chalo.. warna bheeg jaogi...

he asked but no response she was numb with no response ..the rain started and it started drenching them .. he with no option hold her wrist and made her stand... she without any reaction tried to snapped his hands but his grip was too strong he could read her rebellious actions..

she shouted at once making him angry...

ishita : leave me...

raman : you mad woman get inside.. dikh nahi raha kitna bheeg gayi ho got dammit you will fall sick ... i thought that you are sensible but i didnt knew that you are irresponsible too...

ishita : how dare you , kon hote ho app mujhe kuch bhi kehne wale... ohhh now i understand you think that i am helpless alone..koi nahi hai mere saath so anyoe could say anyone to me kuch bhi bologe and i will listen..

tell me did you came here to accuse me that i kidnapped your daughter or taunt me that i can't be a mother .. me maa nahi bansakti.. boliye mr raman kumar bhalla

ishita eyes were red with crying and anger he at once pushed raman but he looking at her shivering form didnt let her go.. he hold her close and in her protest to freed her their lips brushed but none of them realised what happened...

raman : you have gone mad come now..he was about to darg her but she fell unconsious.. raman with no other option carried her in his arms ..she was warm..he came to her flat ad made her lie on the bed he was about to call go and call doctor when she holdhr hand..he looked at her she was unconsious and blabbering ...

ishita : why are you not saying anything..just acuse me i am a gold digger , i am going to take your child..just because i cant be a mother..i am infertile.. i dont deserve a child..i cant be a mother..

ishita cried bitterly her eyes were red and swelled she was shivering and was having temperature and she was about to go when she felt herself swaying and he was right there to get hold of hers ...

ishita was unconcious and mummering...

ishita : why everyone insult me.i too want to be a mother.. its not my fault... please dont do this..

subbu..i love you...

amma , i am going to marry anyone you say...

raman looked at ishita she was now calmed but tears were on er face..he wiped her tears and there was something that made his rock hard heart melt... there was a change that they will know with the time..some relations and only meant to be just like they are meant to be...

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the end

how was it i know i had taken a long time to complete this ...

thank u everyone for the support


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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
u hv started to write on raman ishi too...
i like thm ...
bt maaneet wala charm nahi hai...
bt the current trackk is very nice m liking it ..
n this i'll read aftr xam only... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirror1521

u hv started to write on raman ishi too...
i like thm ...
bt maaneet wala charm nahi hai...
bt the current trackk is very nice m liking it ..
n this i'll read aftr xam only... 😊

m watching this frm day 1
thats why i am writing on ishra too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
beautiful story...read in one go...but can I ask u one thing , I am not familiar with the leads...who are they???😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb OS, well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Wow that was simply fabulous
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear..nice update..thanks alot for the PM😃

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