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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6

Lata is shocked and says to herself, this means Koyal is Daiima's daughter? Yes! She is my daughter! Lata turns and sees Daiima standing with Dev and Daiima comes inside the room. Why Bahu are you so shocked? Yes, Koyal is my daughter. My own daughter. You think i been staying in this house all this years for who? Raj? No! So that my daughter has a good life. And Raj knows that Koyal is my daughter and he brought her up as his own sister. That's exactly what i wanted. That's why i chased Aruna from the house saying she has affair so that i become the important figure in this house and my daughter became Raj's lovely sister that he would do anything for her. She made a mistake in falling for that Karan and that Abha send my daughter to jail. And you! You who were Abha's sister got married to Raj and entered this family. All my dreams of inheriting the Singhania properties went in vain. That's when i decided that i should never let you live in peace and i started making plans. Both you and Abha who sent my daughter to prison should not live happily. So i used Dev to create problem for Abha using Sanskar and for you my lovely Bahu, i myself stayed in his house and tried giving you all the problems so that Raj would not like you. But you, you managed to make him love you. And the biggest shock for me is that you are now expecting his child.

If your child is going to inherit all the properties, what happens to my effort all these years? And you again try bringing back that Aruna to this house. Do you think i'm a fool to wait all these years and get nothing? Now that you have found out the truth, you should not be alive. Dev, go and grab her hands and close her mouth. Daiima reaches out for a stick and says, i'm going to kill your child and push you down from the stairs and make it seemed like an accident where you fell down the stairs. I'm sorry Lata Thakur and Daiima raises her hands and as she is about to hit Lata's stomach, Raj shouts 'DAIMMMAAA!!!!' Daiima and Dev gets shocked and sees Raj standing at the door. Daiima is shocked and lets go the stick and Daiima says Raj! How are you here? No Raj, don't believe everything that happened here. Lata planned everything to make me look bad. Raj shouts 'ENOUGH!!!'. I have seen and heard everything by myself. Raj is close in tears and walks forward saying i had always thought of you to be my mother. I gave you all the importance. But you were so cheap and acted as though you loved me all this while. You took my mother away from me, you tried taking my wife away and now, you are trying to kill my child? How lower more you can go just to inherit these properties? I really feel like slapping you but that's not how i was brought up. Maa!

Aruna ji walks inside the room and Daiima is shocked to see Aruna and Raj says, Maa. She has seperated your husband and child from you. She made us stay apart from each another all these years and today, she tried killing your bahu. This is your time! Aruna walks forward and slaps Daiima! Daiima is shocked and says you must be shocked to see how are we here now right? Thank god Lata had informed us in time, otherwise i would have seen her dead by now and Aruna hugs Lata and Lata cries. *Flashback* At Swarn Bhawan while all the commotion is going with Koyal revealing the truth, the phone rings and Aruna picks up the call. Lata informs that she saw Daiima with Dev and a lady and she is scared that they are up to something big. Aruna informs that Koyal is now here in Swarn Bhawan. Lata says Koyal in Swarn Bhawan? Maa, i remember seeing an evidence of Koyal in Daiima's room. Maa, i'm feeling scared that my life and my child's life is in danger. Please call Raj ji to come back now. Aruna goes to Raj who says 'Go away from here and don't talk to me.' Aruna says listen here Raj, if you don't listen to me now, you will lose your wife and child forever. Her life is in danger. We need to go to her now and Raj looks at Aruna and before leaving, he says to Koyal, i'm not finished with you and i will be back and Raj leaves with Aruna *Back to Present*. Lata looks at Daiima and says i never thought you will be so evil to kill me and my child. My parents always thought me to respect the elders but you had lost all of it. Lata slaps Daiima and says, this is for separating Raj ji from his mother. Lata Slaps again saying this is for trying to spoil the happiness of my family. And Lata slaps again saying this is for trying to kill my child. Daiima runs to Raj and say, look Raj. How are all of them treating me infront of you. Raj says i'm ashamed to see your face. Don't come before me.

Precap : The police arrest Daiima and Dev and Daiima leaves saying my daughter Koyal is now out and she will take revenge against all of you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Visha 👍🏼 for continuing the story very interesting as finally Raj knows the bitter truth about his Daima 👏 i'm glad about that and she and Dev are sent to jail but there is still trouble coming ahead for Karan and Aabha and also all the others as now Koyal will be seeking revenge 😔 Keep it up Visha and well done 😉😃🤗 And can't wait for the next part 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks dee, dedicated this episode for Daiima being exposed and yeah, she finally got some slaps
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Visha. This episode worth waiting for. 🥳 Now only PH & CV's had done this kind of episode. 🤗
Now waiting for next episode
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Shobhi 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes,Visha finally daima gets a few slaps and she really deserved it 👍🏼👏 🥳
Edited by karsuh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: karsuh

Yes,Visha finally daima gets a few slaps and she really deserved it 👍🏼👏 🥳

Don't know if I am being greedy BUT more slaps from Raj and Arunaji would have been icing on the cake 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes but Raj slapping Daiima would not reflect his character. That's why i had not made Raj slapping her 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Visha_Dhami

Yes but Raj slapping Daiima would not reflect his character. That's why i had not made Raj slapping her 😕

you have a point there. Really shame that kavita and her CV's dragged daaima character and its end was just immature. You should have joined the CV team.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Shobhi, i wish i could and prove that we can write better than them 😕

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