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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
omg!! i just read its so nice but i feel sorry for micheal!!!!!!
UPDATE! IM MAD BUT YH! I DID, UPDATE MINE! AND I WONT DO THE NEXT CHAP UNTIL U DO URS! DEAL?
😆
luv horia
xxxlolxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: freaky_angel

omg!! i just read its so nice but i feel sorry for
micheal!!!!!!
UPDATE! IM MAD BUT YH! I DID, UPDATE MINE! AND I WONT DO THE NEXT
CHAP UNTIL U DO URS! DEAL?
😆
luv horia
xxxlolxxx



thanks! 😃 glad u liked it!

i just read urs too... im leaving my comments there in a bit! and that's not
fair... that's blackmail... i'll try to put up the next chapter in a few days...
depends on how busy i get...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73

nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this time i wasnt there to review first 🤢 ... but itsh okie... im reserving dis post for my review... so wait 😛😛😛

hah i am done...

short i must say 😭😭😭

but other than that... too good...👏👏

👏i loved micheals jealousy... the way he asks meg to cancel it nd d way he admits his feelings for her... its too cute....😳

wonder whats gonna happen next.....😉😃😉

well i could have just imagined the expression on his face when meg told him she set ronnie up on a date 😆

great going!!!!!!!

update soon😛😛😛

-❤️Ysh❤️-

Edited by ~Sirius*Ysh~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this time i
wasnt there to review first 😭
🤢 ... but itsh okie... im reserving dis post for my
review... so wait 😛😛😛

awww... that's ok!! ur still my
best critic 🤗

hah i am done...


short i must say 😭😭😭

yea...
i had a feeling it was... but it reaches the 400 word limit... hehe

but other than that... too good...👏👏

thank you! 😳

👏i loved micheals jealousy... the way he asks
meg to cancel it nd d way he admits his feelings for her... its too cute....
😳


wonder whats gonna happen next.....😉😃😉

u'll just hav to wait... 😉 but i think you'll like the next
chapter very much! 😉

welli could have just imagined the expression on
his face when meg told him she set ronnie up on a date 😆😆😆
😆


great going!!!!!!!

thanks once
again! 😃

update soon😛😛😛

in a few
days maybe...

-❤️Ysh❤️-



luv ya!

-rashmi

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
Absolutely wonderful chapter! Michael's jealousy was too cute. 😊 Kinda feel back for whoever the blind date was. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: SpoILed BraT



thanks! 😃 glad u liked it!

i just read urs too... im leaving my comments there in a bit! and that's not
fair... that's blackmail... i'll try to put up the next chapter in a few days...
depends on how busy i get...


😆😆😆 its not blackmail it is a deal!😆😆🤣
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: .:.Suhana.:.

Absolutely wonderful chapter! Michael's jealousy was
too cute. 😊 Kinda feel back for whoever the blind date was. Please continue
soon.



thank you! 😃

im working on the next chapter... i shud have it up in a few days... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: freaky_angel


😆😆😆 its not blackmail it
is a deal!😆😆🤣



okay okay... fine fine... but u need to put up your chapter as soon as i put
mine up ok?
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
since people complained that the last chapter was too short, i decided to
put the next one up really soon... so here it is guys! hope u enjoy it

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The afternoon couldn't go any slower for Michael. He paced around
the living room, flipped through the channels on TV without really
watching anything and checked his watch at least every five minutes.

After what seemed like ages, the clock finally struck six and Michael
rushed back to the shore to fetch Veronica.

He had barely stepped out of the house when he saw Veronica
walking towards him.

"Hey Ronnie!"

"Oh, hey Michael! Are you going somewhere?"

"I was just coming to get you actually. I wanted to make sure you
hadn't forgotten about our dinner plan."

"I haven't forgotten. Don't worry."

"Well that's good! We leave at 7:30 okay?"

"Alright." smiled Veronica as she made her way into the house.

An hour and a half later, Meg found Michael pacing the living room
again.

"You wanna sit down Michael?"

"Huh? What? Oh... No... I'm fine." answered Michael a little
distractedly.

"She wont cancel on you if that's what you worried about. She said
she'll be down in five minutes."

"Oh... Thanks Meg. And um... I'm sorry for screaming at you a while
ago." said a guilty Michael.

"It's alright Michael. I probably would have done the same."

Michael walked towards his sister and gave her a hug. "Thanks sis!
You're the best."

"I'll wait in the car with Johnny okay?"

"Alright."

Just as Meg closed the door behind her, Michael saw Veronica
coming down the stairs. She looked beautiful in a denim skirt that sat
right above her knees and a black sleeveless top. Her thick brown hair,
that went a little below her shoulder were held in place with a clip while a
few stray strands lightly fell above her eyes which were just as brown as
her hair.

"Wow! You look beautiful Ronnie." Michael realized he was staring
and decided to give her a compliment before he looked away.

"Thanks Michael."

"Meg and Johnny are waiting in the car. Are you ready to leave?"

"Yeah. Let's go."

Michael held the door open and allowed Veronica to walk out before
he followed her. When they got to the porch, they saw Meg and Johnny
already in the car. Once again, Michael opened the door and let Veronica
in before he walked to the other side and sat in the car.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
lovely lovely lovely... and this time i get to reply first \:d/ \:d/ \:d/

love this part too... nd thanks for putting it up so soon... luv michel as usual and meg is such a sweet sis... hope some more romance takes place...

hey and a word of advice... hope u would put more decription in cos that increases the feel of the story and makes us feel WITH it...

luvya
-❤️Ysh❤️-

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