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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot

1. Continuous interference from a third party can be a possible reason, it can be from respective in-laws or friends. That's my original take while I had read the first segment. And that's how I proceeded further based on other author's contributions.

2. Now coming to Samarth, this character is someone whom I am rooting for, because even after all these, due to his deep feelings for Veronica from college days, he is still open-hearted to give Veronica the chance to be happy in life with him. Not many men would be big-hearted enough like him to forget this dark past which Veronica had in reality. So that way, there is a way to explore that part in the upcoming episodes.

1. Thank you. This makes sense and you have also now provided a way for Abhay’s redemption arc to be set up. He may have been tempted by Jiya and Veronica’s own neediness might have been the last nail on the coffin which drove him away from her and into Jiya’s arms. Knowing Jiya’s true motivations makes it easier to understand why Abhay fell for her. She was just faking her persona to fit Abhay’s. Trying to be everything for him that he needed and being the opposite of Veronica so he’d fall and he did fall. Hard. So much that he gave up his wife (& child). Now the second one (imo) is a more grave problem and if we want Abhay to truly be redeemed we’ll have to think of some explanation as to why he let go of the child he was going to have. So much that it drove Veronica to abortion. I don’t know what she told him- whether he knows she deliberately lost the child because of his non-acceptance or she told him she miscarried. I hope she wasn’t being kind to him. I hope he knows exactly how his actions provoked that decision by Veronica. He needs to earn his redemption. It cannot come easily.

2. About Samarth, I whole- heartedly agree with your assessment. He’s a rare breed among men. He deserves all the love. He’s been through enough. So has Veronica. Give them some love, writers!

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: DreamOfEndless

Awesome update, Liz 👏

Ouch, the Panther is out to catch all men who loved Jiya. Sam finally knows his family truth. The name, 'Mehta,' that gives pride to Abhay is not his name.

Thank you, T! I hope it wasn’t too much and it all made sense 🙈 I’m glad you caught on to that. The Mehta family name that brings in Abhay’s arrogance and pride is not his after all. Take that in your whisky and smoke it, Abhay! 😎
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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

That was such an awesome segment, Sup Di.🤗❤️ Thoroughly enjoyed it. So Panther is the mafia of Maldives, oh great!! Jiya was in relationship with that mafia, I am really thinking how Saikat had broken her heart that she lost her mind completely. And Abhay is also not a Mehta and both of Abhay and Sam's father is same. This story of Kangana reminding me of one story of Byomkesh Bakshi titled, "Rakter Dag". But one doubt I have, if Kangana was pregnant during marriage, wouldn't Mehtas doubt about the early birth of the child and Manav is also unaware of his wife's secret?

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot

That was such an awesome segment, Sup Di.🤗 But one doubt I have, if Kangana was pregnant during marriage, wouldn't Mehtas doubt about the early birth of the child and Manav is also unaware of his wife's secret?

Twin pregnancies are known to not be carried full term (I’m not an expert so correct me if I’m wrong). Plus the timing of the pregnancy (immediately after marriage) was such that Manav never suspected the child wasn’t his. He knew nothing of Kangana and Vish’s background. That’s why I said in my summary that the pregnancy and delivery happened such that Manav would not suspect anything unusual. Ofc the hospital staff would have to be in on it. Perhaps Abhinav bribed them. Perhaps the birth happened at home with someone they trusted - midwife or even a family doctor. Idk. That’s upto you all. Something had to be made up to ensure that twins separated at birth idea of Shiri’s was supported. This was the best I could come up with. I’m sorry if it does not make full logical sense ..
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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

Thank you Lizzie for taking over ❤️


And yes pls continue the story, I will hop back in at some point ❤️

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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Twin pregnancies are known to not be carried full term (I’m not an expert so correct me if I’m wrong). Plus the timing of the pregnancy (immediately after marriage) was such that Manav never suspected the child wasn’t his. He knew nothing of Kangana and Vish’s background. That’s why I said in my summary that the pregnancy and delivery happened such that Manav would not suspect anything unusual. Ofc the hospital staff would have to be in on it. Perhaps Abhinav bribed them. Perhaps the birth happened at home with someone they trusted - midwife or even a family doctor. Idk. That’s upto you all. Something had to be made up to ensure that twins separated at birth idea of Shiri’s was supported. This was the best I could come up with. I’m sorry if it does not make full logical sense ..

Okay no probs Di, you've indeed very well built the storyline, I was just asking out of curiosity, tbh I have very bad knowledge of biology. You've given us a lot of scope to explore and unveil further.

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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Segment # 16


Samarth tossed restlessly on his tiny twin bed, desperately trying to get some well-deserved shut-eye. He was bone tired. First, the shattering news about Shweta and Saikat had come in, and he had held Veronica until she had exhausted her tears. When he had finally gotten her to sleep, Abhay had called her cell. Sam had half a mind to ignore it, then decided he would pick up just to let Abhay absorb the fact that he and Nica were together. But Abhay had some surprising news to deliver. It seemed Shweta and Saikat were still alive but barely. It would be a miracle if either survived. Sam had never believed in them. But the tragedy had happened so far away from home and their only source of information was Abhay! Of all people! He snorted at the twisted irony.


@Bold : That was my most favourite part from today's segment. Love love❤️
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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Hi Sup Di, can you please make a list of characters so far and their relationships with the main leads? It will be easier for the next writers to continue the upcoming segments properly without messing them up.

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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Quantum-Dot

Hi Sup Di, can you please make a list of characters so far and their relationships with the main leads? It will be easier for the next writers to continue the upcoming segments properly without messing them up.

I made a timeline already and tbh that was super hard 😆.

I'll make a rough character sketch this time for y'all to refer to but new characters keep getting added all the time, & I may not be able to keep up.

The best thing would be if each writer puts in a small summary of their segment below it when they write (kinda like how I did for mine), and add whatever new characters they have introduced so that WD or me or Madhu can update it in the Master post (which can be the one I create like I did for Timeline). Sound good to everyone?

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Narrative Ninjas

Posted: 2 years ago

Summary (as of Segment # 16)


Segment # 1 (WildestDreams)

  • Samarth is trying to make amends, telling Nica not to compare him with Abhay - telling her 'not to keep him out of this'.
  • His family is also involved in some way (Nica telling him she doesn't want him or his family, calls them hypocrites)
  • She realizes she has been deceived by someone she trusted ..again (i.e. Samarth)


Segment # 2 (Quantum-Dot) Flashback

  • Veronica & Abhay Mehta have been married for 3 years
  • Nica is an orphan who lives with her uncle, Ashutosh Gupta and her cousin, Shweta. He paid for the wedding
  • Abhay is a Micro student, a topper and from a rich, business family
  • Samarth is Shweta's friend and knew of Nica by reputation only (as Abhay, the topper's gf)
  • Abhay & Veronica dated in college and they were a popular couple


Segment # 3 (DreamofEndless): Flashback

  • Post-marriage Nica starts to notice a lack of interest from Abhay
  • He leaves on a business trip & she finds out he's cheating
  • She also hears him arguing with his parents
  • She decides to leave and go to her uncle's house with no explanation
  • After 7 days of being in her uncle's house Sam comes to visit her (brings papers that Abhay sent)


Segment #4 (Oh_Nakhrewaali): Flashback (diary entries)

  • Samarth is seeing a therapist who’s asked him to maintain a diary
  • Sam & Nica began to know each other in 2013 (they volunteered together), the first time they had any sort of interaction
  • He had a girlfriend in college
  • After college, he decided to stay away from her
  • Abhay & Nica married in 2019
  • Sam saw Abhay kissing another woman in 2021
  • In Dec 2022, he meets her (7 days after she leaves Abhay)
  • Nica gets a note from a doc telling her she's pregnant


Segment # 5 (Bee222)


  • Nica had left pregnancy test results at home for Abhay (he sends it back with Sam)
  • Abhay & Nica had been together for 8 years
  • She finds something else (a blue note) in the envelope with the results


Segment # 6 (QD)

  • Abhay has written a note saying he wants nothing to do with the baby or Nica.
  • Flash forward to 6 months later when Nica & Abhay are now divorced (May 2023)
  • Saikat comes to meet her and she cries on his shoulder
  • She moved out of her uncle's place and is renting a flat


Segment # 7 (DreamofEndless)


Present-day timeline (July 2023)


  • Nica overhears Sam telling Shweta that he loves Nica and that he saw Abhay with another woman
  • She slaps him and refuses to trust him


Segment # 8 (oh_nakhrewaali)


Flashback to Jan 2023


  • Veronica listens to baby's heartbeat on the Ultrasound, decides to terminate
  • Runs into Samarth and asks him to accompany her for the procedure
  • It was traumatic for her - she's thinking about the day in present timeline


Segment # 9 (Bee222)


  • Samarth recalls his grandfather and Abhay's grandfather's friendship & how the two boys would tag along with them on morning walks
  • The idea that Abhay is competitive and used to winning and Sam enables him by deliberately losing is introduced here
  • Sam's dad was transferred to Dehradun, where he died in an accident
  • He & his mom returned to Kolkata, his mom was clinically depressed and his grandfather was dying
  • Abhay's grandfather, Abhinav Naanu helped out a lot
  • To repay him Sam begins to work for the Mehtas (Abhay's family) as a chauffeur
  • Sam does have some fond memories of Abhay but the grown-up Abhay has changed, & only wants the best
  • Sam admires Abhay
  • He had told Mrs. Mehta about Abhay cheating on Veronica
  • Sam wants to feel wanted, needed and valued


Segment # 10 (Quantum-Dot)


Present day July 2023


  • Shweta and Saikat are honeymooning in Maldives 8 months after their marriage
  • Saikat sees Abhay in the hotel lobby and gets into a scuffle with him
  • Shweta realizes that Saikat will always put Nica first & also that Sam befriended her because he wanted to get close to Nica
  • Shweta & Saikat argue about this


Segment # 11 (ExoticDisaster)


  • Samarth's desire for Nica reveals itself
  • Abhay's grandfather talks to his mother about Abhay and Samarth being fraternal twins
  • Abhinav worries about Abhay's feelings if the truth was revealed whereas Kangana is worried for Samarth.



Segment # 12 (oh_nakhrewaali)


  • Samarth's seduction of Nica is revealed to be a dream
  • He decides to confront her (after the slap incident)
  • We get a snippet of Abhay & his girlfriend Jiya in the hotel in Maldives.
  • Abhay drifted away from Veronica because she had become too possessive.
  • He loves Jiya but his family won't accept her
  • His family wanted him to stay with Nica; he is tired of pretending for the sake of his family's reputation
  • Samarth goes to Nica's place. Nica has come to rely on him during the months before her divorce. She is also attracted to him.
  • She asks him if he truly loves her and he admits it again


Segment # 13 (DreamofEndless)


  • Veronica and Samarth kiss
  • Shweta leaves the hotel at night. Saikat goes after her
  • While arguing, they are run over by a truck
  • Abhay is told about it since the hotel staff has seen him arguing with Saikat


Segment # 14 (WildestDreams)


  • Veronica and Sam go on a date
  • Next day, Kangana- Abhay's mother comes to give her the news that Shweta & Saikat have passed away.


Segment #15 (Quantum-Dot)


  • Veronica is grieving the loss of both Saikat & Shweta
  • Samarth arrives and begins to doubt the truth of the news since it was delivered by Abhay
  • He too grieves Shweta
  • A scene at the hospital in Maldives tells us that Shweta and Saikat are still alive but critical
  • Jiya goes to the hospital to visit them, it is revealed that she and Saikat were engaged but it was broken off before marriage because of Veronica. Jiya decided to destroy Veronica and Abhay's marriage as revenge.


Segment #16 (LizzieBennet)


  • Abhay relays the news about Shweta and Saikat being alive
  • Abhinav naanu visits Samarth and asks him to come back to work for the Mehtas
  • Samarth had quit that job when Veronica had terminated her pregnancy.
  • He used to moonlight as a chauffeur but in reality was their bodyguard. He has trained in jiu-jitsu.
  • Abhinav tells Sam that Abhay's life is in danger because of Jiya who is a dangerous druglord, Vikrant Chaddha's ex-girlfriend. Saikat may have been attacked by him too.
  • He also reveals the truth about Samarth and Abhay being twins- they are Kangana Basu and Vishwas Varma's children.
  • Samarth agrees to go to Maldives when he learns Nica is also going.


Segment #17 (DreamofEndless)



The remaining segments can be summarized by quoting this post each time and adding your own.

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago

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