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Posted: 2 years ago

Miss T, phaad diye be tum toh🔥🔥🔥🔥

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Wow T! You totally knocked this one for a six!

Aryan & Saheel are getting to spend time together- that’s good but Saheel has to learn self-acceptance first before he owns up to any feelings he might have for Aryan. But it was good to see Saheel apologizing and now the two have made up so hopefully that goes somewhere.

So Chahat’s family took her back home but now she has a mysterious text. This reminds me of Pretty little Liars! What does she have to pay for? Intriguing. Very well poised now for Neha to take it away!

Thanks Liz 🥰 Also, thanks for summarizing the segment. It seems someone has a grudge on Chahat and wants to harm her. I leave it to the next writers.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: DreamOfEndless

Thanks Liz 🥰 Also, thanks for summarizing the segment. It seems someone has a grudge on Chahat and wants to harm her. I leave it to the next writers.

Chahat naa Hui ITV ki lead Hui, ek min ka chain nahi hai bichaari ko🤣

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Plot Pundits

Posted: 2 years ago

Jhakaas ❤️. Enjoyed reading the update......


👏👏End ka googly mast hai...... Now myself left scratching my head

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ok so I thought I'd make a character sketch and update it with the events so far:



Main characters (all introduced by Shiri in all her updates)


Aryan Sareen:

He comes out as gay before his father when he's 16. His father's reaction is to slap him and later about a year later

Chahat Johari:

Her older brother Prateek is arriving to pick her up from college after the fiasco

Fixed it for you🙃

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Dialogue Dynamos

Posted: 2 years ago

next I wanna write!!! koi hai kya line mein??

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Segment#6 Loving2Missing2

TW: violence, slang, suicide


In her office, Professor Bansal was staring at the picture in her table drawer. Sheila, her first love! The love she had lost long ago when Sheila committed suicide upon family’s finding out about their relation. In an attempt to forget her loss, Meera Bansal had thrown herself into her studies and thereafter her academic career. Over the years, she knew she felt different when she patted the backs of female students or they came and hugged her to say a thank you or a goodbye. However, since Chahat had joined; the memories of Sheila had come rushing back because Chahat was an exact replica. Every time, Chahat sat on the front bench, she had wondered whether Chahat was Sheila reborn. But Chahat was always seen with Aryan, the two tugging around like best buddies and also known to be roomies.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, Vikram had given her a golden chance. He had connected Aryan with Sahil to her surprise. The way Chahat stood up trying to defend him had actually given Aryan away. Wisely, Bansal had called Vikram, Aryan and Chahatto Dean’s office excluding Sahil. She wasn’t sure whether Sahil would be willing to share his room with Aryan; but about Aryan she was very sure. A shrewd move would free Chahat and of course, she would give her lofty offer to accommodate Chahat in her room for Chahat’s own protection.

The meeting with Dean was due in five minutes. As a respected professor, she held all the cards now!


sorry darling but this bit gives me very predator-ish vibes. since we don't know the ages of the characters involved. My guess if Chahat & co are in their early twenties and Prof. Bansal is in her mid or late 30s.

Had the roles been reversed (Mr. Bansal instead of Ms-) the oddity of this pairing would be obvious...

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Miss T, phaad diye be tum toh🔥🔥🔥🔥

I hope jo bhi phata hai, it can be sewed back 🤣

Thanks Shibz 😳

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Jhakaas ❤️. Enjoyed reading the update......


👏👏End ka googly mast hai...... Now myself left scratching my head

Thank you 🤗

The googly has an answer in the segment itself. Somewhere in the beginning of my segment 😆

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Satrangi_Curls

next I wanna write!!! koi hai kya line mein??

Hi! Main hoon! You can take after me. My Segment#9 coming soon.


Saw your post regarding my update. My intention had been to bring in a little intrigue and all-inclusivity. So I created a double love triangle. It could have been predator-ish and then the story would get another turn.... but it's not to be so by the next writing! So keeping in synch, I am justifying in my chapter where her thoughts came from and how did she suddenly have a change of mind. If you write next, you can decide on her further role/no role.😃


Role reversal is actually not necessary (changing to Mr. Bansal). Everybody in this world has same emotions. If an older man and younger woman has been a prevailing theme of storylines since long time; then an older woman desiring a younger woman is no rarity either.


The challenge in any fichain writing is to accept the previously written plotline and build it ahead; could have been a really enjoyable experience.

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