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Posted: 2 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

My plot bunny totally hinged on Aryan’s truth not being revealed so soon (I suspect Shibz was leaning towards that too but what do I know? 😆) And yeah, mine was more rom-commy and less drama but the genre is what the next person makes it so yeah, murder mystery is totally on the cards! 🫣🫠😇

Yeah, me too. I was like C-S-A drama bahut der Tak chalega as A pushes CS closer or something😅

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Posted: 2 years ago
#72

Nice segue, Shibz! 👏


So now it's out in the open - which sucks for Aryan truly cos he did not deserve that.

You ready to take this forward, L2M2? 😳

Edited by LizzieBennet - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: DreamOfEndless

That scene of Harry and Prof McGonagall is one of my favorites. McGonagall can quite badass at times 🤣 I am glad you liked Prof Bansal too :)

McGonagall and the way Maggie Smith plays her! *Chef's kiss*. One book character that was elevated in the movie for me.
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Posted: 2 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Nice segue, Shibz! 👏


So now it's out in the open - which sucks for Aryan truly cos he did not deserve that.

You ready to take this forward, L2M2? 😳

yupp 🤗taking Segment #6 smiley20

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Posted: 2 years ago
#75

Main ek din kya gayi, do segments aa gaye 😍

I love how this story is shaping up

Ritz and Shibz, you both are ❤❤


Ek ek heart, do no k liye. Kaun sa kisko lena hai aapas mein decide kar lena 🤣🤣

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Posted: 2 years ago
#76

Segment#6 Loving2Missing2

TW: violence, slang, suicide


"Put it on speaker. " Chahat whispered as she pressed the hand she held with care. More than the air entering his lungs, her touch gave him the courage.

“What is this that I am hearing from your dean?.... You got into a fight with another man? Are you man enough to do that? …. You are a VERMIN!” Sudhakar's crescendo reached an angry octave on the last word.

Aryan’s eyes shimmered with tears of hurt and disappointment…. A castaway feeling that crept like a snake and subjugated his entire being! Chahat sensed his depression and wrapped her arm around him like a warm shelter giving him strength to respond.

“Please come tomorrow at noon to college.”

“First answer me, why you got into a fight?” Sudhakar kept roaring in his usual style.

“I was protecting my girl!”

Sudhakar was taken aback by the steely quiet in Aryan’s voice. First time in his life, he was at a loss of words.

Sahil stood at the classroom door, his eyes red with anger, his fists curled in retaliation.

“Your girl, huh? SHE is your girl?” The fist connected with Aryan’s cheek with the force of a hidden storm.

Blood in his mouth, Aryan stared aghast at Sahil. Something had happened to his heart. He could see it in the red of Sahil’s eyes. His bench partner through the schoolyear whom Aryan loved secretly; but was always left wondering.

Sahil had felt lava being poured on his skin when he had read the vicious writing on the wall…

Aryan Koochikoo Sahil. Lemme bareback, baby!

He had always wondered why flexed muscles of Vicky Koushal made his blood rush. He had known he liked sitting next to Aryan, not in pure honest-to-God friendship. In all these years, he had not been able to put a finger on these sudden flashes. And then, he wondered why he wanted to touch Chahat, feel her velvety skin under his body. He longed to take her double-battery out and kiss her eyes.

He had not been able to fathom the pleasure he felt at the instantaneous fantasy that the bareback stuff had evoked in his mind. He had gulped it down when Chahat had challenged Vikram hoping she didn’t notice his pleasure. After Professor Bansal had left, he had used his long-practised control and managed the scene. But, seeing his name flash in neon had felt like becoming naked in public.

“Then, why is my name tagged with you?” Sahil was ready to hit the next blow but Chahat fell between the two men attempting to hold back Sahil. He stopped just short of hitting her face and curbed his anger realising she was almost hugging him.

“It’s not his fault, Sahil!” She urged passionately trying to stop the man towering above her. Oh! He was so manly! His muscles, toned by the sports practice, were now flexed showing their strength. Suddenly, she felt weak in her legs.

Out of their own volition, Sahil’s arms went around Chahat holding her frame in his caring embrace.“Are you okay?” He was genuinely concerned.

Chahat nodded silently as she wondered whether this was the right moment to tell him that she loved him. But she couldn’t risk shocking him and losing that great feel of his hug.

Aryan watched stricken…… his heart plummeting…..the one name he had posted on Grindr with true love…….Sahil!.......Hugging his best friend with so much love, so much tenderness?....... What was he supposed to feel now? Happy for both his great friends or sad for himself?

Saahil felt pressure building behind his sternum looking at Aryan. Could he ever tell him that he had felt angry when Aryan called Chahat his girl….. Because he had secretly wanted Aryan for himself….. And that’s why he had been crosschecking whether Aryan loved Chahat.

In her office, Professor Bansal was staring at the picture in her table drawer. Sheila, her first love! The love she had lost long ago when Sheila committed suicide upon family’s finding out about their relation. In an attempt to forget her loss, Meera Bansal had thrown herself into her studies and thereafter her academic career. Over the years, she knew she felt different when she patted the backs of female students or they came and hugged her to say a thank you or a goodbye. However, since Chahat had joined; the memories of Sheila had come rushing back because Chahat was an exact replica. Every time, Chahat sat on the front bench, she had wondered whether Chahat was Sheila reborn. But Chahat was always seen with Aryan, the two tugging around like best buddies and also known to be roomies.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, Vikram had given her a golden chance. He had connected Aryan with Sahil to her surprise. The way Chahat stood up trying to defend him had actually given Aryan away. Wisely, Bansal had called Vikram, Aryan and Chahatto Dean’s office excluding Sahil. She wasn’t sure whether Sahil would be willing to share his room with Aryan; but about Aryan she was very sure. A shrewd move would free Chahat and of course, she would give her lofty offer to accommodate Chahat in her room for Chahat’s own protection.

The meeting with Dean was due in five minutes. As a respected professor, she held all the cards now!



Cheers!

Neha

Edited by Loving2Missing2 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#77

There are too many surprises coming from all angles, and all characters are showing their actual personalities! This is an excellent part. Too many doors were left open for future writers to take the plot forward.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

There are too many surprises coming from all angles, and all characters are showing their actual personalities! This is an excellent part. Too many doors were left open for future writers to take the plot forward.

Thank you so much, dear!🤗 Very true that many doors were left open so Genuine thanks to all earlier writers.


Lizzie had mentioned her love triangle was left out; so I brought it back again with slightly different flavour.😃


Further, my cogs were already turning on what could the vicious message be .... So brought that back again.


Gave Sudhakar a blow after his slap from DreamofEndless segment 4.


From segment 5, I took Professor Bansal and opened up another plot-bunny. As Lizzie mentioned, now this can become a murder mystery😉 as Chahat, who was free initially is now the desire of Prof Bansal.


A love triangle. Sahil- Chahat-Aryan; another intricate triangle Chahat- Sahil- Prof Bansal ☢️

Edited by Loving2Missing2 - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#79

Interesting update 👏 Lots of twists. A gay man calling his best friend his girl. So sweet! 🏳️‍🌈 Prof. Bansal really surprised me with her interest in her student. Interesting twists!

Looking forward to the next segment 😊

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Posted: 2 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Loving2Missing2

Thank you so much, dear!🤗 Very true that many doors were left open so Genuine thanks to all earlier writers.


Lizzie had mentioned her love triangle was left out; so I brought it back again with slightly different flavour.😃


A love triangle. Sahil- Chahat-Aryan; another intricate triangle Chahat- Sahil- Prof Bansal ☢️

@Lizzie: You wanted one, you got two 😭

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