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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 6 years ago

Mera bhi res.

I am so damn excited!

Unres

Oh my god! This is so f**king deep. 😳

First of all, Congratulation for the story! I am so happy you are finally back writing. 😳 don't you dare leave this in the middle. 😆

You know I had to google what the title meant. 😆 its mean longing in German. You are freaking genius. 😳

The starting is so powerful! It has such a strong impact.

It blew away my mind.

And I really admire you writing the piece in second person. I could never do that.

The prologue gives a mysterious vibes and just grips you. I couldn't keep this down until I had read the whole thing.

I really like the way of writing.

The girl probably has a really bad past. 🥱

I really do feel for her.

The guy is a jerk. If I am guessing right, he's the one right? 😉😆

And I think there are two going by the banner.

Does the girl suffer from some kind of anxiety attack? Well I guess we will know it soon.

Can you do something Mou? Since you writing this in second person could you give the character names so that readers know who they are reading about. 😳

I love the quote, the monster are not under your bed, its in you one! I am saving this in my mind.

This is so good. Please continue soon.

And this story is going to give a tough competition to all the others. 😉

Btw the banner is beautiful. I can not stop staring at it. The maker must be good, I wanna kiss her hands. 🤣

Okay so now continue soon.

Love you a lot!

And all the best for the contest!

Sam

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How did you get here ? Did you smell it ? 😆
Unres soon or revenge is coming 😈

No I can not smell something new like you. 😆

I stalked you around. Simple. 😆

Have unres my comment. Oh god stop threatening me. 😆

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Liana

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Posted: 6 years ago

Omg!! 😳
This is just wow!! 😳
Please pm me whenever you update :)

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Posted: 6 years ago

Great story telling..asusual..got hooked. Looking forward to read further.

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Hello Mou:)

Haven't seen you writing in a while!

I loved loved loved this... Writing in second person helps you imagine the things as present around you. . . It gets more pictorial :)

The part was so deep it literally gave me mysterious chills, right from the title everything seems so 'the chosen one😆' 🤓

Seeing so many good stories I feel like writing one too... I wish Jan wasn't so busy for me, I'd have given this a shot🤔 Anyways all the best, rock it gurl😎

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