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Guys I have decided to write a new story ,but you know I am sure the story line,tell me the opinion of yours.
1 employee and her boss
2. Reporter and an hero
3.any other (if so tell the idea)

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Gauri washes her face in the cold water for one more time from evening ,she reads the letter for the tenth time SNF again tears filled her eyes making her to cry."You are crying till kiw,please do as per my idea Gauri "says Yamuna, her mother ,she sits in front of the dressing table and cries seeing the wedding dress kept there.she takes it without unwillingness and changes into the dress."Gauri,don't worry ,everything will be fine if our heart is pure as gold "says her mother holding her shoulder.she gets up and sees her mother with tears filled eyes " Ma,what if Anoop and his family comes to know about this,they won't accept us and even that is great insult for daddy we must wait for some times ,may be ",they stops the conversation on hearing the footsteps near the room." Yamuna,is my bahu ready ?"asks Anoop's dadi standing outside the room.
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Anoop shouts at her parents for cheating him along with their daughter."You are have played with my feeling and you gauri,you broke my trust and friendship very easily, how could you imagine to marry your sister's groom, don't you feel ashamed of it ".Gauri stands without answering any of his questions. Anoop's father Pramod pacifies Anoop by holding his shoulder when his mother says" OK Yamuna ,it's time to do the grahpravesh,we are taking our Gauri with us,come on Gauri ".Anoop sees his mother with anger and walks out of the house without talking to anyone.Anoop tries to call his lover and Gauri's elder sister to ask her his doubts and question.she switches the phone off seeing his number in display. Ganga thinks" I know he is going to fight with me for my decision but I don't care for it anymore,".Gauri sits with pramod and his family in the car and they goes towards her in laws house .she sees Anoop's face with worry and fear thinking about her
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Three months later,Anoop comes out of the bedroom dressed in a pink shirt and blue jeans and he searches for someone all over the house .Gauri comes out of the kitchen laughing along with Sumithra and Manisha (Anoop's mother and Kaki ).They smiles seeing him there very soon."Are you going somewhere Anoop?"asks Manisha while serving him the breakfast in his plate,she goes inside on hearing some noise .Anoop sees Gauri without eating the food and says"Yes,today Ganga is coming from London for a week and I am going to meet her ". Gauri smiles bitterly for it and walks away without yelling anything or opposing him.He sees her with surprise .he expected her to behave very rudely .Gauri locks the room and sits in the bed thinking about the words of Anoop for a moment.she cries thinking of the life she is leading .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start ..
Why ganga didn't marry Anoop?
update soon...
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"I love you Ganga", he hugs her tightly in the airport with happiness,they both get into the car .Anoop sees her thinking something without talking with him .he asks" I am going to die because my gf is not at all talking to me with love ",Ganga hold his mouth from talking ,she caress his face and says" Love you so much,I know you will come to meet me,I know you more than anyone,how is chotu".in home,Gauri washes her face to hide the tears from the face. She hears her phone ringing loudly and picks it with some hesitation on seeing the number of Anoop in the display.She cries on hearing her sister's voice from the other side .Anoop asks the matter to Ganga,she signs him not to talk."What Gauri,why are you crying,actually I must cry to have a sister like you ?".blames Ganga .she sees her photo with Anoop in wedding custume and tells"Yes di I am very much blessed to have sister like you,who always think about me ,thank for your love and affection but don't ask my affection in return because I don't deserve to be your sister because I don't know to hurt someone",she cuts the call and throws the phone angrily ,the phone breaks into several pieces like Gauri's heart.she sits without any emotion for a while and goes out to ask the servant to clean the room.
"get out or else I would surely slap you hard ,get out your cheap lady" shouts Ganga's father on seeing her in the house.She cries hearing blame and tries to explain when her mom tells"Ganga,you are always like this,you cannkg understand others properly you don't deserve a family ,how could you choose your happiness in our sorrow,I have asked you several times before deciding the marriage ,you always cheat us every time but see your sister " her father hold his hand amd says"she is really very good at everything ,I didn't expect that today my upbringing have gone very wrong and she is right ".Gauri stands in the door on seeing this drama with confusion in her face .Anoop gets shocked on seeing her there.
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Ganga caress Gauri's face and kisses on her forehead with years.she apologises to her for all of her mistakes and asks for forgiveness .she hugs Ganga with love, "Di,when did you r flight reached India,you have told to me before hand ,sorry di for not coming to the airport .I only asked him to take care of you ,did Anoop took good care of you ". Anoop smiles on hearing their sweet conversation in front of the parents. he tries to say something but stops on seeing the reddish face of Ganga.she hold her father's hand with affection and assures him "Don't worry she will be with Anoop,nothing to worry about her ,sorry for talking like this but you must have supported her as usual ".Yamuna hugs Gauri and praises her values of being a good daughter .Ganga sobs sitting in the hotel room when Anoop sees her in pain from a distance.He feels unhappy on seeing her tears.Anoop assures her " Don't worry,this is just temporary ,we will soon go to your house ".She sees him with thankfulness.He walks outside the asks the bearer to bring two coffee to the room . Gauri packs the bags in her room when he enters with a bang.
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"chotu,why did you came there and made a scene infribt of your parents as if we are living very happily,are we living a happy life ?". She smiles in return for all this question." Sorry Anoop,you totally forgot what you said to me in our wedding night,you said that we are real husband and wife outside this four cornered room ,I am just trying to make them believe that all is well between us so that my mom won't feel bad for making the decision in my part,I am just faking as usual in front of them and thanks for calling me as "Chotu" after a long while thanks ".He sees her with a surprising look when Gauri walks out of the room with the cloths in her hand to do ironing work.Dadaji comes home shouting" Chotu,Chotu "kisses Anoop on his forehead.Gauri smiles seeing their bonding together when he shocks on seeing Gauri there.
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dadaji laughs on seeing Gauri there,"Hey this is that little girl,your friend ,isn't it Wow is this our new choti bahu". Gauri smiles and falls on his feet with respect while Anoop feels awful when he tries to leave.Gauri hold his hand signing him not to go."Choti bahu,you must be happy here,but why is your face very much dull,tell me I will solve the problem? "Says Dadaji.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start dear loved all update
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Gauri smiles "No problem to be Sir, sorry Dadaji just a bit head ache ". Dadaji sees through her eyes " Mmm OK OK,noe tell ns about your honey moon plans ",Gauri struggles giving answer to Dadaji on hearing his straight accusation on hearing about her being not happy in her relationship with Anoop ,anoop tries to calm the matter by joking " Dadu please ". while Dadaji stares at Gauri and thinks"Surely Chotu and Gauri is hiding something but how to find the matter without asking them".she sits in the room thinking about the words of dadaji with confusion ," Whether I am happy or not ".she murmurs when Anoop peeps into the room with his purchase bags in his hands .

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