His Epic Journey :) Synopsis and Prologue updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends, I am LakshMi.

I am new to this forum.


And this is my first attempt in writing some serious stuff like this.


It is a story of a 79 year old man, who at his death bed recollects his entire life events...all his happy and sad moments...his entire journey...his love...his children..his family. This venture is also to convey how and how not others, especially elders and old people should be treated.


Hope u like it :)


Scroll down to read Synopsis and Prologue :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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SYNOPSIS :

We all have a story to tell. Why not make it epic? This tale is about the epic journey of Gopu, a very ambitious guy born on 18th June 1936, in Kandanur village, Shivaganga district, India. There were many issues and turbulence in his family, yet he faced them all with a "come what may, I will stay optimistic and strong" attitude. But his father's sudden death turns everything upside down as it sets off a chain of even more disastrous events in his life. Will he recover from this? How? Will he achieve his goals? Who will help him in achieving these?

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Stay tuned to know more :)

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PROLOGUE :

He felt very old and worn out. He served himself the dinner early at 7 p.m. and retired to a room to sleep after finishing the food, as he does always. He laid back there on a bed allotted to him trying to see through the darkness as he couldn't sleep. It was neither the jarring noise of television coming from the living room nor the cacophony of vehicles down the street that caused him discomfort. But it was her voice, her words, her last words that reverberated in his mind after seven long years that breached his peace.

"Promise me you will stay strong. Our family needs you." said Raji, holding Gopu's hand, lying on the hospital bed, as she took her last breath.

He got up from the bed holding his chest. The hospital scene flashed again and again in front of him.

"No. They don't. They don't need me anymore Raji" mumbled Gopu to himself.


Do review without fail pls :) Ur reviews matter a lot to a starter like me :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a good writer you are!
You know there are some writers whose writing speaks up of their ease and love for it.I seriously found it in your story.Especially when you wrote it in your comfort zone,English(Isnt it?)
That was a nice opening.Exactly what brings you to the story,nothing unnecessary.I wish I would learn such narrow things from you and my Bhabhi.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a unique concept! Can't wait for the story to progress!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Will love to read more
Continue soon and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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my lakshmi ur concept is awesome

this sounds soo interesting

I would luv to read it further

now update it as soon as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lakshmi this is interesting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good concept Lakshmi continue. Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful concept Lakshmi!
Really looking forward to read some beautiful moments in his life :)

Do continue!

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