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panchan

@panchan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

This piece! Gosh, truly intriguing. Kaun kehra tha ki you're not good at writing -_- You're not good at it, you're amazing at it! The feels, the flow, the story, it's so different. It's good to read a refreshing and unique story like this. And yeah, i never even thought about this twist, truly unexpected. Girl, you're great at this. Please do continue it <33

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Zaara

@zaaratq

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

^^unreserved! stop hiding your talents! 😡

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Madhura😲

I had no freaking idea that you are into writing too!

So damn good this piece is.

And I shall act like fan & proudly state that reading a piece solely focusing Omkara feels so good as we are getting so less of him onscreen.

Coming to the story, I really like the theme & the flow with which it proceeds, plus it holds one good message.

The scenic description & the turmoil in Om's heart just rhyme with one other- so well.

The twist was unexpected. It kinda felt like Ishana too at one point. * I can talk silly, na?* 😆

And yes, you must continue writing.

Unaware of your many talents- in search mode,

-Ayushi

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WhiteNoise

@WhiteNoise

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Woah!!
Bro,that was certainly a well written piece.
Its been a long time since I've actually read something on Omie.I particularly liked Ms. Anon, her persona was quite close to the one I expected for a FL.Not that we got what we wanted.
Twist was good though I sensed something but that turned the whole story in180.And I like twists😆

Madhu just write another one!!!

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