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saishree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: aanvi98
Mili, whenever i collid with ur profile, i keep staring and staring forgetting everything😆 ur siggy is lyk a distractor!! Same goes wid shru's siggy😆

right anu! seriously mili me too!😆

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Aanvi and Saishree,you wont believe I do it too!😆
I think the KashiArsh/ShaJa one is one of the best edits I ever made.

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Mili

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

To all my readers,I know it got a real chaos with so many characters and I intend to sort it out.But it will take time to make an appro post for all the characters.
Till then just remember this,
Associate the actors to the characters named in bracket.
Main leads:-
Kshitija- Aaditya(SiRa)
Shrijeeta-Rohan(LakshMila)
Manasvini-Yash(BharMa)
Parallel leads:-
Kashi-Arsh(ArDi)
Shalviyaa-Harsh(ShatKirti)
Cameo roles:-
Shubhi-Rishi(Shanta and her husband from SKR)
Adhyatm-Shiksha(KrishMi/KrishMa)
Families:-
Vats(Mithila+MB people)
Kaushik(Ayodhaya)

Hope this helps a lil!
I'll post the next chap soon and not to mess up it will mark the starting of Aaditya-Kshitija's story.

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Aanvi and Saishree,you wont believe I do it too!😆
I think the KashiArsh/ShaJa one is one of the best edits I ever made.

Lol 😆 teach me to edit such things man srsly i am so bad at editing😆

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aanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Thank god mili! It got sort out😆 but i need pictures😉 i need to stare at them for good imagination😆

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

The cast is too much 😆

Change the disclaimer font size pls.. Am telling u for the third time 😆

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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Prologue for kaushiks was nice. Enjoyed reading it 😃

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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Episode 4~Perception it is

A new morning,a brighter one!What comes with it,the lightness from yesterday and the excitement of the time that will follow.Morning have always been beautiful for Kshitija.Her lips curved its most natural,the chirping of birds,the prayer chants and the aroma of tea made it more delightful at her balcony.
Life has changed a little since this one year,becoming more merrier.Kshitija has always felt peace that she had moved on from her childhood.But reason for the extra happiness was the new phase life has put her into.Aaditya Kaushik!A stranger an year before now meant most of her world.An affection,a feeling she has never witnessed before.It was their simple silent affair,being the calm and composed both of them were.Dates that do with eyelocks,passion that was tenderness and gestures were the little blushes,such couple were Kshitija and Aaditya.
Kshitija had to collect everything today because she knew today at all,she would have to tell this to Shiksha Bhabhi.Someone who would be perfect to hear the situation and suggest the right without judging.

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"Its raining"Adhyatm cheered,
"And that too all of a sudden"Arsh told,quite sad.

"So what does it do to you,Arsh?"Mani asked.
"Dont tell me you wanted to calculate the distance from that cloud to the sun"she continued teasing her cousin.

Kashi was here,at Vats House,most probably being a special guest and more like a family.

This remark on Arsh made her giggle heartedly.

"Who knows maybe she thinks something for me too"whispered a happy Arsh to himself.

"Where is Shrijeeta?"Adhyatm asked,

"Dada,she was sent to fetch something from market.Might have probably returned by now"Arsh told.

"Dada,its raining,where do you think Shrijeets must be"Kashi told with a sheepish smile on her face,'her stupid bestie'she thought.

Adhyatm now knew,Shrijeeta would be there on the terrace enjoying the rain to her own.
He glanced at her from the stairs and returned back letting her favourite cousin sister enjoy her way,smiling.

Shrijeeta is different,he always thought.Something she has in herself ,she herself doesnt know.Time would live to write her story,making her a unique character,noticed-unnoticed,doesnt matter.Because she doesnt take anything too seriously except her bond with them,she has always been doing whatever she felt right,be it whatever.She is passsionate in love and relations but at the same time,ambitious enough to tell the world her ideas.She has something that creates wide admiration for her.

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"Now spill"Shiksha ordered Kshitija,who blushed a little in turn.Shiksha knew what was with her,there was someone.So she had been this understanding to ask Kshitija to decide when to inform her about this.Kshitija too,thought it right to have her view,she was trustworthy and elder.
"Dont worry girl!I'll tell you the right time to inform it to the family but before..."
"Okay okay Bhabhi,it goes like this"

Memories take her away

An year before...
*flashback*
Delhi

4 years in medicine made Kshitija too clear with her views in life.A view to take everything happily,a view that perceives the world in a different way.
Kshitija has thoroughly enjoyed her professional studies and now was readying herself to step up on her own.
This college was never the everything for her,the beginning was the hardest.It started with not so nicer people,biased professors,rude roommates but at the end it was Kshitija who made her way.
Books have always been there for her and her family!Shrijeeta and Kshitija used to talk everynight without fail.Kshitija would tell her everything she would come across and Shrijeeta would ask her overall experience.Other than that Kshitija did not have close friends,yet a lot of well wishers.
Until she met one...
A pretty girl visited the hostel,the hostel had no specific classification and Kshitija came to know that the room next to her would be alloted to a visiting research student.
The last one who stayed there, wasnt any humble to be liked by the girl.
But this girl looked smart and cheerful enough,full of pride and courage.She seemed to have been from a very good family and yes she was too.
Upon entering she found no one in the veranda except an intern,her neighbour hosteller.She walked upto Kshitija.
"Excuse me"
Kshitija turned out to find her smiling,
"Hello,I am the new research..."

Strange it is,strangers have never been this polite,Kshitija thought impressed.So,she replied..
"Oh yes we have been informed!Welcome,Dr..."

"Shubhi,Shubhi Kaushik!You can call me Di,dont be so formal,we have to be together for this one year"Shubhi said happily make Kshitija laugh.

"Okay,Shubhi Di!I am Kshitija Vats"

"Dr.Kshitija Vats,now I suppose"

"Correct you are Di!"

And thus Kshitija too got an opportunity to be a younger sister to someone.Soon,Shubhi and Kshitija became really close friends.
After finishing her schedule,Kshitija would run to Shubhi's room and they both would spent time watching T.V,shopping,exploring and mostly chatting all day along.
"Di I am here"Kshitija opened the door excitedly.
"Come in Shiti"
Both of them sat on the bed.

"You're the younger sister I always wished to have Kshiti"Shubhi told.
"You are the elder one to me Di!Back at my home I have got a younger sister and two other younger cousin sisters"

"Wow!You girls must always be having a lot of fun back at home"

"Yes!"Kshitija sighed at her moments with her sisters.

"So that was your younger sister who calls you everyday?I heard your convo and to admit she's such a fun loving girl"
"Shrijeeta!She is...she's totally a tornado!And when she's with my cousin Manasvini,they are worse"

Shubhi laughed at this.

"What about your family Di?"

"Oh mine is just a little different.Its Mom,Dad,me and my younger brother.Then both my aunts.And finally my dear brother cousins.
I love the four of them so very much"
Shubhi spoke.

"Hmm"Kshitija responded.

Shrijeeta had a habit of running away to her sisters hostel whenever she missed her much.The hostel too gets vibrant upon her arrival.There when she sat singing, playing her guitar.Kshitija and her friends used to crowd by the staircase.

This was the first time Shrijeeta would be meeting Shubhi.

"I dont know but why do you always say your sister is unlike you.I mean,you both are same in nature,quiet,calm and a little shy!"

"Iam not shy Di!And Shrijeeta is not at all"Kshitija pouted.

"No,I met her!She hardly talks"

"You met her particularly,and was a stranger to her!Wait and Watch with time.."

"Ah!I would love to meet someone bubbly and chirpish,just like me"

And Kshitija knew it right.
It all started with teasing Kshitija that both Shubhi and Shrijeeta began to talk,enjoying each others company which was ofcourse,something not very pleasing for Kshitija.
She handled two utter crazy people,maddening around her.
The night,Shrijeeta was busy in a pillow fight with Shubhi.And Kshitija sat in between them enjoying the chaos.
The next evening they went for an outing,having lots of plans.
Shubhi became so very fond of Shrijeeta that even after she left,they used to exchange words through the phone.
And in this way,Shubhi also became familiar to Mani and Shaalu.
She had much fun,which she missed,though being the only pampered girl in her family.

"Di"
"Yes Shiti!"
"You called"
"Yes,I was just telling you that..."
"That?"
"I am getting engaged next monday"Shubhi told casually,unlike with the zeal every young bride to be has.Kshitija jumped with excitement but also noticed Shubhi's expressions,anxious she must be,she thought!

"Oh my god!You are telling me such a big thing,that too now.Very congratulations!I am really happy for you"
Shubhi got up and hugged her,murmuring "Thankyou Dear"
And felt it with a tear so unusual.

Shubhi was not the one to fall apart from her believes,her liveliness.She had a unique capability to explain herself,a capability to find happiness in everything.Kshitija had always noticed her though she hadnt spent a lot of time with her.Shrijeeta always used to tell Kshitija that wherever Shubhi Di will be,her presence would be enough for things to come up along her way.She had a magic,of turning the worst to the best.She did it here too.

"Arey!In all this,I just forgot to tell you"
"What more?"
"You are seriously invited"
"Seriously...Invited?"
"You have to be there no matter what"
"Okay Di"
"And I have met your sisters,talked to your family!Now its your turn.Meet my brothers and my family!After all,they too must meet with the person I have made so many predictions about!"

Kshitija smiled,something felt special,some bondings unexpressed.How would she know some people would become really important in her life?

"Oh God!Di,what have you told to your family about me?"

"Umm I told my Mom and Aunt about you.Okay,you are just okay,I mean okay in behaviour,okay in looks and okay in studies too!"

"Thats enough"Kshitija giggled.

'Mom,she's one of the best persons I've ever met'Shubhi smiled on remembering her actual description of Kshitija to her mother.

"Okay Di!I should complete the assignments in order to be able to come to your engagement"saying this,she turned back to leave.
"Okay"

"Uhh!Kshitija!wait"
"Yeah"
"You are coming with me,ofcourse you are my responsibility!So just get ready by the sunday morning,Aaditya is coming"

"Who?"

"Aaditya Kaushik,my brother,the one who's into business studies!And ofcuz our younger brother Rohan would follow him to me.They'll pick us up"

"Fine!"Kshitija sighed.

'Aaditya Kaushik'
The name that echoed as a curious wave in her mind.There started an other new wave,full of depth,demanding promises and the ocean being filled of heartly dedication.
The wind flew by her face!

Perception it is,that makes hurdles fragile!

Edited by LakshMila - 9 years ago

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: daydreamers
The cast is too much😆
Change the disclaimer font size pls.. Am telling u for the third time😆

I know lol my imagination is too much 😆
And so are your eyes,no?
I kept the Disclaimer like that intentionally,it looks good 😆

Editing through the system I am currently using will crumble all.