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Posted: 9 years ago
@ Ria, even though I wish for the past to be buried, it can't happen like that. When the whole kangero court happenings along with Whipping has been directly telecasted on National TV channel, there will be numerous attraction for Suman & Sree and that will gives rise to the back story. May be Suman's mother and friends will stand a firm foot and her father may yet again bad mouth her for her ill fate or black sheep to the family's honor and he may even suggest Mr. Varma to expel Suman.
Lets wait and watch how things shape up as Shruthi has the reign in her hand and she can only make the horse drink water or eat the hey. Lets see whether she will make the horse drink wine and horse gram. 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Ria let me tell you one thing. As of now Mahantji and co will get enough in their hands to concentrate on anything else, so they will stay put for sometime while I will proceed with some lighter, beautiful, progressive cum romantic track. The next steps that happen will make them want to get back which will take to the final track intense track .
You can also help me. I am actually searching a good song for ball dance 😆😆. Dheere Dheere se mere zindagi mein aana Aashique is one choice, but def prefer a better one. If you can think of good songs of retro era that is around till 97 that would be good.
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Posted: 9 years ago
One more thing Ria. I had clearly mentioned in first page I had never written the story. I used to tell it in during lunch break during my plus 2 days. It is when I started writing I understood one thing. Telling orally you can omit many things. You just need to maintain basic connectivity of the plot. But when you write the equation changes. You have to keep lot of minor aspects into picture if it has to come good.
So that level of change has happened to the basic story. The detailing. When I was telling the whole story will finish in a week 😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful Shruti ! Just too good .
Your writings bring out the characters so very real in our eyes !
All the incidents come alive like a tv show in. Front of our eyes - the jagratha , the community meeting , the way Sreedhar through reliving the various events in his mind takes the whipping , Maheshwari's pride and strength , suman's break down in front of Bhabhi ...
Hats off for such a good narration .
Loved every bit of the story .
Waiting for the more interesting disclosure that await by the media now !
Thank you .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks a lot Vipraja. Half of my time goes into putting into words, the way I visualize the part. When someone says they are able to feel it, it makes the effort worthwhile.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys do read this news. Truth is stranger than fiction. After reading this you will understand in 1995-1997 period I have shown a much lenient Rajasthan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

Ria, 2 youngers were Sree & Murali. Sudhir was already in the college 😊 and it is just 15/16 years back.


Oh ok.. thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic job Shruthi 👏👏
I expected Sree to withstand the whippings without a problem. His mind being on Suman eased the pain.
Harikishore is now wondering. Good. Let him wonder about Sreedhar, who had fire burning in his eyes.
Vindhya 👏👏 What a woman. She understands marriage. You know, this story is teaching me valuable life lessons that I will be putting to use one day.
I love how Suman realised Sree's pain 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

@Ria let me tell you one thing. As of now Mahantji and co will get enough in their hands to concentrate on anything else, so they will stay put for sometime while I will proceed with some lighter, beautiful, progressive cum romantic track. The next steps that happen will make them want to get back which will take to the final track intense track .

You can also help me. I am actually searching a good song for ball dance 😆😆. Dheere Dheere se mere zindagi mein aana Aashique is one choice, but def prefer a better one. If you can think of good songs of retro era that is around till 97 that would be good.

Wow some cute romance. Waiting for that.. The songs u could use... bahoon ki dharmiya.. ajeeb dasta hain yeh. Tum mile dil khile, tu hi re, do lafzon ki hai dil ki kahani, jawani janeman, do dil mil rahe hai, aaye ho meri zindagi mein

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