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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
hey lovely poem it is❤️
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: shailu123

hey lovely poem it is❤️

keep it up👍🏼


Thank you soo much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: muskancute

Nice...keep it up😊


Thank you...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
collecting them is my fascination
. but shattering has become
. their destination
. how I loathe this longing
. still it is my homecoming


. Tears are soaked
. felling are choked
. still I smile
And try to make
. Every attempt fertile...




These lines areAMAZING
Truly heart touching
I really love poems
Either in hindi or English
I really love creative things
U did an amazing job
Keep posting more dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET

collecting them is my fascination
. but shattering has become
. their destination
. how I loathe this longing
. still it is my homecoming


. Tears are soaked
. felling are choked
. still I smile
And try to make
. Every attempt fertile...





<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">These lines areAMAZING</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Truly heart touching</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">I really love poems</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Either in hindi or English</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">I really love creative things</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">U did an amazing job</font>
<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">Keep posting more dear</font>


Thank you...
N I was not thinking when I wrote
I just go with the flow
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: glitter..girl..


Thank you...
N I was not thinking when I wrote
I just go with the flow

Yeah it happens
What we think what we see inspires us to write a poem
But it's not everybody's cup of coffee
u pulled it in such a beautiful manner 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET


Yeah it happens
What we think what we see inspires us to write a poem
But it's not everybody's cup of coffee
u pulledit in such a beautiful manner👏



Actually I can't write in the simple words...
Like easy or something...
I just can't write
But I can express myself in twisted words n rhymes...
It's just natural...
I tried to write simply but that's not my cup of tea
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: glitter..girl..



Actually I can't write in the simple words...
Like easy or something...
I just can't write
But I can express myself in twisted words n rhymes...
It's just natural...
I tried to write simply but that's not my cup of tea

Ohhh in that sense u r like jo kaam simple ho usey karne mei kya maza
😆
That's soo good yaar

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Thank you soo much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
I should say...
Amazingly done
The last line was nice

AND TRY TO MAKE
EVERY ATTEMPT FERTILE...

enjoyed it...

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