SS: The crystal; Chapter 2 on Pg 16 - Page 13

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Its awesome yaar
read both parts loved it soo much
Well written
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm dear

Originally posted by: priya_21

very nice 😃

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome update dear

loved it

oh, so we have two Veers,that's going to be interesting!

Let's see what the Veer duo does next!

do continu soon

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Pro

Finally you updated and am thrilled to read it

I am loving the story so much😳

Veer is such a naughty boy

You are such a brilliant writer

Update soon

And thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

aww such a cute update
loved it very much
little veer is so adorable
continue soon

Khushi

Originally posted by: madhuharini

fab update👏👏

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

superb the way it written wowww

Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Price Veer is being sent to a village by his father but he doesn't know the exact reason behind that......in the village he meets a little boy whose name also happens to be Veer...😎...the little boy is surprised to find a prince so friendly...👍🏼...When Prince Veer ask for help he readily accepts and thinks he's asking to fight...😛😆...but Prince Veer ask him to show the way to the village head...😉...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Updt aftr long tym.
Love veer, he is so cute.
Superb updt dear.
Updt soo
thnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: Moner_Radio

proteeti :

nice update. went awww at little Veer's adorableness😳 .. ran off to get his bow and arrow only to learn later that royal princes dont fight all the time😆. seems like this kid has got an impulsive nature.. acts first and thinks later. feeling bad for Prince Veer, he's being punished for no fault of his and he doesnt even realize that ! update soon.