SS: The crystal; Chapter 2 on Pg 16 - Page 12

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Chotti read both the parts dear,it was so very awesome dear,loved it 👏👏

Do continue soon😊😊

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Update After a veryyy long time Choti..!! 😊 But anyways, It was a bful update! ❤️ Love The Little Veer And his antics, Adorable! ❤️ How cute of him to come running with a bow and arrow!! 😆😆 Thanx fr pm. Update Soon.

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Radhika 😊

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

loved it awesome update
thanks for pm 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Snehamadhuri

Great update Radhika after a bit long time !😊

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Hey proteeti
grt thought fr ths stry
read the parts nw in a go
u sure has a grt writing potential
awesome

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Heyo proteeti

This is an amazing piece of work👏

Read everything from the prologue

The story is progressing very well and you have penned it down beautifully👏👍🏼

Veer is surely an intriguing character😊

This is particularly a new type of story. I'm loving it😳

Do update soon

Thanks for the PM😃

Originally posted by: KURT15

Nice update Proteeti. 😊 After such a long time too. Loved little Veer. The convo at the start was very intriguing. Waiting for the next part. 😳 😊

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful chapter Radhikerani😃

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

amazing part👏