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This is good. Not just good; it is good sort of good. If only you get what I mean by good, you would understood how much of beauty I spot in this piece.
I found it beautiful, for real. It made me light-headed in a strange way. In a good strange way. It left me with a feel that I'm quite liking.
I told him he's a filter and that I am a sponge, he stayed silent but seemed to understand,
^This particularly made me smile. The metaphor here, generates humour, which releases tension off reader's head. (Hope I don't sound like typical Physician.)
Then the last two lines of the last stanza. They were actually more good than the rest of it.
Through and through, a brilliant piece of poetry. Amazing! 👍🏼
Warmest Regards.
-Aishwarya.
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