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Posted: 10 years ago

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loved it ...interesting story
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: dharshu
hey anu!! Kaisi ho yaar!! I couldn't comment regularly bcoz.. Am in final semesters n hav xtra works!! This comment of urs looks mature yrr!! Doesn't look like comment of a 12 yr old!! After reading ur comment i scrolled back to see whose comment it was.. N was pleasantly shocked to find ur name!! U hav bcum too skilled in English!! Do u remember.. I ve told u dat u il bcum a great fiction writer one day!! Now am damn sure that it would happen!! 😳

aww..I am like ☺️ now... you are soo.. adorable!🤗 love you Ash di!🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Hey Najma, thanks for the pm!

Sorry for the late read...So I've started to read it and had just finished chapter 1...

My first thought was, hmmm...this has nothing to do with saHil 😆...

And then I looked up and saw that I'm at the Writers Corner 😳 😆...

I've never been here so thank you for this. I'm only visiting IF for SaHil at QH forum 😉.

Anyway...back to the story...like I said, just finished chapter 1 and I can say it's a very interesting story so far. Oh...I so love the humor in it 😃. And there is sadness also... I love the siblings bonding and their friend. Her nightmare is scary though.

Alright..will read the next chapter now...

TQ Najma & friend

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Chapter 2...

When I read Sarah died...I was literally 😲...like truly 😲...

Couldn't believe it, I know she's sick, but why so soon...I loved her 😭

Now Matt is on his own...so sad for him 😔

Love Chase man...he's always there for Matt...love their friendship

A sad, but nice chapter 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago

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The harsh reality of life is that once a person is gone, that person is not welcome again. We learnt to cope and live with the loss so much so that the reversal of the loss is not acceptable anymore.

Very true Naaj.. irony of life !! So finally Matt is going to have a human company 😆.. awesome update.. and be regular!! 😉

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sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Chapter 3

A wonderful chapter...

Loved those FB's...

The scene of Matt and Sarah is so emotional 😭

Sarah and Chase are ghosts and they are funny...

And they are a couple now...how I wish that they weren't dead...

Matt saw that they were kissing? That's hilarious 😆

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sahil333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Chapter 4...

I'm glad that Matt has moved on without Sarah...

I'm curious what's next...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sahil333
Hey Najma, thanks for the pm!

Sorry for the late read...So I've started to read it and had just finished chapter 1...

My first thought was, hmmm...this has nothing to do with saHil 😆...

And then I looked up and saw that I'm at the Writers Corner 😳 😆...

I've never been here so thank you for this. I'm only visiting IF for SaHil at QH forum 😉.

Anyway...back to the story...like I said, just finished chapter 1 and I can say it's a very interesting story so far. Oh...I so love the humor in it 😃. And there is sadness also... I love the siblings bonding and their friend. Her nightmare is scary though.

Alright..will read the next chapter now...

TQ Najma & friend

Hey dearie! 🤗

I so love you dear! I read all your comments and you have gone to the extent of commenting Chapter wise! It is so kind of you! To have expressed your thoughts with clarity and amazingly! There is nothing more a writer wants than to be reviewed for stories. ❤️

Humour and sadness. I am going to comment in detail for the other comments too. 😳 Since you took the trouble of commenting in detail, I too am obliged to reply one by one. And I am loving it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: sahil333
Chapter 2...

When I read Sarah died...I was literally 😲...like truly 😲...

Couldn't believe it, I know she's sick, but why so soon...I loved her 😭

Now Matt is on his own...so sad for him 😔

Love Chase man...he's always there for Matt...love their friendship

A sad, but nice chapter 👍🏼

Yes. Sarah died. Well, I can't say, wait and watch.😆 Because you already read the others. 😉

Chase is cool too. We'll see how to explore his character. That my friend would do. She loves Sarah and Chase. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: hemakeerti
The harsh reality of life is that once a person is gone, that person is not welcome again. We learnt to cope and live with the loss so much so that the reversal of the loss is not acceptable anymore.

Very true Naaj.. irony of life !! So finally Matt is going to have a human company 😆.. awesome update.. and be regular!! 😉

Yes. It is a harsh reality. I don't know if you know about this Hindi novel called... let me remember, I think it is called, "Vaapsi" or something. Which means return. It is about this man who returns to his family after like 30 years after working in another town. I haven't read. But it is a nice one. It explores in detail the words in BOLD. Don't worry, our story isn't remotely connected with that. 😆

We will try to be regular. This Jaanu no, always worried about the NEXT update immediately when this one comes up. 😆