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--a.ishu--

@--a.ishu--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Whoa!!! 👏 👏 This is amazing!! Such a carin brother n sister!! Lovely writing najma!! Pls continue soon!! Thnx a lot fa d pm!! 🤗

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sri_ffn

@sri_ffn

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: najma123
Hey, Sri! Well. I am glad you critically reviewed the story... Well. Let US see what we can do about it. Thanks a ton!😉[/DIV]
In fact, if you don't mind, I would like you to review everything I have written. Ahm, I am not really good at first person, and I personally, write third person, but my friend is bomb with personal narrative...😳

I'd love to read it all. Uhm, I kinda don't know how to find it though. Is it possible for you to link me to your stories. Send me a PM? I'll go through them and send you reviews. And also, I could pre-read for you in case you don't have a pre-reader at hand.

-sri

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

nice prologue...with lot of anger and questions

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

1..

Poor sarah... now what is happening to her..
will she survive...

matt is going crazy...

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Akanksha Sinha

@AkankshaENRIQUE

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

interesting and different...👏 👍🏼

bonding between the brother and sister...

i loved them...🤗

aur friend ho to aisa...😳

waiting for the next updates...

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

resh..

by the way the prologue was mind blowing!👏 will read the chapter soon😳

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Amazing concept..
Loved the bonding between the bro-sis duo 😊
It was a little heartbreaking but really well written..
Do continue soon
If possible do pm me plz 😊