Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR
I read ur both chappy
amazingly written
this guy ergh... kick him him on his ass
poor her
update soon
u r an awesome writer
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Originally posted by: devilofevil_KR
I read ur both chappy
amazingly written
this guy ergh... kick him him on his ass
poor her
update soon
u r an awesome writer
OMG, again a superb update by you.. 👏
Oh girl i am loving it.. 😃But I hate this cliffhanger.. 😡Hoping for kiss but I don't it vil happen soon.. 😛Both are equally pissed of with this wedding.. 😆Their phone convo..😆The walk to his cabin, all employees reactions looking at her.. 😆Lillian thrown pen at his forehead.. 😆Loved cabin encounter..😃And the last part "if only..." Ahhh... Wish it would have not stopped here.But as I said in beginning superb update, very well written. 😃Update next part soon. 😊Nice banner. 😊Thanks for PM. 😊-LoveShivani.
Disclaimer: That damn like button isn't working even after I abused it for a good ten minutes!!Okay, now...did I read that right? A dedication...f..for me?? I could swear I died and went to heaven and came back from the dead to review!!*cries like a mess at the overwhelming thought**and cries again(happy tears of course!)**and cries some more**finally decides not to scare the little one with the sight of a swollen red nose and puffy teary eyes**sobs* Too much emotions just curled up in me little one! I can't believe that this chapter was scribbled for me! Oh my...I feel so celeb all of a sudden! *fans herself and immediately the inner goddess sits on mighty throne overlooking her subjects*Okay done with the melodrama! Woah...woah and WOAH!!! Is this Lillian girl even for real?? I mean slipping out on little details of previous day is cool but to slip on the fact that you were married a few hours ago...how come that's possible? Oh I get it! It must be the "crazy genes". So its pretty safe to admit I have Sheldon's brain too! HOLY MOTHER OF HEN I DO!!!Sorry I lost again! So finally our crazy descendant' wakes up and dresses herself( Thank the dear lord at that, for a part of me thought she'd go out looking like zombie bride only to make her husband have a heart attack and die!) Mint-lace-dress; I'm impressed with her fashion sense, although I should confess Lilly could have given her bun a miss. You let that whole I-flip-my-hair-to-show-I-rock attitude sink in! No worries we can have that later on.So finally into the Satan's Lair. You know if the Satan happens to be this good looking and this utterly rich...one can actually learn to live with all of that. Me thinks so! And by God what and entrance did our newly wed bride made! Seriously Sanaya? She threw a pen at Blake's head? I am really into that other side of the coin, what if she had thrown that pen holder at his face? What if?And what was that? Married for less than a day and they already argue like bickering old couples?Wow! That's a pretty smooth transition...way to go Aspen's. But must also speak that the outside scene would be another interesting watch! I mean when your boss gets married and reports immediately back on work, only to have his wife report to him, looking all sexy to have a hissed tone argument...that should do enough to have the employees entertained for whole day long!! I wonder what they would be whispering in hushed tone!!And OH EM GEE!!!!! Were they that close?? Like close, close? Oh mama...I can't really wait to know what happens after all of this...*gesturing to all of Blake and Lilly* Sanaya. You've. Got. To. Continue. It. Soon.But before that you had exams, right? Listen girl better pay attention to your mid-sems. They are real pain in the arse! You better score well otherwise who knows your mom would turn on her crazy genes and get you married to a Blake look-a-like! Although you'd be happy I presume. Don't tell me that this I-am-not-going-to-study is an open gateway to finding a real life Blake Aspen!Geez I've almost written an essay!!P.S. Did I tell you that I am reminded of Jamie Dornan every single time that I think of Blake Aspen!!!~XOXO~
Originally posted by: sandhYA_123
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.IT WAS VERY NYC AND AWESOME UPDATE.BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WHOLE UPDATE.VERY WELL DESCRIBED THE CHARACTER OF BLAKE.LILLY IS AS USUAL AWESOME.LOVES THEIR PART AT OFFICE.LOVES THEIR MOMENTS.LAST PART I LOVE THE MOST.IT SEEMS LILLIAN WILL SOON FALL IN LOVE WITH MR. ARROGANT AS SHE IS GOING TO ATTRACT TOWARDS HIM.UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR.TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
Originally posted by: taarey_ria
Wow! Loved the concept! 😃
Chapter was funny as well as amazing!
But but but the cliffhanger ending😡 😉
Anyway please update soon!!
Thanks for the pm
Please pm me..
Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Wow...brilliant chapter!
Love the way you write...you make it so funny :)Satan's Lair 😆I love how they annoy each otherThe story is getting more interesting :DPlease continue soon!
Totally awesome! Had me utterly enthralled from the onset to finish!
Originally posted by: Rhapsody.
Read the whole story from the start till Satan's Lair and girl, you have me hooked to this story.
Your writing style, is amazing.Lillian's first night was hilariously horrific. Running into a 15 year old pregnant puppy owner, watching a couple kiss, overhear a man shouting at his stalker and seeing her drunk husband come home after a one night stand. *Ouch.*She did really throw a pen at him? Good aim I say. :PAnd it was cruel of you to end the chapter with a cliffhanger. -_-As a repercussion, please update soon.Thanks for the PM.Good job!Cheers,NV.
I am honored that this entry of mine was a runner up in the 2000 word contest. Thank you everyone for the encouragement. Please keep it coming!...
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