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Sanjana

@sanjana.sanju

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow ie an intrestng cnspt and brilliant start, at d begining d pov of ava was written very well, hr pbms, why she chose to b invisible everytg was gud, d emotns when we go through while being stuck in d middle of unknown is really difficult ie nicely written,lvd d way dey bumbd into eachother.. It luks really intresting, m luking forward to read mr.. Thanx fr d pm CuteKittyCat

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Priyanka Saha

@StarBull

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Posted: 11 years ago

nyc updt...

Ava is so depressed...

she face lot of things in her lyf...

and she is tired of shiffting different cities...

this nick will make her lyf lil bit intersting...

love it...

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velvetrose

@velvetrose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great start
Felt bad for ava

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow nice concept :D
Looking forward to know more about them
Sowwy i just saw the story
I will read the chap n comment on it soon

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Ziggy

@Lazygal_Taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Concept as well as d chp is awesome

I loved it a lott

Ava talked so rudely to Nicholas

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Aiman

@princess_tara

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update
it was like i m reading about myself
it was just superb

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

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Posted: 11 years ago

and you never disappoint me whenever I feel like reading something.

You realize your writing skills have flourished so much more! :o

Ilu [<3]

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premlata

@Missu_TR

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Posted: 11 years ago

concept was beautiful ...

love it first chapter ...

Ava life story was interesting ..

update soon and pm me

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing update

poor ava

ava and nicholas' meet was interesting

continue soon

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nycc start...updtt soon... 😊 😊

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