~Apparition~ One Shot - Page 2

Originally posted by: aishu3003

well- written👏

loved ittt😊

I m so glad u liked it Aishu 😃

Intriguing

and I am like what and how ..

You wrote it beautifully and the thing you have with words is amazing

Fab and awesome n much more of that

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

Intriguing

and I am like what and how ..

You wrote it beautifully and the thing you have with words is amazing

Fab and awesome n much more of that

awww...thank u so much Ansah... 🤗
Really means alot to me 😳

I have to agree with Maya here. Your writing has become much more beautiful.

Originally posted by: CavingIn

I have to agree with Maya here. Your writing has become much more beautiful.

So was he living with a ghost who probably transported him to some other place either by killing him or by torturing him or was she simply a jealous lover?

Nice work of mystery Rads.

Love

Nidha

to be honest its open ended interprwt it any way!!
I was thinking of making it supernatural at one point but then thot against it...
no this girl was completely different from her
as d title says its all a dillusions
ghosts of d guys past consumed him...
his greatest nightmare became a reality!!
the murderer ( read serial killer) became d victim!!

Wait what..she kills him? :o
And Maya died before I guess..was it his fault?
Such a nice one shot! Loved reading it. Do write more. ^_^

Preeti <3

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

Wait what..she kills him? :o
And Maya died before I guess..was it his fault?
Such a nice one shot! Loved reading it. Do write more. ^_^

Preeti <3

yup she killed him
and he had killed Lydia 😆 😆
umm thr's no maya in d story

Originally posted by: ..Serendipity..

yup she killed him
and he had killed Lydia 😆 😆
umm thr's no maya in d story

Sorry that was a typing error. I meant Lydia 😆